Mock Feedback Tasks

Calculate what you need to get to secure your target grade (this link may help you)

QuestionsWhat went well?What could be improved?What I am going to do to make the improvements
1I understood how to analyse signs and constructsProvide more information about signifiers and the key theoryPractice analysing unseen products and go over signifiers again
2I knew enough information about my CSPsI must try to refer to the unseen product and not avoid itPractice essay questions similar to this one with a CSP and unseen product
3I knew quite a bit about Score and Mulvey’s male gaze theoryInclude more theories such as bell hooks’ intersectionalityGo over the feminism topic again
4I understood the question and Neale’s theoryUse more key words and provide more theoriesGo over theories that could be relevant to this question and rewrite it
5I understood the key terms and what the hypodermic needle theory wasMake sure to think more before answering Keep revising and include the key words in some essay questions
6I understood the question and had enough information about newspapersInclude a variety of key words in my answersRe-visit key words from each topic
7I understood the question and knew quite a bit about the media industries topicCould have provided more information and key wordsRe-visit the topic and study key words

Identify how many marks you need to secure your target grade.

    I had gotten 60/84=B, B=51 and A=61, my target grade is a B

    Calculate how you could achieve the overall mark that you are aiming for as your target. In other words, identify the answers that needed a higher score to secure your target grade

    Questions 2, 4 & 7

    Rewrite those questions using your notes and the mark scheme

    -In Progress-

    Question 2:

    Question 7:

        Complete task 1 on page 4 and post this into a new post on your blog.

          Briefly look at pages 5-14 – these pages (and most of the conference) looked at representation and advertising, so there may be something there that will help you.

            Briefly look at pages 15-18 (this is something that we will come back to)

            Briefly look at 19-20 – this is about Ghost Town

              Critical Theory & The Theoretical Framework.

              Media LanguageMedia Representations Media AudiencesMedia Industries
              Barthes – SemioticsButler – Gender Performativity Hall – Reception Hesmondalgh – Cultural Industries
              Strauss – Structuralism Stuart Hall – Representation Shirky – End Of Audience Curran and Seaton – Power & media
              Neale – GenreBell Hooks – Intersectionality Jenkins – FandomLivingstone & Lunt – Regulation
              Todorov -NarratologyGilroy – Ethnicity & Post- colonialBandura – Media Effects
              Baudrillard – Post ModernismVan Zoonen – FeministGerbner – Cultivation
              Gauntlett – Identity

              Mock Essay Re-Write

              Q1.  The Father Christmas is fairly crudely constituted (being iconic with low motivation) by colour, styling, positioning to offer instant recognition, reassurance, benevolence, a warm welcome and a clear focus. The setting further suggests an urban, business-oriented, consumerist Christmas where there is warmth here but nothing particularly spiritual unless the audience identifies a star in the east among the white spots in the sky (which may be stars or snow and add either way to the manufactured ‘magic’). The words provide anchorage through a tagline (“when it comes to Christmas, there’s no place like…Manchester”). This stating of Christmas then sharpens up the snow-covered iconic buildings which add relevance and a familiar Christmas aesthetic. It also draws focus to the pretty lights which draw attention to what most will recognise as a German or continental or merely generic Christmas market.  

              Q2.  This city scape is The Public Sphere, iconic buildings, the central shopping area, an economic centre: the commercial heart: it is dark and mysterious also ‘promising’. The representation here may be seen as dangerously bland, as if we are observing a ‘natural’ scene, a kind of Capitalist Realism. Equally it may be seen as ‘gorgeous’: glamour and spectacle this is a classic Barthesian myth, a deliberate confusion of History and Nature: we are to imagine this is what cities are like rather than this is how cities have developed. Additionally, this is a representation of the city as a ‘resort’: a location for consumerist adventure: Christmas as a spending spree with Manchester as a temporary materialist theme park, the political here is disguised as if its meaning came from just how things are. 

              Ghost Town is more overtly political, a conscious reproach to Thatcher’s Britain. A booming City and Southeast juxtaposed with the post-industrial collapse of the economy everywhere else drew up lines of opposition across the 1980s. The video provides a guided tour of deprivation anchored by a literate protest lyric and there is also a political message in the multi-racial composition of the band in a Britain beset by the mobilisation of the hard right. Punk had provided access to expression to the disenfranchised and prompted a new kind of political pop that was articulate and working class. 

              Task 1

              Wednesday 12th March 2025

              LanguageRepresentationAudiencesIndustries
              Roland Barthes – SemioticsDavid Gauntlett – Identity theoryGeorge Gerbner – Cultivation theoryDavid Hesmondalgh – media is a risky industry
              Levi-Strauss – StructuralismJudith Butler – Gender performativityClay Shirky – end of audienceCurran and Seaton – power media
              Todorov – Narratologybell hooks – intersectionalityHenry Jenkins – fandom Livingstone and Lunt – Regulation
              Steve Neale – genre theoryPaul Gilroy – ethnicity and post-colonialismAlbert Bandura – media effects
              Jean Baudrillard – Post-modernismVan Zoonen – Feminist theoryStuart Hall – Reception theory
              Stuart Hall – representation theory

              Wednesday task – the theoretical framework

              MEDIA LANGUAGEMEDIA REPRESENTATIONS
              – Barthes (Semiotics)
              – Strauss (Structuralism)
              – Todorov (Narratology)
              – Neale (Genre)
              – Baudrillard (Post-Modernism)
              – Gauntlet (identity)
              – Butler (Gender performativity)
              – hooks (Intersectionality)
              – Gilroy (Ethnicity & Post-Colonialism)
              – Van Zoonen (Feminist)
              – Hall (Representation)
              MEDIA AUDIENCESMEDIA INDUSTRIES
              – Gerbner (Cultivation)
              – Hall (Reception)
              – Shirky (End of Audience)
              – Jenkins (Fandom)
              – Bandura (Media Effects)
              – Hesmondalgh (Cultural Industries)
              – Curran & Seaton (Power & Media)
              – Livingstone & Lunt (Regulation)

              MEDIA WORK

              MONDAY WORK.

              TUESDAY WORK.

              QUESTION 1:

              • The Father Christmas is fairly crudely constituted (being iconic with low
                motivation) by colour, styling, positioning to offer instant recognition,
                reassurance, benevolence, a warm welcome and a clear focus.
              • Here is signification at four levels: reference (denotation), association
                (connotation), myth and ideology.
              • The setting suggests an urban, business-oriented, consumerist Christmas.
                There is warmth here but nothing particularly spiritual unless the audience
                identifies a star in the east among the white spots in the sky (which may be
                stars or snow and add either way to the manufactured ‘magic’).
              • The words provide anchorage through a tag-line (“when it comes to
                Christmas, there’s no place like…Manchester”).
              • This stating of Christmas then sharpens up the snow-covered iconic
                buildings which add relevance and a familiar Christmas aesthetic.
              • It also draws focus to the pretty lights which draw attention to what most will
                recognise as a German or continental or merely generic Christmas market.
              • There is a semiotic vocabulary for those who want to use it: paradigm,
                syntagm, icon/index/symbol, denotation/connotation/myth/ideology.
                Equally it is appropriate to respond out of the language of composition and
                framing (size of shot, camera angle)

              QUESTION 3:

              the hybrid identity of this text

              • the Protest element which has reference to the sixties but also through
                Maya Angelou (“the caged bird sings for freedom”) to Billie Holiday
                (“southern trees we hung from”)
              • the associations of the song and images with Hip Hop and Rap
              • there is also a documentary element in both style (cinema verité: black and
                white film, realistic location, element of historical accuracy) and lineage: the
                song and video are both connected with the award-winning documentary
                The 13th (about the 13th amendment)
              • if genres are ‘cultural categories’, produced with particular discursive
                practices, then they are not found in texts but are subject to the cultural
                readings of media industries, audiences and historical contexts. The
                discourses here are political, cultural and connected to the moment (eg
                Black Lives Matter)

              QUESTION 5:

              Briefly explain the ‘hypodermic needle’ theory.

              • impact of TV violence
              • decline of moral standards
              • drug misuse
              • consumerism
              • impact of texting on literacy.

              Questions and how they should be answered.

              Q1.  Three sets of signs are potentially useful (but this is only 8 marks of work):
              the signs that constitute the Father Christmas, the signs that combine as
              words to provide anchorage and the signs that draw significance from this
              anchored context.

              The Father Christmas is fairly crudely constituted (being iconic with low
              motivation) by colour, styling, positioning to offer instant recognition,
              reassurance, benevolence, a warm welcome and a clear focus.

              Here is signification at four levels: reference (denotation), association
              (connotation), myth and ideology.

              The setting suggests an urban, business-oriented, consumerist Christmas.
              There is warmth here but nothing particularly spiritual unless the audience
              identifies a star in the east among the white spots in the sky (which may be
              stars or snow and add either way to the manufactured ‘magic’).

              The words provide anchorage through a tag-line (“when it comes to
              Christmas, there’s no place like…Manchester”).

              Q5. Demonstrate knowledge of the theoretical framework of media

              Examples might include:

              • impact of TV violence
              • decline of moral standards
              • drug misuse
              • consumerism
              • impact of texting on literacy.

              Q7. how media organisations maintain, including through marketing, varieties of
              audiences nationally and globally

              processes of production, distribution and circulation by organisations,
              groups and individuals in a global context

              the relationship of recent technological change and media production,
              distribution and circulation

              the significance of economic factors, including commercial and not-for-profit
              public funding, to media industries and their products

              the impact of ‘new’ digital technologies on media regulation, including the
              role of individual producers

              how processes of production, distribution and circulation shape media
              products

              cultural industries as summarised by Hesmondhalgh:
              o cultural industries
              o commodification
              o convergence
              o diversity
              o innovation
              o conglomeration
              o vertical integration
              o cultural imperialism.