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Personal Study: Final Images and Evaluation

Final Images

These are my final edited images. There is a total of 108 photographs. I believe in quality over quantity and think that there is definitely some stronger and weaker images within this group, therefore, I am going to make a final selection of my best images.

Best Images

These are my best images. I went through my final images and annotated the ones which I thought were best in blue. These are the images which I will display in my photobook.

Evaluation/Comparison to Photographers

Keith Dotson

My Images

Keith Dotson’s Images

Comparison

Above you can see both my images and Keith Dotson’s images. The composition of my images are very similar to Keith Dotson’s, however, my images have less contrast and lighter tones. This is potentially due to the fact that many buildings he photographed were built with bricks whereas mine were painted walls. This makes Keith’s images darker with more shadows and textures. I would have hoped for this same outcome, however, I couldn’t find any buildings similar. Furthermore, I think that I could have improved my images by giving them more texture and contrast as some of them are quite boring and muted.

Alex Upton

My Images

Alex Upton’s Images

Comparison

Above are both mine and Alex Upton’s images. The main difference between mine and Alex Upton’s are that my images are monochrome however his are in colour. I personally think that some of my images are very similar to Alex Upton’s in terms of composition. Here are some examples:

Additionally, my images also relate to Alex Upton’s as they both have harsh lines and contrast. We have also both displayed buildings in an abstract way, emphasising their geometric shapes. Finally, I think that my photographs turned out great considering I am in Jersey where there aren’t many modern, high-rise buildings.

Virtual Gallery

Prints

These are the images which I am going to print and their sizes:

6 x A5 Prints

6 x A4 Prints

1 x A3 Print

Virtual gallery and evaluation:

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Evaluation:

Overall, I am very happy with these final photos. I feel that I linked them all to one main theme, yet they tell different stories individually. I edited them all to be unique and different through tones and shadows. Therefore, these images stand out between each other and makes viewers question the narrative behind the photos.

Photobook Specification

Narrative: What is your story?

  • 3 words: colour is important
  • A sentence: show how colour makes the world more beautiful
  • A paragraph: my story is to show how colour is important in a world which is becoming more grey and dull by creating colourful images to show the beauty and highlight the importance of it.
  • How you want your book to look and feel: I want my book to look like a real hardback book with smoothness for the cover and also a bit of weight to it as you are holding a real book.
  • Paper and Ink: I want my book to use Premium Lustre as it is good quality paper and also it is Lustre which mean it is a bit glossy and will give the images a shaper and brighter colours which is perfect for my book especially as it is about colour As my images are taken at night black paper would work well with the photo and overall theme.
  • Format, size and orientation: For my photo book want it to be Standard A4 as it is the perfect size for my book because I don’t feel like it needs to be an overly big book, and for a small book the images won’t look as good and have the same emphasis if they were tiny. I also decided on portrait for the orientation as it is good for my portrait photos and for my landscape photos can be placed on a double page spread so they fit both pages.
  • Binding and cover: For the cover I want to have an image wrap which goes across both sides with my name and the book title on the spine so you can tell what the book is if it is on a bookshelf.
  • Title: I came up with the title ‘The importance of colour’ as I want the reader see how important colour is when they see my book and ‘the importance of colour’ really sums my project up.
  • Design and layout: for my photos I want them to be laid out as an image per side or to emphasise images have them as either a double page spread or one image per whole page.
  • Editing and sequencing: For the sequencing there is no specific sequence however I would like to have my images together which I can group such as all the images of the trees with the coloured lights on them together and have all the green and purple images together rather than some being at the start and some at the middle of the book, also images which are taken at the same/similar locations can be together.
  • Images and text: For the images I want them to be really colourful as my book is about colour For the text I want to include a quote on the first page to give context to the photos. For the essay I want to use white text as it will contrast nicely with the black pages and have some words in colour if I am mentioning colour as my book is about colour and it will look nice make it look more interesting and engaging to the reader.

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Photobook-Research & Understanding

Rita Puig-Serra: Where Mimosa Bloom

1. Research a photo-book and describe the story it is communicating with reference to subject-matter, genre and approach to image-making.

2. Who is the photographer? Why did he/she make it? (intentions/ reasons) Who is it for? (audience) How was it received? (any press, reviews, awards, legacy etc.)

The photographer is called Rita Puig-Serra Costa

The book was created after the death of her mother, she made it as a way to deal with her grief following this.

The book “Where Mimosa Bloom” takes the form of an extended farewell letter with the use of photography presenting a visual outlook. It is part photo-essay, part family biography, part of a personal message to her mother.

The elements combine to create an intriguing view and discourse of love, sorrow and loss. The book is a finished result of over 2 years collecting different materials as well as preserving and maintaining them. She also took photographs of places, objects and people that had a significant part in her relationship to her mother.

She proves in her book that some aspects of grief can be universal or can be made so through the honest and precision with they are articulated.

The book is a First Edition and from what I found out it has:

  • 460 copies
  • 96 pages, 54 colour plates
  • 5 die cut pages
  • 16.0 cm x 22.5 cm
  • Hot foil embossed printed textured hardcover
  • Offset printing
  • Éditions du LIC 2014

The book also explores themes of memory, nature, and the passage of time, specifically through the motif of the mimosa flower. It invites the reader into a sort of experience, offering not just a narrative through its images but also through the physicality of the object itself. To fully understand the book’s impact, it’s important to consider its narrative, design, and structure in detail.

3. Deconstruct the narrative, concept and design of the book and apply theory above when considering:

Book in hand: how does it feel? Smell, sniff the paper.
Paper and ink: use of different paper/ textures/ colour or B&W or both.
Format, size and orientation: portraiture/ landscape/ square/ A5, A4, A3 / number of pages.
Binding, soft/hard cover. image wrap/dust jacket. saddle stitch/swiss binding/ Japanese stab-binding/ leperello
Cover: linen/ card. graphic/ printed image. embossed/ debossed. letterpress/ silkscreen/hot-stamping.
Title: literal or poetic / relevant or intriguing.

When you hold “Where Mimosa Bloom“, it’s clear that the book is designed to be an experience. The cover has a soft, linen texture that feels inviting and warm. It’s a tactile quality that pulls you in and encourages interaction. The weight of the book is substantial (not too heavy—just enough to feel like a well-crafted object in your hands).


When you open the book, you immediately notice the subtle scent of fresh paper and ink. It’s not overpowering, but it adds an extra sensory layer to the experience, especially when flipping through the pages. The texture of the pages is smooth with a slight tooth to them, which complements the natural themes of the book.


The paper used is slightly off-white with a matte finish. This paper choice isn’t glossy, which helps to prevent any glare, allowing the colours in the photographs to stand out in a more subdued, intimate way. The book is printed in full colour, and the images—often of lush landscapes, flowers, and natural settings—have a soft yet vibrant quality. The book is in portrait format, which feels appropriate for the subject matter, allowing each image to be presented with enough space to breathe. It’s not too large or too small; the dimensions strike a good balance for the photographs to hold the reader’s attention while still feeling accessible.

The book is bound using Swiss binding, which allows the pages to lay flat when opened. This binding style is ideal for a book like this, where the sequencing of images is essential. The cover is linen-wrapped, with an embossed title. There’s no dust jacket, which gives the book a more intimate feel. It’s minimal, but the tactile experience of the linen cover and embossed title make the book feel special.

The book has a hardcover as well as including inside matte paper pages this is consistent throughout the whole book.

The book is in a portrait format as well as in A4. The front cover has printed matte image of a young child, the front cover is quite blurry so it isn’t clear what the image actually is trying to make out to be. The title appears on the spine of the book which include the name of the photographer the title in the middle stating “WHERE MIMOSA BLOOM” as well as in the right corner “Editions du LIC”.


Narrative: what is the story/ subject-matter. How is it told?
Structure and architecture: how design/ repeating motifs/ or specific features develops a concept or construct a narrative.
Design and layout: image size on pages/ single page, double-spread/ images/ grid, fold- outs/ inserts.
Editing and sequencing: selection of images/ juxtaposition of photographs/ editing process.
Images and text: are they linked? Introduction/ essay/ statement by artists or others. Use of captions (if any.)

The story in Where Mimosa Bloom is not told in a traditional sense. It’s less about a linear narrative and more about an exploration of themes like memory, loss, and the fleeting beauty of nature. The mimosa bloom becomes a metaphor for these transitory moments in life—beautiful yet brief.

The book allows the images to communicate the narrative. There’s a quiet, reflective mood throughout it. The subject matter is focused on the mimosa flower and natural scenes, with images of landscapes, close-ups of flora, and the gentle play of light and shadow (relating to the title). These photographs don’t tell a story in a traditional sense but instead invite the viewer to reflect on the beauty of these moments and the passage of time.

The relationship between the images and text in Where Mimosa Bloom is minimal but thoughtful. There are no long essays or extensive captions; instead, the book relies on the photographs to tell the story. The text is used sparingly, with brief captions that offer a few words of reflection or context, but these are secondary to the images themselves.

The captions are brief and poetic, they’re not meant to explain the images but rather complement them, adding a layer of reflection that allows the viewer to dive deeper into the emotional and thematic elements of the book. The lack of extensive text allows the images to remain the focal point, which is key in this book, where the photographs themselves are the primary means of communication.


UNDERSTANDING PHOTOBOOKS:

Where Mimosa Bloom” is a thoughtfully designed photobook that explores themes of impermanence, memory, and the beauty of nature. Its careful attention to physical details—the tactile quality of the paper, the thoughtful binding, and the use of space—invites the reader to engage with the book in a sensory way. The narrative is built through the images themselves, with minimal text, allowing the viewer to experience the fleeting beauty of the mimosa blooms and reflect on the passage of time.

The book’s structure, design, and layout all work together to create an experience where each image is given the space to resonate and connect with the viewer. Through careful sequencing, image selection, and the integration of text, Where Mimosa Bloom becomes more than just a collection of photographs and turns into an emotional and sensory journey that encourages reflection on the transience of life.

Photobook: Plans

n my photobook i’m going to explore my heritage and identity through the use of lightroom classic and use their features in order to order my book through the Blurb website after wards.

My photobook that will capture my family, heritage, and cultural identity. The focus will be on my Polish and Jersey roots with a mix of archival images and newer photographs that tells a narrative of where I come from and how these influences shape who I am today.

Using Adobe Lightroom Classic as my main tool to bring it to life. The app offers the flexibility to put together old and new images, allowing me to preserve these family memories while presenting them through my current lens. The archival images will reflect generations past photos of my family. Alongside them, I’ll include new photographs inspired by my personal experiences, blending past and present in an impactful way.

The project gives me an opportunity to dive deeper into the elements of heritage and identity. I plan to research a range of artists who explore themes of family, culture, and heritage in their work. I’ll get inspiration from their photography and artistic expressions to shape my project. These artists explore similar elements Eastern and the richness of family connections and their work will help inform how I approach my own photos, adding layers of meaning and emotion to each photo. I also want to explore how these artists use composition, lighting, and other creative techniques to portray their subjects, and how I can apply that to my own images. My goal is to combine the personal with the artistic, creating a photobook that’s not only a visual narrative of my heritage but also an artistic exploration of identity. The photobook will serve as both a tribute and a personal journey that can explore the past while creating a visual story for the future.

Evaluation of photobook and prints

Overall, I am pleased with the outcome of my photo book and my careful selection of final images used. The front and back cover of the photo book set the tone for what’s inside as they reflect my different artist inspirations Justine Kurland and Ramona Wang, but also correlate with each other. I think there is a clear theme and message which can be seen immediately, and I think I have successfully displayed some of my personal ideas and opinions in my images throughout the book, yet it also leaves room for interpretation from the viewer, as only some pages are cohesive.

There isn’t really a consistent flow throughout the book, which may be a drawback as it could be argued that the message is not clear due to the random order of the images. However, I think each page is engaging as there are clear connections between images and they are well composed and thoughtfully framed. The lighting and colour varies through the book, as I took my photoshoots in different locations and at different times of the day.

I successfully linked my personal imagery to Kurland, as the images inspired by her often have bright, natural lighting which enhances the mood and helps the viewer engage as they can see the adventure in the outdoors. This contrasts with other images from different shoots, particularly my second photoshoot where me and my subjects were outdoors in the dark. These images have lower exposure, less vibrancy and overall a more tense effect to them, which reflects the theme of youth through being rebellious, as well as reflecting bonds and community. I think all of my images have an emotional and intellectual impact on the viewer as they display my personal experiences with being a youthful female, which can help with engagement.

I am also happy with the overall design of the book as there is a variety of different placements and spacing to create a rhythm, even though the arrangement of the images is random. Another drawback of my book is that I did not consider adding in any text to any of the pages, which may take away some value due to the fact it may be harder for the viewer to interpret my message. I thoughtfully met my intentions as my personal study photo book reflects historical contexts of the Male Gaze, as well as traditional stereotypes of females and the behaviour we are expected to carry out. My images execute my ideas and beliefs on these contexts, and I have thoughtfully framed each image on every page to display my themes of femininity and youth through my own personal experiences.

Technical, visual, contextual & conceptual elements within my final photobook:

Photobook – creation

Here are the images I will be using for my photobook. I chose my best images as well as images that included the main subject, tony. I colour coded them to help me organise the layout in the photobook. Purple means its documentary photos of a basketball game. blue are photos of tony in his room. Green are photos of the team mates. yellow are only portrait photos of the team mates faces. and red are photos that don’t fit the rest of the images. The star rating is not important here.

Below is my first try at laying out these images:

These images are for the front (right image) and back covers of the book. I decided to go for the title “a day with tony” because the books main subject is him, and its quite a bad title which almost adds a humorous effect. I might change this title later however.
The first page spread is empty as this seems to be a common theme when looking at published photobooks.
The first image is tony again to really make it clear who the main subject is, the photo-montage of him further adds to this.
The second Image is a documentary photo of a D1 basketball game which I like a lot. Having this on its own page eases the viewer in via showing a small number of photos.
Continuing on with the documentary photos, I added 2 coloured Images of the same game, both close up.
Too keep the photos new and refreshing I completely changed the image type to tableaux.
Going back to documentary again on the next pages, I added 3 photos of a free throw happening, then added colour to tony in the game to lead the viewers eyes towards him.
Now I have both a black and white documentary photo and a coloured montage of tableaux photography, giving juxtaposition in these images.
Here I have tony in his own separate page spread again, showing his disconnect from the team.

Here I have another montage right after the page with Tony in it. This increases the isolation that tony has as pages before and after it are full of people. I also added Tommy on the right and I think It complements the headshots on the left quite well, almost like a ‘zoom in’ into Tommy’s headshot.

I think these two images contrast each other nicely, one is almost sad with the subjects face looking down, likely tired. The other image seems exciting with its vibrant colours, as well as a nice slam dunk in the background.

Once again I have tony on his own page spread, further adding to this ‘lonely’ effect.

Here I added to Images that contrast each other again, to add more to this book, making it more interesting. From this part of the book you stop seeing tony, showing that his obsession to be the best has stopped him completely from having fun playing the sport that he loves.

These two images are nicely contrast, with the left image replicating the famous photo of the largest and shortest players, Gheorghe Muresan and Muggsy Bogues:

Here I added more documentary photos of the basketball game, once again not including tony to show his participation in the team is dwindling.

For the final image I decided to use this image of Jesper looking very excited to be there, showing a lot of positive emotion. I think this image finishes of this book quite nicely since it shows that sport is meant to be played for fun, and trying to hard where you stop finding the sport fun is not worth it. I also used this image of Jesper specifically since he is shown a lot more towards the end of the book, making him the centre of attention. The book is divided into 2 parts I think, Tommy’s section at the start and Jespers section at the end, as well as having Tony presented thought the book. This allows me to show 3 different story’s at once, with each subject showing how different there personality is.

I decided to change the front cover to:

This is because I took my documentary photos using a very compressed format so when I scale up my images they become very blurry, so I changed it to a basketball hoop photo too keep with the theme and stop pixilated images from being an issue.

I then added the essay about tableaux vs documentary to the photo book:

As you can see I added the title to its own page spread to lead the reader into the essay.

Evaluation

I think I did a good job at creating a story of a player using photos from 3 different photoshoots. The things I did well in was having a variety of different types of images (including documentary and tableaux, portrait and landscape). I also made use of Juxtaposition with the images, paring coloured and B&W images in an aesthetic way. I used Adobe Garamond Pro for the font, keeping it consistent throughout the book. I also like the minimalist text I added below some of the images to give context to the viewer.

However, I think I didn’t add enough text to the photobook overall, making it less exciting to read. I also think I lacked in the amount of photos I took, especially with the main figure in this book, tony. The image quality was also a problem meaning I cant scale up a lot of my images, making it difficult to lay out the photos in the way I want. I also think the editing is too inconsistent, with some images being slightly darker, some being too colourful, ext.

Photobook + Final Outcomes Virtual Gallery Evaluation

Overall, I think my photobook turned out well. I was able to present my photographs as I had hoped to, with the images in such an order that the narrative is portrayed effectively. I believe the final images that I chose to use in the photobook work really well together and I think that they are good photographs. I also really like how the black and white theme turned out, I think that all of the photographs being black and white makes the aesthetics better than if I had a mix. If I were to do this project again, I would take photographs of other friends and family close to me, allowing myself to illustrate different lives and aspects of life to what is already shown.

Overall, I think this project turned out successful. The images I produced were high quality images of intriguing scenes. When placed in a photo book, the images come together well, supporting the narrative I had aimed – to portray different ages and lifestyles, and capture moments of bliss from different peoples lives. Throughout my photo book and images, there are similarities to both artists I has researched and taken inspiration from, Tom Wood, Andrew Kung and Andriana Nativio. My original inspiration for my project was Tom Wood’s projects and his style of street photography. This is similar to the work of Andrew Kung, I wanted my project to share alikeness in how the photographs are perceived. Additionally, Andriana Nativio inspired me with her style of documentary photography, as well as the images being presented in black and white which is what I found worked best with my images leading me to make the whole project black and white. When taking my photographs, I used a range of lighting techniques depending on how the environment was lit at the time to keep the authentic feel. When editing the images, I used the same black and white filter across all images so that, although some images are brighter whereas some are darker, they all have consistency in some form. I think that within this project, some photographs are better than others in terms of the scene being shot or the technical camera skills not being up to the same standards. However, overall I believe the images are still successful and flow well in the photo book.

Personal Study – Photobook Layout

Identifying colours within each photoshoot – In my photobook I would like a distinct colour scheme either at different parts or a combination of recurring colour schemes to juxtapose and define one photograph from another. The majority of my photos have a warm/neutral tone to them, with the exception of a few cooler tones. At the beginning of my photobook there are a majority of black and white photos, and then the rest of the photos are in colour.


Photobook Layout – Drafts



Photobook Layout – Final

With the layout of my photos in this photobook, I wished to shift from solely monochrome photos into colour photos, to juxtapose two different parts of the photobook.

Personal Study: Finished Photobook

Completed Photobook

This is my completed photobook:

This is a link to my photo book as a PDF:

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Evaluation

Overall, I am very impressed with my photo book. I think that it has turned out how I had visioned for it to in my head in terms of layout and design. If I were to be able to go back and improve this photo book I would probably try and get more images which have both old and new buildings in the same location to show them next to each other. This is because I don’t think the transition from old to new architecture is very clear. I also think that my images vary quite a bit from my artist references, however, each of the photos are to my visual style which I think makes the photo book more successful as there’s not such a huge contrast between the two sets of images.
Overall, I am very impressed with my photo book. I think that it has turned out how I had visioned for it to in my head in terms of layout and design. If I were to be able to go back and improve this photo book I would probably try and get more images which have both old and new buildings in the same location to show them next to each other. This is because I don’t think the transition from old to new architecture is very clear. I also think that my images vary quite a bit from my artist references, however, each of the photos are to my visual style which I think makes the photo book more successful as there’s not such a huge contrast between the two sets of images.