Photo-shoot 2: Selection and Editing:

For my second photo-shoot, I focused on displaying a break in feminine gender roles by focusing on showing women/girls in nature, showing them playing in forests and getting muddy. I feel like this approach allows for a subtle line to be drawn between the expectations that society has for girls, and the reality that many girls find joy in “masculine” activities, such as playing in the woods, exploring and adventuring. I find this concept to be a more subtle show of braking gender stereotypes than my first photo-shoot, and therefore have included this in order to contrast the more overt, brash examples of gender stereotypes with more subtle, hinting examples.

After selecting which images I would use to edit, I used the software Photo-shop to create and edit a range of images:

For many of my images, I increased both the saturation and contrast. I did this to make the colours and contrasting shapes and tones of the image stand out, allowing the viewers attention to be drawn to certain aspects of the image.

For the above image, I altered the saturation and contrast of the image, and then using the lasso tool on Photoshop, I highlighted the iris of the eye, and raised the contrast and saturation of the blue, in order to make the eye colour of the subject stand out much more. I did this to make the eye of the subject the focal point of the image, forcing the viewer to see the subject as an individual person by making eye contact with them through the image.

Simply by increasing the contrast and saturation of this image, and making small edits using the lasso tool, I was able to finish this image, using the colouring and shapes of the image as the focal point of the image.

The above image involved turning the images black and white , increasing the contrast, and placing all images onto a single page (I outlined the images with black rectangles using photoshop to better define each image).

For many of my images, I also altered the colour balance of the image in order to emphasise certain shades and colours. In this instance, I increased the red and blue and magenta tones slightly (and I also increased the contrast and reduced the saturation), which gave the below final outcome:

The hardest image to create was one in which I would be merging a set of images together to create a background, while keeping a single image opaque in the foreground.

Initially, I cut out the part of the image I wanted to use from the background.

I then used the quick selection tool and lasso tool to cut the image out from the background fully. After this, I used the eraser with 0% hardness to soften out the edges of the image to make it look more natural.

I then increased the contrast of the image and turned the image black and white to match the black background that I added. I used a soft black paintbrush to go around the edges of the image to patch up parts the edges that did not match the background.

I then used the lasso tool to cut out a range of images of faces showing intense and varied emotion from a range of different images.

I then used the eraser tool at 75% opacity to make these cut out image more opaque and soft. Finally, I added these images behind the image in the foreground, allowing them to create the background for the image. I feel that although this image took a lot of work, I believe the outcome is an effective piece.

Personal Study- Essay Draft Two

Essay Question- Is it possible for photography to capture moments in time objectively and truthfully?

Opening Quote- What are the differenced between reality, witness and point of view?”– Bright and Van Erp 2019:19

Introduction (250-500 words)- What is your area of study? Which artists will you be analysing and why? Will you be using photographs as a way of showing your idea? How will these aspects respond to their work and essay question?

My personal investigation looks into the development of my dance journey throughout the years from 2010. I specifically will be looking into the physical elements i still own such as objects, costumes and images in order to show my journey truthfully. This idea has come from looking into artists Diana Markosian, and Walker Evens who show a clearly their personal styles through their use in photography. Diana looks into archival imagery through her personal life to add emotion to ideas, where as Walker is a documentation photographer and uses the project ‘ let us praise famous men’ to showcase his style.

Paragraph One (500 words)- Historical/ Theoretical context within art, photog and visual culture relevant to your area of study, Make links to art movements

Realism and Straight Photography was first introduced in the 1840s and looks at producing imagery which displays life how it is. Artists who work within this area mostly focused on looking into cultural and social issues which were revenant within that time, helping to gain recognition to issues and showcase detailed images to exhibit real life. Artist Frederick Henry Evens and his project ‘A sea of a Step’ is known to distinctly present realism through the use of lighting and space. He uses symbolism of creating subjective perspectives while changing the reliability of art movement. Focusing more on documentary photography, artist Walker Evens uses portraiture to show lifestyle within an enviroment which can sometimes be shown as being accurate or inaccurate. This carries me to explore my own topic which is based on my own dance lifestyle and I left that using a small element of documentary photography within my project would be nessesary to capture my intended subject. Carrying on from this, Paul Strand took an interesting approach to photographing objects where he uses the ‘Macro Technique’ which shows clear focus on light and shadowing. This gives an idea as to how Strands work is seen and how his work causes a narrative which can illustrate how the art movement can be truthful.

Paragraph Two (500 words)- Analyse first photographer in relation to your essay question. Present/evaluate your own images and responses.

I will be analysing my chosen photographer Diana Maroksian and looking through her non-traditional way of photographing archival images. I feel as if her use of archival images adds an element of truth to her work and contrasts a stereotypical family, adding a sense of loneliness to her work. This particular emotion can be linked to the use of black and white edit which is typically used, creating more depth in the background of her work. To extend this, Maroksian had a particular project called ” Inventing my Father” which can be seen as portraying the truth behind her families upbringing, in particular how her mother left her father to move to California, not thinking on how the children would feel later on in life not being able to be brought with with a father figure. Adding to this, she cut the father out of all the images in the family album, adding separation. I feel as if this clearly shows an element of truth in her work and also shows that archival imagery is a successful way of representing how reality is.

Paragraph Three (500 words)- Analyse images which will help to represent your ideas and visions

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This image shown above is from Markosian’s project ‘ Inventing my Father’ which explores her family history from when she was born to the time period where the project was published. The project is very emotional and focuses mostly on the images she has taken which don’t include a lot of editing, adding a raw approach to her work and showing it for how it originally was, adding an element of truth to her work. We can see in the image above that conceptually it seems as if there has been a disappearance of a family member, due to the size and build it looks like a male suggesting it is her father. The cut out also proposes that the father has either left or the mother has left him as a cut out is very drastic for precious family photographs. Carrying on from this, the cut out shows to the audience how important diana’s mother was to her, being her only adult influence throughout her life. Furthermore, the edit also carries a lot of emotion through it which is obvious to the audience, these emotions include emptiness, loneliness and pain. To contrast, the contextual approach to this particular image is said that this particular image shows Diana’s mothers heavy emotion which can be seen as being in pain as she cut out her husbands image from the family photograph after she left him to move to California after he had been dissapering for weeks on end and then showing up one day. The cut up also shows the loss of a family member and how he isnt ‘family’ anymore because of his unhealthy habits towards his loved ones. Technically, we don’t know whether this image has been taken with a camera because of the high quality phones which are used in this day and age. However, we can see that there has been artificial lighting used in taking the image because of shadowing.

Paragraph Four (500 Words)- Analyse second photographer in relation to your essay question. Present/evaluate your own images and responses.

Walker Evans most recognizable work is from his project ‘ Let us Now Praise Famous Men’ a series where he explores Alabama farmers during the Great Depression from portrait using a documentation style of photography. Looking into his portraiture, it is clear to see what the families have gone through and how they don’t know any different. He has stated that he enjoys to use editing as a large part of his image as it develops an image even if you are trying to prove a realistic point. Evans imagery has been described as “You can’t sniff the stink of the quilts in the Evans pictures” showing a positive response to his work and emphasis how he is accurate with representing his work in the way he is successful at capturing raw images through simplicity. Evans uses naturalistic lighting to capture his images and does not position the models, but photographs them in their typical element adding a sense of truthfulness and reality. Capturing the subject in their naturalistic environment allows a sense of authority to the images, adding emotion and a sense of sympathy.

Independent Shoot: bunkers

For my independent bunker shoot, I decided to drive to Corbiere and photograph the German radio tower. It is part of the old German radio complex situated around the west coast of Jersey to assist in detecting allied ships within the Atlantic ocean that meets the west coast of the Island. the radio towers were also used to assist in co-coordinating aerial attacks upon allied fleets in the English Channel.

Today, the tower can be rented out as a luxury getaway destination, with 360 degree panoramic views of St Ouens bay and Corbiere lighthouse. Back in the occupation, this tower was a key asset in channel surveillance, and a nearby bunker system hosted multiple anti shipping and anti aircraft batterys to bolster the west coast defense.

Here are my images taken from my shoot. I went and shot my images around sunset as I wished to capture the sunset and experiment with the colours of the sunset, to almost reflect the end of an era, and to use the sunset as a metaphor to represent a promise of a tommorow, a promise that was fulfilled with the liberation of the Channel Islands.

Editing approach

For this image, I wanted to highlight vapor trails in the sky as well as emphasise the clouds in the background. To do this, I increased the clarity to +40 to make finer details stand out and I also adjusted the colour filters to make the colours of the sky and sunset much more prominent to create a dramatic colour palette.


With this image, I decided to deploy the same principles as the last image, Yet I adjusted the hue of the yellows and orange as well as the saturation filters to adjust the sunset to make it much more dramatic. I used a wide angle shot to get the full tower into perspective and utilise as much cloud as possible to further increase the dramatic effect given off by the image. I chose to take a wide angled shot to incorporate the bench looking out into the sunset, Using it essentially as a metaphor for reflection upon a time of upheaval
For this image I chose to photograph Corbiere lighthouse in the shadow of the radio tower, To highlight the sense of occupation. having the tower in close perspective and the lighthouse in the background helps to emphasize the idea of occupation and the domincance of the occupying forces upon the Channel Islands
in this image, I chose to have the lighthouse as the central feature of the image and incorporate the observation slits of the radio tower in the foreground to portray a sense of observation over the bay. i have altered the colour filters slightly in order to create a more vibrant image.
With this Particular image, i chose to use the silhouette of the radio tower combined with the calming colours of the clouds to create a contrast between the occupation associated with the fortification and the liberty and freedom of clouds

Final Edits

Here are my final edits for this shoot

Overall, I am deeply satisfied with this image due to the vibrance and warmth of the colours on display, as it has been manipulated yet seems still realistic. The depth of the colours create a dramatic effect whilst maintaining an aesthetically pleasing look
Within this image, I am pleased with how the tower is silhouetted against the dramatic colors of the sunset, Representing the idea that the scars of the occupation are still visible even to this day and that the fortifications are left as a constant reminder of the occupation of Jersey

With this image, I focused on capturing the texture of the clouds in the background as well as the iconic Corbiere lighthouse to create a dramatic effect and to also depict the idea of the fortifications still watching over the island landscape to this day. However, Now looking at the image, I find that I could crop the right hand side of the image slightly more in order to get rid of the sliver of blue backdrop present to create more of a framing effect, utilizing the radio tower to do just this
For this close up shot of the observation slits, I wanted to emphasize the texture of the concrete structure and compare it to the softness of the clouds within the background and I find that I have achieved just this to provide a string textural focused contrast within the image, representative of the harshness of occupation in comparison to the comforting image of freedom and open skys
With this image taken at the exact same location, I aimed to capture the drama of the sunset as well as the texture and formation of the clouds. In the mid left of the image, there is a seagull flying and I wanted to capture this particular image to use as a metaphor for liberation and freedom as the seagull flies free in an open sky