Mark Calculations + Rewritten Question

To secure an A* overall, I will need to get 72 marks on paper 2.

Figure 1 shows an advertisement for the city of Manchester at Christmas time. 

Analyse how specific signs construct meanings about Christmas in Figure 1 

According to theorists such as Barthes and De Saussure, signs exist in media products to clearly denote meanings to audiences. This can be seen in the Manchester Christmas advert. The snow in the image acts as an indexical figure representing a winter setting as the ‘signified’ of the text. The presence of multiple families, one of which has a small child with them, establishes the ideology that Christmas as a celebration is not limited to specific ages and is instead a very inclusive and mass holiday, especially in an urban area/city like Manchester. The text in the product (which could be interpreted as the dominant signifier) makes the intention of the advert clear – producers hope to attract more people towards the city by having them accept the preferred reading of the text via anchorage, having them believe that “When it comes to Christmas, there’s no place like Manchester”. Iconography related to Christmas is also used with the inclusion of Santa Claus, an immensely popular character that immediately reinforces the periodic setting of the advertisement and likely targets children as an audience for the advert (since Santa is a commercial figure for products aimed at families and young kids). The beaming lights almost create the idea of warmth around Manchester, once again acting as a factor in making the city ‘unique’ in a time period where the country is traditionally cold.  

Mock 2025

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What am i going to do to make the improvements ?
1good understanding of theorists and decoding Figure 1more detailedpractice other unseen
2post-colonial theory theorists around realityresearch and learn
3decoding of scorethe male gaze understandingmind maps of specific topics
4understanding of steve Neales genre theory and questions in responcemore detailed annotations for old town roadwatch video again and make notes
5hyperdermic understaningpost modernist vocabre-visit and learn
6theorists around newspaper effectsonly talk about daily mail(read the question)read newspaper again and make notes
7facts and statsmore development of their audiencesresearch

MOCK analysis

This is a link to my Mock analysis.

QSWWWEBIwhat to do to improve for the real exam.
1learn more on signs and key terms. Learn how to analyse a closed study product.Practice doing closed study questions again and learn more on signs and codes.
2Understanding of the CSP.Need incorporation of figure 1 and more key termsLearn key terms related to the CSP.
3Attempt at using key terms.More detailed on Laura Melvey and how the male gaze links to CSP’s.Look back on previous exams and questions with the male gaze and learn what they typically are actually asking you.
4Understanding of Old Town road and some key terms.Need to write more and learn more about Steve Neale’s theories.Watch Mrs Fisher videos on his theories and other theorist to fully understand concepts
5Understanding of what postmodernism is.Learn the Hypodermic model and needle theoryRead about it. (read to switch up from the videos and a new way to get the content into my head).
6Good understanding of the daily mail and how they use power, as well as links to theories.More detail is needed in order to write more and not to waffle and go on tangentsWatch a video on how to write and structure answers better.
7Understanding of blinded by the lights and who created it and what diversity is.Not to go off on tangents and write about things that are unrelated. Use more facts, I.e data (quantitative and Qualitative)Research specific data on blinded by the lights.

Mock Analysis

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What I’m going to do to make improvements?
1Good use of terminology (semiotic language) Appropriate theorists used
2Good use of knowledge and facts. Great use of economic and political contextRead the question! Missed marks due to miss reading the questionUse a highlighter in the questions to make the key words stand out
3Good use of theorists and good applicationAdd a conclusion Go over more 9 mark practise questions
4Clear structure and good use of terminology. In depth facts and statistics used.more reference to the genre theory, potentially missed marks due to over analysing the close study products and not linking back to the questionsRevisit genre theory. Go over 20 mark questions and see where i’m missing marks. Add a question to give a clear understanding of the unit.
5Good understanding of postmodernist terms. Understand the term implosion. Go over hypodermic model theory and linking it back to a media product.Make revision cards on postmodernist terminology.
6Strong analysis and good understanding of the Daily Mail
7Good understanding of media industries and contributionLearn cultural industry terms by David Hesmondalgh:
o cultural industries
o commodification
o convergence
o diversity
o innovation
o conglomeration
o vertical integration
o cultural imperialism.
Make revision cards on key terms. Go over 20 mark structure.

overall = 66/84

NEA= 42/60

= 71 needed on paper 2 to secure an (A)

Mock Review

Mock Paper 1

Questions  What went well? What could be improved? What I’m going to do to make improvements  
Good use of the specific terms  Be more specific  Better understanding  
Understood small parts of the music video Clear understanding of csp and clear wording Make specific notes for each csp  
Good use of the theorists  Revisit the advert Clearer notes regarding the advert 
Choice of theorist was good  Better understanding of the music video Re watch and make notes, include theorists 
Understood the terminology a fair amount  Key words and models Look over specific models used 
Fairley good understanding of the Daily mail  Understand specific theorists  Go through topics and link with theorists 
Good understanding of how bbl was produced  More terminology Go over key terms  

Mock Paper 2

QuestionWhat went well?What could be improved ?What I’m going to do to make improvements  
1Understood the definition of the key words and was able to put them to use in the answeradd more theorists ,more descriptive and specific on structuralism Revisit structuralism theory and theorist behind the theory
2Good use of theorists More understanding of Lupin and The ResponderGo over the csp’s and make important notes for each topic
3Apply more knowledge and understanding of what I am writing Revisit Horizon and Sims free play 
4Not enough evidence to support my argument 
write more
Past papers and specific past questions on each topic 

Paper 1 – 4 marks for target grade Paper 2 – 2 marks for target grade

Media Language
Barthes- Semiotics
Todorv- Narratology
Strauss- Structuralism
Neale- Genre
Baudrillard- Post-Modernism
Media Representation’s
Gauntlett- Identity
Van Zoonen- Feminist
Hooks- Intersectionality
Butler- Gender Performativity
Gilroy- Ethnicity & Post-Colonial
Hall- Representation
Media Audiences
Shirky- End Of Audience
Jenkins- Fandom
Gerbner- Cultivation
Bandura- Media Effects
Hall–Reception
Media Industries
Hesmondhalgh- Cultural Industries
Livingstone & Lunt- Regulation
Curran & Seaton- Power & Media

paper 1 mock reflection

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What I am going to do to make the improvements
1 8/8How different signs create the meanings of Christmas 
2 9/12good knowledge on economic ad political contexts

used theorists
 focus more on the question

use more specific terminology
 do more past papers on how different economic and political contexts influence different types of media

revise ghost town
3 8/9linked how feminist theorists relate to CSPswrite a more insightful conclusion to my point revise the CSP in detail- create a mind map of key words, theorists and context
4 13/20good conclusion of the reliability of genre theory  focus on the different aspects of Neale’s theory on genre

more rounded judgements
 revise specific theorists into more detail
5 2/6 learn the hypodermic needle theory 
6 5/9 okay knowledge of the daily mail know the contemporary and social cultural contexts and how newspapers include them

use more specific terminology
 
7 11/20 good knowledge about diversity in film industry know more about the industry

no stats or facts

link media theorists
 revise the CSP industry

know more facts and stats

revise theorists to link to this

Mock Analysis (Paper 1)

Exam Reflection:

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What I am going to do to make the improvements
1 Clear and good structure of theoretical framework.  Have a more consistent specific approach.  Reinforce ideas.
2 Good memory of ghost town. Should have read the question better. Take more time reading questions.
3 Good theory. Better conclusion. Practise questions.
4 Clear structure of multiple theory’s. More
terminology.  
 Revise key terms.
5 Clear and consistent. Postmodernism. Go over postmodernism terms.
6 Very clear and consistent.  Neaten my writing. Keep revising newspapers.
7 Good understanding.  More key terms. Look over key terms.

Mock Paper 1 review

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What am I going to do to make improvements?
1Talked about the correct signs.I would need to explain more about how the signs like to the question and use more terminology.Revise media terminology and put them in context.
2Good knowledge of ghost townMore analysisLook at Ghost Town more.
3Good background knowledge of ScoreAdd a conclusion.Practice questions.
4Good understanding of terminologyCreate a better structure for my answer.Review essays and create plans.
5Fairly good understanding of terminologyExplained my answer betterMake notes on the terminology including examples.
6Good understanding of Daily Mail.Should have wrote moreI could develop my notes on The Daily Mail.
7Good understanding of how blinded by the light was produced and distributed.I should have created a better flow between my paragraphs and wrote more.I could do this by practice questions.

Reflection of Mock 1

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What I am going to do to make the improvements
1Use of subject specific terminology
throughout.
usage of theoretical framework
  A Consistent highly appropriate use of subject specific
terminology throughout
more usage of theoretical framework
More detailed analysis of product
 Study semiotic and theories that explore semiotics,
Roland Barthes.
Do past questions
Explore more theorists that talk or contribute to semiotics
2 Excellent knowledge and understanding of the influences
of the economic and political contexts on media products
A good use of appropriate terminology
a good understanding of theoretical framework
 A better understanding of terminology and theoretical framework  Do past questions that explore ghost town and revise all the contexts
3 A good analysis of the advert.
an excellent judgments and conclusions.
A detailed analysis of the advert
 The analysis and theory applied to the advert. Analysis of advert could’ve been more in depth.
More theoretical terms applied to advert.
 Do more practice questions on Advert. Explore more theoretical terms targeted towards the advert. Explore more types of context of the advert.
4 Good use of theoretical framework.
Application of knowledge and understanding creates a frame for the genre theory.
 A more in depth application of genre theory.
Exploring a minor group of theorists that also contribute or explore genre.
A more consistent use of terminology
 Practice questions, Revise the theory.
Maybe use some quotes from theorist to support the argument. Evidence! Know the terms shown in the question in more depth, explore those terms.
5Good knowledge of postmodernism and the technological terms applied to the theory. good knowledge o the hypodermic needle theory  A better understanding of postmodernism terms and theoretical framework.
A better understanding of the hypodermic needle theory and an excellent and accurate example of the theory.
 Practice questions. Research about the hypodermic model and examples. Understand postmodernism terms and how to apply them
6 A good usage of technological terms and theory. An excellent contextual usage.
A good usage of social and cultural contexts to support argument

 lack of talk about daily mails succession which could be used to support argument.
Apply more theory knowledge
 Do more research on the contexts behind the daily mail. Research and revise theory and theorist that you can apply to daily mail.
Do practice questions!
7 A good understanding of diversity in production and application of theoretical framework.
Frequent evaluation of argument.
 A better understanding of production and distribution and theories behind it. More context. More knowledge of the production of the film. A better judgement and arguments to support my essay. A better usage of terminology.  Practice questions.
Research more context about the movie.
Research more about the production and distribution of the film.
Research how the film maintained its diversity in distributions and production. Find arguments to support and deny statement.

Exam Reflection – paper 1

Monday 10th March 2025

  • Secured target grade – 50/84 – grade C
  • 1 mark off grade B (51/84), 11 marks off grade A (61/84)
  • To achieve a higher grade, improve on 20 markers with more knowledge and application on close study products. E.g. Ghost Town – apply more context, Blinded by the Light – more understanding in production and distribution.