| Question | What went well? | What could be improved? | What I am going to do to make the improvements |
| 1 (7/9) | Good use of Barthes terminology | Add more information about consumerism | Explore Jean Baudrillard’s work on media culture and consumerism to have a better understanding |
| 2 (20/25) | Good use of knowledge about both CSP | Add more key theorists into answer such as Curran and Seaton and Livingstone and Lunt | Go over industry theorists |
| 3 (19/25) | Good use of social and cultural contexts | Stronger evaluation needed | Link back to the answer, practise structure |
| 4 (20/25) | Good use of rhetorical questions | Make sure to use, audience, industry, rep and language throughout to create a good structure | Analyse over different topics and see which topics require which of the 4 e.g rep, audience, lang and industry. |
Paper 1= 66/84 = A ( 2 more marks to get an A*)
Paper 2 = 66/84 = A ( 2 more marks to get an A*)
NEA= 52/60 = A ( 2 more marks to get an A*)