Final Piece Evaluation

Below is a photograph which showcases all of my final outcomes for the Journey’s and Pathway’s Project. As you can see all of the outcomes work together to showcase the Journey of the Second World War, as it shows different aspects which impacted Jersey Journey. I have been able to display my final images in many ways, to showcase different meanings and affects. Overall, I am very happy with the way my outcomes have turned out as they meet the project title, and showcase my top outcomes.

My first final piece is my most successful outcome, the simplistic way of framing showcases the already abstract and distorted images of the bunker. The image itself is strong enough making it effective to display it by itself, Moreover, it has strong links to Jersey’s Journey through the Second World War. If I was to redo this edit I would look at using a black frame as it would help to present more of a tonal contrast, making the overall outcome more visually stimulating.

My next final outcomes showcases two images which was inspired by the artist Knez. Originally, I had three images to display but scrapped one of the images as it was not as strong as the other two. I vertically displayed the two images on foam board, allowing the contemporary framing method to be used. If I was to redo this final piece I would look at using a more abstract and sculptural way of framing, to some extent distort the way we view the images.

My next final outcome was inspired by Talmor, as I showcase three images which have been teared to create one final image. This image is successful as it is ascetically pleasing to look at and has close links to the artist. I placed the image segments on a large piece of foam board. I really like the way this outcome has come out, due to the uniqueness of the design and how the viewers eyes are guided around the image. To improve this idea I would look at using foam board to slightly raise some segments to make an eclectic way of framing and it would also help to add to the overall effect.

My next final outcome showcases my 7 top images from the propaganda section of the project. The way of displaying is simplistic and allows the different posters to showcase my competence in camera and editing techniques. All the images compliment each other and clearly showcases my project title, Journey of Jersey through the Second World War. In my opinion this final outcome would be more successful if I used a larger cork board as the posters would not be overlapping one another.

For my last final outcome I have displayed my three sea wall edits, which was inspired by Socrates. I really like the way the physical wall displays my images of the walls as it allows the viewers to really thing about the purpose of the sea walls, which emphasizes the Journey of Jersey through the Second World War. I like how the wall is white as it does not distract viewers from the actual images themselves, and compliments the images. To improve this final piece I would look at making the wall and images bigger to emphases the size of the wall, and metaphorically shows the big part the walls played in the second world war.

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