Summer Task evaluation

  1. I wrote my summer task as if it were for a local mechanics news/magazine, only really for people in Jersey that enjoy working with vehicles. I also wrote it to learn more about someone that I’m slowly becoming good friends with so that I can relate and speak to him about his past and current projects.
  2. Personally I based my project upon a online newspaper style, trying to use a bit of colour to grab attention when needed. I put the most important info at the top to keep the reader engaged and the less important info near the bottom. I also used two photos to show off Jerzy’s portfolio but also include one of the newspapers conversation topics, his bike(s).
  3. I made my summer work off of the idea of “supporting” as it supports the view and wanting of people in the local area helping out the community and those who don’t know as much. For example a local lesser known company could produce and sell these pieces. In addition to that I displayed Juicy as a positive character.
  4. A narrow, niche company that produce a small amount of pieces at a time that you have to either pay for in a store or subscribe to online for a new piece every month. So that the audience taking in the info about whoever or whatever it is will actually use and act on the information they have consumed.
  5. Personally I believe I could have made the text flow a little better and make the piece more visually appealing for readers. I also think that I could have made my pyramid scheme a little better as I left some of the vital info until the very end. However I believe I spoke well about my subject and covered all the point i wanted to about them.

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