In order to make this image appear as if it is in complete darkness I increased the contrast and decreased the brightness on photoshop and then adjusted the whites & blacks in Lightroom. I used a computer screen to hold the image to create the reflection and I coloured out parts of the computer using the clone stamp tool to create complete darkness.

I took this photo with a Go-Pro attached to a beam in the ceiling. I has to rotate the image in order to make it more symmetrical and I then had to readjust the colour, clarity and contrast in order to make the image look more like my other two final pieces from this shoot.

This is the final photo in my sequence, so I made it B&W to amplify the emotional effect of this reflection of charlie. I kept the mirror reflection yet I removed charlie from the image to emphasise a sense of disconnection from himself.

For this image I have increased the saturation to greatly increase the vibrant colours within the photo. I was aiming to create a sense of joyfulness in this picture as it is the only photo that I believe holds a connection between childhood and young adulthood in relation to my subject.

I wanted to compare these two images side by side as I am trying to draw emphasis to the unhealthy habits that form due to peer pressure and ‘lad culture’, however I also wanted all my images to have a full bleed across the entire page so they can be viewed in as much detail as possible.

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I started creating my front cover. I wanted the image to be very abstract, and create questions for the viewer as to what the book was going to portray. I have named the book ‘5:15’ because that is the time I wake up everyday and the images that are included in my book essentially illustrate what shows what I do during my waking hours, how I feel and who I am. image 1 and 3 shows my first layout for the cover, I personally didn’t feel the placement worked and didn’t want the title and my name to be separated. image 2 and 4 shows another layout that I liked, where the title and name was placed together. I felt this worked better. I knew when I started the planning process of my book I wanted the quote “id rather walk alone” on the front cover. image 5 and 6 shows my processes of working out the placement of this quote. I felt it needed to be diagonally placed from the title and my name, as this aesthetically looks very neat. I felt that in image 6 the quote was placed incorrectly and it was too hard to read it on the white parts of the strongly contrasted image. image 5 was the final cover

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I then wanted my first page to have the same image as my front cover but slightly faded. I did this by adjusting it in photoshop. I then used the same placement of the title and my name as the front cover on this page.

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all of these images are very similar and are placed periodically throughout the book to separate the narrative up.

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image 1 shows one way I placed these 2 images, I felt this way worked best because the compositions of both images looked nice like this. image 2 shows another way I could have placed them, but I felt this didn’t really work as image on the left looks odd there, as the image just ends there.

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image 1 shows the image just placed on the left page, I felt this looked odd and didn’t look aesthetically pleasing. image 2 showed the image placed more to the left, and slightly larger. This placement is not great because the face is placed directly on the centre of the double page spread. image 3 is the image placed to the right of the book. I find this looks good because the centre line of the double page spread is in a place that works for the images and almost separates the image into 2 images entirely, however but line sits on the face reflected in an odd place and I don’t like this. image 4 shows the image placed slap bang in the centre of the double page spread and works similarly to image 3, in the sense that it separates the image into 2 images. the significance of this aspect is important because it show disassociation and how the two figures, both real and reflected are two separate entities.

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image 1, 2 and 3 show the development of this spread. I found that image 3 looks the best because it is full of colour and in the book the few previous images have been predominantly black and white. The change to the colour left the book feeling fresh and not too samey.

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image 1 shows the first arrangement of a spread that contained two very abstract images. I found this spread was not very correct and lacked aesthetically aspects. image 2 shows an alternative arrangement, however I feel it still didn’t look great, as the light was coming from the same place. image 3 shows how I changed the orientation of the image and makes the overall spread looks better and more succinct.

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image 1 and 4 show 2 different ways I could have presented this image in the centre of the page, I preferred it on the right as I liked the writing on the bottom righthand side as it looked aesthetically pleasing. image 2 and 3 shows 2 different ways I could have presented the image as a full page. I didn’t really like this as it was too full on and needed some white space around.

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image 1 shows the placement of these 2 images. I didn’t feel it looked great this way because the centre line of the double page spread cut through the portrait and ruined the aesthetics of the page. image 2 shows an alternative arrangement of the 2 images. this arrangement works best because the centre page line sits better on the portrait.

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image 1 shows a potential placement of 3 images. I feel this doesn’t look great as the single portrait sits unbalanced and doesn’t really look great next to the other 2 images. image 2 shows an alternative arrangement which to me looks the best and the foregrounds of the two images on the left sit nicely on the centre line of the double spread. image 3 shows a different arrangement of the two images on one side of the page. I found this arrangement looked off because the figures in the foreground didn’t flow from one to another.

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image 1 shows a spread of 2 images. I felt these images didn’t work great together because they are both very similar in colour and dont complement each other. image 2 shows another potential spread, however like the image 1 doesn’t really work either, as the are both very busy. this spread did make me realise that the 1 of the 2 image needed to be black and white to create a contrast between the 2. image 3 shows a spread that contained an image with words. I felt this didn’t really work either, as the words were distracting and took the focus away from the colourful image to the left of it. image 4 shows the chosen spread. I used this black and white image with the colourful image because 1 was full of movement and the other 1 was still and juxtaposed nicely.

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image 1 shows the image that I used in my first draft of the book, however I felt it lacks interest, was too simple and also didn’t really relate to the narrative of my book. image 2 was of a photo that I really liked but like image 1 didn’t really relate to the narrative of my book either. image 3 included an image that was similar to another and I didn’t want the book to be too samey so it was rejected. image 4 shows a full bleed of an image that is similar to the photograph in image 1 but has a much more clearer and purpose for the book. I chose a full bleed for this image because I found it was an important image for the narrative, and represented speed, time and travel.

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I had used this image in the first draft of my book but it had a piece of text in the bottom righthand corner and I felt this was distracting and didn’t help with the minimalistic, clean and sleek feel I was going for with the book. image 1 shows the image with a different orientation and without the piece of text. on reflection I felt the image lacked interest so decided to reedit the image and increase the saturation to brighten up the streaks of light. I also cropped and flipped it too as there was too much negative black space within the image and which left the streaks of light being the smaller element of the piece, whereas I wanted it to be the larger element of the piece. image 3 was the final version of the photograph and placement in the photo book.

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image 1 shows the original image that I used for this spread. I felt that the text that was placed on the picture was distracting. However on reflection I felt that I didn’t really like the image after all. Personally I wished it was all in focus and that elements weren’t blurry. image 2 shows a potential image that I chose to replace the other one, however I felt the colours were too bright and didn’t flow with the ones before it, so I decided to chose a black and white image instead. image 3 shows a different image that I liked. I placed the it to the left as I didn’t want the centre line of the double page spread to cut across the image as it would then lower the aesthetic level of the spread. image 4 shows another potential photo to use, however I felt that it was framed badly in the photographic process and the face was too zoomed up and would have looked better with more of a background.

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when planning the book I had decided that I wanted the book to have some personal elements but wasn’t sure of how I was going to execute this. after some thought I decided to hand write the title, my name and the quote for the front page and the first page too. I did this by using the brush tool on photoshop on transparent page, writing whatever needed to be written. I kept the same placement of the title, my name and quotes as before as it worked well.

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after reviewing the book I found that it had lots of white pages which was honestly very boring so I decided to make the key pages with the similar images have a bright colour in the background. This also helped separate the book up into sections, and split up the narrative better. I also added quotes from my personal journal and found words. I did these in my handwriting too, to add to the personal elements I wanted to include in my book. When first editing my images I did have some photos with quotes on, but I did find that they distracted from the original intent of the image, so when this idea came about I thought it was the perfect way to include my own words from journal and found words that I like.

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Throughout the project I have taken some images, however they are on film and didn’t want to add them in digitally but physically. after the book has been printed I am going to add them in.

Below is the link to the final outcome of my project, my photobook ‘XY’. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did making it…

https://www.blurb.co.uk/bookstore/invited/9093959/941cf913e04c98442cdd3e10eea22b216d8170b6

What Constitutes a ‘Real’ Image?

How do Robert Mapplethorpe and Karlheinz Weinberger portray ‘Lad Culture’ through the medium of portraiture?

As Robert Mapplethorpe himself quoted; “I am obsessed with beauty. I want everything to be perfect, and of course it isn’t. And that’s a tough place to be because you’re never satisfied”. I share the same desire for perfection in my own appearance, both mentally and physically. This need for perfection comes as a sort of validation, a purpose in my eyes hence why in my personal investigation, my area of study will look at masculinity, what it means to be male, more specifically looking at how adolescence shapes us as men, conflicts men often face such as body dysmorphoria and a desire to fulfil a certain mould, a mould set by society to look and act a certain way, to be the breadwinner and the hero they dreamt of being as a child. The aim is to show that you should love yourself, even if your mind wants to rebel against that. To achieve this, I will be studying both the works of Robert Mapplethorpe and Karlheinz Weinberger as well as analysing their works on male photography and the male gaze, and how lad culture is ever present in their photography.

‘Lad culture’ according to Wikipedia is a “British and Irish subculture initially associated with the Britpop movement. Arising in the early 1990s, the image of the “lad”—or “new lad”—was that of a generally middle class figure espousing attitudes typically attributed to the working classes”. This is a commonly captured stereotype, often linked with aggressive, confident and competitive behaviour, typical of alpha males and even male animals in the wild, with common themes such as excessive alcohol and drug use as well as settings often being set in pubs and club scenes globally, where party life brings out such characteristics in men.

Much of this was captured in the 60s, 70s and 80s and no doubt would’ve strongly influenced both Mapplethorpe’s and Weinberger’s photographic work. Beginning in the mid-1980s, a secret underground culture was formed by a revolutionary group of self-proclaimed “queers” who were less concerned about mainstream acceptance of their sexuality and more geared toward creating unconventional spaces where they could be themselves. Places where, essentially, someone could be gay without liking stereotypical “gay things.” in the 1970s AIDS broke out which is a disease of the immune system, caused by the virus HIV, leading to death from infections that the body is no longer able to resist. The disease had a devastating effect on the gay community in the 1980’s and many of Mapplethorpe’s friends and acquaintances were victims of the disease. Mapplethorpe died from an AIDS-related illness in 1989.

ROBERT MAPLETHORPE

Robert Michael Mapplethorpe was an American photographer who was most famously known for his work with black and white photographs. His photographs featured a large array of subjects, including celebrity portraits, male and female nudes, self-portraits, and still-life images. Additionally, Mapplethorpe as mentioned was queer, hence this was a common theme in his work as many of his models either recreated or were homosexual themselves. These photos were often aimed to capture ‘lad culture’ through the style and behaviour of men as well as the male gaze. Essentially, the male gaze is the act of depicting women and the world from a masculine, heterosexual perspective that presents and represents women as sexual objects for the pleasure of the heterosexual male viewer.

In Mapplethorpe’s work, one of his major exhibitions named ‘The Perfect Medium’ which was featured at the Art Gallery of New South Wales in 27 Oct 2017 – 18 Feb 2018, showcased a broad selection of his work, from portraits of his contemporaries to self-portraits, floral still lifes and erotic imagery. Mapplethorpe heavily explored ways identity could be captured and expressed by the camera with a certain style of black and white still portraits, almost always taken in a black or white studio and set up with the models or himself creating or imitating poses in front of the camera. Often, his traditional style of portraiture had a clear subject, and this was often the male physique as he tried highlighting both the beauty and form of the ideal male physique (virtruvian physique as mentioned in this blog post). He often captured the brutish, male image, highlighting different appearances that so-called alphas could have, however these characteristics were usually the muscular, confident ‘lad’ stereotype so to speak. Through his self-portraits, he strategically crafted a public image for himself. He often took photos of himself as well as the models that fit the roles of alpha males, and by using the styles as mentioned above, he often challenged gender stereotypes and lad culture, which is a similar theme to my personal study.

The photo above is a studio portrait of Derrick Cross in 1983, a model Mapplethorpe photographed numerous times and included in a couple of his works. This is one of many photographs in which Mapplethorpe focuses on a part of the body. The surrealist artist Man Ray had taken similar photographs of a torso, but had given greater emphasis to the face-like appearance of the body with nipples as eyes and navel as mouth. Mapplethorpe’s photograph is much more a study of muscular form and male beauty and aesthetic. With the draped fabric around his waist, similarities can also be drawn with classical sculpture. The photo was produced on gelatin silver print that gives it the clear, silver and black tones. Additionally, the photo has high contrast as a result of the models’ skin tone when compared to the very pale grey background, which emphasises the significant muscularity of the model. Furthermore, the composition is close up, with the model comprising most of the photograph, in particular his well developed mid-section/torso which evidently, Mapplethorpe is trying to emphasise and highlight the beauty of, especially considering the model has posed similar to Greek statues. Robert himself also photographed many Greek statues and compared them to the male physique, potentially taking inspiration from the philosopher Plato’s study on aesthetics who is considered by many to be “the most important philosopher who ever lived”. He is known as the father of idealism in philosophy and his new (at the time) ideas were elitist, with the philosopher king the ideal ruler. Essentially, the very phrase “Plato’s aesthetics” refers to an anachronism, given that this area of philosophy only came to be identified in the last few centuries, however even those who think of aesthetics more broadly find something exploratory in Plato’s treatments of art and beauty. He might be best described as “seeking to discover the vocabulary and issues of aesthetics”. For this reason Plato’s readers will not come upon a single aesthetic theory in the dialogues. For the same reason they are uniquely situated to watch core concepts of aesthetics being defined: beauty, imitation, inspiration. Tangent aside, Robert Mapplethorpe and his obsession with aesthetics is very evident as he clearly was more concerned with male beauty and aesthetic and sexualising males through homo-erotic staged photos in studio lighting.

KARLHEINZ WEINBERGER

Karlheinz Weinberger is another artist that shares a similar style in photography to Mapplethorpe. Karlheinz Weinberger was born on 10 July 1921 in Zurich’s “Chreis Cheib” district, a nickname derived from the Swiss German expression for ‘carcass.’ A few years later, Zurich became a centre for left-wing ideology also known as “Red Zurich” after the Social Democratic party won an absolute majority for the first time in 1928. His imagery shares the similar black and white tones as can be observed in Mapplethorpe’s work as well as sharing a similar theme where by both artists aim to capture ‘lad’ culture, although in Weinberger’s work, it is less sexualised. A striking resemblance in both artist’s work is the inclusion of male models in their portrait work, often either topless or re-enacting “masculine” things. ‘Lad culture’ is ever present in Weinberger’s work, with many of his subjects often being muscular and rather good-looking, taking the role of the confident alpha male type.

Karlheinz Weinberger’s day job may have been relatively uninspiring having worked in a Siemen’s warehouse, however the photos he took in his spare time are anything but that. Weinberger’s passion, and the focus of this book, is the rebel youth of 1950s and 1960s Switzerland, who took inspiration from American rock-’n’-roll culture and made it their own with their rolled-up jeans and denim jackets, bouffant hairdos, striped T-shirts, and customized belts. Weinberger’s free-spirited and self-confident portraits typical of alpha male/lad culture possess the defiant attitude of youth and rebellion as a response to the conservative post-war era. His book ‘Swiss Rebels’ also includes erotic images of queers, who dress as rockers, bikers, construction workers and athletes, many of whom occupy positions outside of social norms.

The photo above is a candid environmental portrait, (a common theme in Weinberger’s work) and was taken by Weinberger in 1970 and is of a Wrestler in a sports club named ‘Box-Ring Zürich’ where he started to work as a freelance sports photographer for Satus-Sport, a national workers’ sports and gymnastics federation. In 1969, the photo taken above also first appeared in an underground gay magazine, called Club 68. The photo incudes a very alpha looking subject with the photo comprising of the typical black and white theme similar to Mapplethorpe’s works. Visually, the photo is black and white, with darkish tones in the background, cleverly segregating the subject in the fore ground and stopping him from blending in too much. Furthermore, there is a rough texture with the subtle grain typical of cameras of the time unlike Mapplethorpe’s work that was often very clear, although, much of Weinberger’s photography was also very clear too with minimal/to no grain what so ever. The composition is a strong one, symbolic of the alpha male/lad culture vibe and is in the form of a candid portrait that looks semi-staged and the subject is centred making for a pleasing symmetrical image that is satisfying to look at and matches the golden ratio. The exposure is a little higher in order to cancel out the shadows from dominating the image and ruining the clarity, as here the photo is very clear signifying great balance and harmony between the limited shades within the photo. Technically, it is unknown if Weinberger used natural or studio (indoor) lighting nor is it possible to determine what camera/lens he used although I would hazard a guess and say her may have used a 35mm film camera, typical of the era and likely the cause of the grain. Unlike Mapplethorpe, Weinberger isn’t asking his subjects to make poses symbolic of Greek gods, however opting for a more candid approach. Furthermore, another difference between the two artists approach to photographing males and portraying lad culture is rather than trying to highlight the aesthetic of the male physique in it’s greatest form, Weinberger finds an aesthetic in men doing manly things as a pose to looking overly muscular and posing as such. Evidently, Weinberger was more concerned with highlighting lad culture through environmental photos of men whereas Mapplethorpe was more concerned with male beauty and aesthetic by sexualising males through staged photos in studio lighting. Therefore, notice how when I referred to both artist’s work, with Weinberger I mentioned how he used ‘subjects’ and with Mapplethorpe how he used ‘models’. That’s the key difference here.

Overall, both artists capture the male gaze, however go about it in a slightly different way. Granted, both often photographed queer culture and the surrounding community, however as mentioned, Mapplethorpe used this to create more homo-erotic imagery that explored the male body’s natural beauty and form, most notably seen in his work with Derrick Cross, whereas Weinberger preferred the less staged, more natural/candid approach where photos of groups of males doing certain activities were more his kind of niche. Weinberger was more concerned with highlighting lad culture through enivonamntal photos of men doing ‘manly’ or ‘lad culture’ things, (boys being boys essentially), as he worked in a factory for Siemens which was full of these ‘stud-like’ masculine characters that weren’t afraid to get hands on and dirty. On the other hand, Mapplethorpe as mentioned, sexualised males and explored the more flamboyant, fashion side of lad-culture. This makes for a great contrast between the two artists, as both their work looks very similar in style from first observation, however can be interpreted in entirely different ways.

Bibliography

https://aperture.org/reviews/karlheinz-weinberger-rebels-without-a-cause/

https://news.artnet.com/art-world/robert-mapplethorpe-1723221

https://www.tate.org.uk/art/artworks/robert-derrick-cross-ar00194 © Robert Mapplethorpe Foundation

https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/plato-aesthetics/#:~:text=To%20the%20literal%2Dminded%20the,in%20the%20last%20few%20centuries.&text=For%20the%20same%20reason%20they,%3A%20beauty%2C%20imitation%2C%20inspiration.

https://www.artsy.net/article/artsy-editorial-photographer-captured-switzerlands-biker-boys-elvis-look-alikes

http://kvadratinterwoven.com/foto-jim-zurich

PERSONAL SIGNIFICANCE + OPINIONS-

This project had some personal significance and although certain scenes were quite difficult for me to film, mentally, I believe that all in all it helped with my own recovery and I’m glad I went through with the film. I think it reflects not only some of my own story but also, more generally, it symbolises a range of experiences and feelings that people have when they are going through periods of poor mental health, not only struggles with diet.

I explored the link to the “Love and Rebellion” theme through the idea of self-love and rebellion against a toxic mindset and societal expectations. In my opinion, it was successful, although I feel as though I could maybe have focused more on the self-love aspect in the end, but as a result of the importance of the three separate chapters, I wasn’t able to spend too much time on only a single one.

CLOTHING/LOCATION-

Both the clothing and the locations were very important to me. I chose to have three different outfits: one for each chapter. Seeing as each chapter represented a different stage of the ED journey, I thought the clothing should reflect the general mental situation at the time. The first was a long sleeved shirt and a long skirt which covered up most of my body but was still fairly close to my skin, illustrating the sense of self-consciousness building before the actual disorder changes the perception of the body too much. The second outfit was a plain white long-sleeved dress, which fell a little baggy on my body and covered up pretty much all of it, showing how self-consciousness increases and the desire to hide yourself/your body in your clothing is also very prominent. In the third chapter I wore a white cropped top and the same white skirt from the first chapter to show how I was returning to my former self but changed, recovered and showing more outward self-confidence. All three of the outfits were white, for a few different reasons: white symbolises innocence and purity which can be reflected in both the first and last chapters, white stands out against the otherwise natural colour palatte of the background, therefore drawing focus towards me as the central focus of the film, and white also links to the voiceover which features the “white rabbit” from the Alice in Wonderland books.

The locations I filmed in were also significant. Most of it is filmed in and around my house, which references how EDs often stem from issues at home and revolve around routines and habits done at home. This is similar to the way the Laia Abril’s book “The Epilogue” revolves around the house of a young girl who suffered from an eating disorder. The rest is filmed in a patch of nearby woods, which at the same time references Alice in Wonderland and the popular metaphor of “going into the woods” as meaning going on a dangerous and challenging quest with reasonable doubt as to whether one would return safe. It also meant that I was able to work in an environment that was quite colourful, and the time of year meant that the green was quite vibrant, and the weather was often rainy which added general atmosphere and mood to the film.

SEQUENCING/CHAPTERS-

The chapters were a vital aspect of the film to me; they showed the journey one goes on with an eating disorder in three separate stages. The titles reference the Alice in Wonderland books and mark the stages of before, during and after. When evaluating, I think they worked effectively in portraying the sense of the passing of time that I wanted them to.

I also use some repeated shots, like the “getting ready” morning scene and the close up of eyes opening and looking around. I intended this to give the audience a sense of how the subject’s mental health changes over time, relying on the artistic trope of the eyes being “windows to the soul” to portray this.

Sequencing the shots and generally organising the narrative was an aspect I put quite a bit of thought into, and I ended up making a fairly detailed storyboard which I then annotated with details for me to use when actually shooting; I found this really helpful throughout the whole process, especially when editing. It was quite effective in that, when re-evaluating some shots later on in the process, I was able to cut them out easily and maintain the whole narrative of the rest of the film without missing out on anything important. In my opinion, it was definitely worth the extra time spent in the planning process.

VOICEOVER-

From the very beginning, I had planned to record myself doing a scripted voiceover, with the visuals matching up to whatever was being said at the moment. I debated either reading out a poem from the book “Alice Through The Looking Glass” or to write something myself, and in the end the poem in particular was too short and didn’t link up with the subject matter of the film enough, so I wrote a short three-piece text, making sure to include imagery that fit with the theme of eating disorders and Alice in Wonderland, then went through the process of editing it to the right length and omitting any parts that didn’t particularly work out in the way I liked. Certain key lines and phrases, however, were important to keep in as they gave sense to the visuals and added to the overall tone of the film.

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“Little white lies stick like cotton wool in my throat and nothing is the same anymore.” 

The white lies refer to the deception involved in hiding an ED from friends and family, and the cotton wool refers to a popular method of appetite suppressing by consuming cotton wool.

“I got stuck and I got hurt/ And I got help”

This is from the third and final chapter and it shows the period of self-reflection that is necessary for recovery where often things that were complicated at the time become simple and much clearer to understand.

“My childhood seems a blur to me/ Although I don’t really know why” … “My childhood is still blurry, but it’s soft and sweet and sad, and I tell it to take its time coming back to me”

These two quotes are from chapters one and three respectively, and they illustrate how much personal growth occurs during recovery and how often there is an increased sense of acceptance of past pain and upsets, rather than holding on to them and hurting oneself any further.

Overall, the extra effort involved in scripting, recording and editing in a voiceover was most definitely worth it, in my opinion, and I am pleased with the final effect it had. It added a personal touch to the film and made a lot of the imagery clearer to understand, as well as adding more depth to other parts. It also allowed me to explore a different side of the creative aspect when making films, and increased my awareness of the importance of audio and soundscapes.

OVERALL SUCCESSES + CRITIQUES–

Technically, I think my film was fairly successful. Visually it looked good, as the colours I wore stood out against the various surroundings, and the exposure was properly calibrated. As a whole the narrative was clear, conveyed through both visual and audio aspects together. It had a range of close ups and long shots, and the establishing shots at the beginning set the scene effectively. The editing was also varied enough to keep it engaging, switching between several fast-paced montages and some slower, longer scenes. I mainly used a tripod to keep the camera steady which tested my multitasking skills and improved my overall filming/directing techniques, as well as allowing me to use myself as the main subject.

If I had to critique any part of it, I would probably say that I could have spent a bit more time during the actual filming part in making sure that everything was in focus. This was only really an issue in the first parts that I shot, the close-ups particularly, and even though it was hard to be behind the camera while also being the subject of the camera lens, I feel as though if I were to do it again I would know to spend a lot more time on things like this and end up with a slightly better result. Another thing I would change if I did this project again would be to include more scenes of a more abstract nature, like the photography of Francesca Woodman, which would be open for interpretation in various different ways and provide a more creative and artistic demonstration of the main subject’s mental state.

To conclude, I’m pleased with the way this short film project turned out and I believe I was successful in the various things I meant to include. The artists I studied beforehand were very useful in developing my ideas and the style that I went for, as well as providing examples of work covering similar sorts of subjects. I feel like I managed to incorporate a personal aspect in tackling a difficult and fairly emotionally challenging topic, and I put a lot of effort into making sure that I provided as accurate of a representation to my own experiences as I could, without making it overly specific and opening it up to a more general interpretation of mental health issues, the concept of losing childhood nostalgia, rediscovering one’s own identity, and just generally growing up.

Sound was very important to me in this film project, and I spent a lot of time scripting a voiceover to have underneath the video, to combine both the audio and visual aspects together. But I also wanted to use a lot of natural sounds, the sort of ambient noise that would be present in the outside environments I filmed in. Initially I believed this would be best done by using sounds downloaded online, but I tested out my camera’s audio and found it worked well in capturing exactly what I wanted. This accounts for the most part of the ambient background noise, excepting the hospital sounds at the end of “chapter two”, which I had to source online.

BACKGROUND/AMBIENT SOUNDS-

Above I am splicing the original clip from inside a hospital room I got online into separate shorter pieces, as it had a recurring background sound (like an aggressively loud beep) that I didn’t like, so I marked out all the sections it was heard and cut them out. I was anxious that the end product didn’t sound too jarring or mix-and-match, but luckily it worked perfectly well first time, and I only had to cut the whole clip to the right length and no further editing was necessary.

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