Edit One

This shot was originally yellow from the garage lighting, I did manage to correct this using colour grading within Lightroom however, it didn’t match the rest of the photos. By choosing to turn the photo black and white I adjusted it to fit the other photoshoots. It has also helped highlight the texture from the rust and age of the bike, similar to the photoshoot with the ford.

Edit Two

This photo had a similar issue, the lighting was too yellow. By moving the temp. slider down to a bluer tinge it has reduced the yellow lighting. I do like the photo now the tinge has been removed, it has allowed the bike to be seen within the garage context.

Edit Three

I did this edit in a similar way, adjusting the temperature to a suitable level of blue adjustment, allowing for the yellow tinge to be removed without changing the tint to blue. While the yellow tinge added to the age it did not fit with the rest of the photoshoots.

Edit Four

This photo is taken from an interesting angle, on a wide angle lens. I wanted to enhance the deep colours against the off white background. To do this I first adjusted the temp. slider before making small adjustments on the other sliders, enhancing the orange and blacks within the photo.

Edit Five

An insurance disc is something everyone knows, I wanted this shot as it shows the bike hasn’t been used for over 20 years, but still holds many memories. I originally thought I’d like this shot in black and white but I actually liked it in colour showing the typical insurance disc colourings. I decreased the exposure and highlights to bring out the pattern on the disc itself, which adds to the photo.

Edit Six

The texture on the tank from rust is something I wanted to highlight, adding back texture and increasing the clarity has done this. Alongside the decrease in exposure which brought out the slightly washed out colour. I took this using a 35mm zoom length so the focus was the writing rather than the rest of the bike, the writing being the brand name.

Edit Seven

This shot will pair nicely with the previous one, adding to the idea on what the bike is, I preferred this shot in black and white to provide contrast with the textured, bold colour of the previous shot.

Edit Eight

Having heard many stories about this bike, but having never ridden it myself. I wanted to create the idea of what the bike would look like from the perspective of being ridden. While the world isn’t black and white so would not appear that way when riding, it forces the viewer to look at the details within the bike. The needles on the speedometer and temperature gauge showup better in the black and white version, it also helped remove the distraction of the floor from the shot.

Edit Nine

This shot is an interesting angle, I liked the comparison between the colour of the rust and the brown of the seat. Taken from through the handle bars it has a unique viewpoint on the bike.

Edit Ten

While I don’t think this shot is particularly great by itself I think the number plate plays an important part in the narrative of the book, I remember being told how the number plate was just a sheet of metal with paint on it. It also shows the bike is not from Jersey and adds to its story.

Edit Eleven

This shot is interesting as it shows the whole bike side on, giving a fuller picture of how it was used and how basic it is in comparison to it’s modern counterparts.

Edit Twelve

Compared to the rest of the shots, this photo is dynamic and interesting. While it doesn’t give a fuller picture like previous shots, it does make a comparison between new and old. The newer bike, my bike being in the background and the mirror of the older bike reflecting the older bike, my dads bike.

Edit Thirteen

I liked this shot because it had the name of the bike framed in the middle. I just did basic adjustments to add to the photo but I think I do have stronger photos.

Edit Fourteen

Similarly to the mirror shot, I loved the way this one had the old and the new, the two generations of the families bikes. I used masking overlays to create depth within the image, the background darker and increasing the exposure on the bikes adding more focus onto them.

Final Edits

This photoshoot, produced a range of shots, from more contextual style shots to narrative enhancing shots. Each photo can be used in a specific way to benefit the books narrative. I also want to link these to archive photos of the trip done on this bike, adding comparisons and emotion to the photos. I have used a mixture of black and white editing alongside colour edits, to add depth and contrast within the final photos. I was limited with this shoot as the bike can’t move so I had to take the photos on the driveway but I think I have enough dynamic and interesting photos to make the intended impact. Having researched W Eugene Smith and his style I looked to add a human emotion element to the photos, which is tricky without a person in the photos but I looked for small details and otherwise unseen perspectives which created the strong range of images above.