| Questions | What went well? | What could be improved? | What I am going to do to make the improvements |
| 1 | Use of subject specific terminology throughout. usage of theoretical framework | A Consistent highly appropriate use of subject specific terminology throughout more usage of theoretical framework More detailed analysis of product | Study semiotic and theories that explore semiotics, Roland Barthes. Do past questions Explore more theorists that talk or contribute to semiotics |
| 2 | Excellent knowledge and understanding of the influences of the economic and political contexts on media products A good use of appropriate terminology a good understanding of theoretical framework | A better understanding of terminology and theoretical framework | Do past questions that explore ghost town and revise all the contexts |
| 3 | A good analysis of the advert. an excellent judgments and conclusions. A detailed analysis of the advert | The analysis and theory applied to the advert. Analysis of advert could’ve been more in depth. More theoretical terms applied to advert. | Do more practice questions on Advert. Explore more theoretical terms targeted towards the advert. Explore more types of context of the advert. |
| 4 | Good use of theoretical framework. Application of knowledge and understanding creates a frame for the genre theory. | A more in depth application of genre theory. Exploring a minor group of theorists that also contribute or explore genre. A more consistent use of terminology | Practice questions, Revise the theory. Maybe use some quotes from theorist to support the argument. Evidence! Know the terms shown in the question in more depth, explore those terms. |
| 5 | Good knowledge of postmodernism and the technological terms applied to the theory. good knowledge o the hypodermic needle theory | A better understanding of postmodernism terms and theoretical framework. A better understanding of the hypodermic needle theory and an excellent and accurate example of the theory. | Practice questions. Research about the hypodermic model and examples. Understand postmodernism terms and how to apply them |
| 6 | A good usage of technological terms and theory. An excellent contextual usage. A good usage of social and cultural contexts to support argument | lack of talk about daily mails succession which could be used to support argument. Apply more theory knowledge | Do more research on the contexts behind the daily mail. Research and revise theory and theorist that you can apply to daily mail. Do practice questions! |
| 7 | A good understanding of diversity in production and application of theoretical framework. Frequent evaluation of argument. | A better understanding of production and distribution and theories behind it. More context. More knowledge of the production of the film. A better judgement and arguments to support my essay. A better usage of terminology. | Practice questions. Research more context about the movie. Research more about the production and distribution of the film. Research how the film maintained its diversity in distributions and production. Find arguments to support and deny statement. |
