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Out of my final outcomes I chose this as my final image because i think it represents all the aspects i explored in this project where i looked at how conventional objects having stories and personal connections to them. The mirror in this photo was owned by my grandma, the piano music is something which my granddad sent me in a letter when i was younger, and the newspaper background, which is seen in most of my images from the 3rd shoot, is newspaper dated back to Feburary 16th 1973 which i found in a box where my great great grandma’s silver tea set was kept. This shows how i took inspiration from Mari Mahr  when photographing this image as I’ve collected objects owned by past family members and displayed them all together, representing a part of myself, like she did in her photos. I edited this image black and white to interpret Mari Mahr’s work , but also it emphasises the interesting details and textures of the objects within the image. Like the crease and folds of the newspaper which is from 1973 showing how the condition over the past 45 years has deteriorated and the crease edges of the piano music. The black and white also emphasises the shadows created from the natural light coming from the left, shown on the right side underneath the piano music. I used natural light when taking this photo to give it a more authentic, eclectic effect like most of my images did in this project and didn’t want it to look too manipulated, giving the effect that someone could still be using these objects to this day.  The colour of the newspaper links to the other images as they all contain brown and yellow undertones, emphasisng the fact that what is being photographed is old. This contrasts with the off-white colour of the piano music, which also shows signs of ageing around the corners. The tones of the newspaper link into the colour of the outsides of the box containing the mirror. This makes the overall image more aesthetically pleasing as the colours and tones all complement each other and make for a more balanced image. I also reflected newspaper in the mirror so it wasn’t completely white and so it complements the newspaper background. I arranged the objects in a way so that the angles each object were placed at balanced each other out, e.g. the piano sheet music angled to the left, complemented the box with the mirror angled to right, together creating horizontal lines and different layers and aspects in the photo. I chose to take this image to show how an photo containing conventional objects can have historic links and also personal ones and that there is more to an object the  what meets the eye as there’s probably a story or personal connection to it.

Project Conclusion

Overall I think i have worked consistently  throughout this project, linking my images to the concept of how personal possessions and conventional objects have stories behind them. For example, in my fourth photo shoot I think the images I took represent the passage of time and absence, showing furniture and beds of people in the 1860’s, but the absence of people in the images show the history and how a conventional objects within a house can have more meaning than the purpose of what it was built for. This also links to my 3rd photo shoot where i took objects from my own family and photographed them together. I used objects such as my great great grandma’s tea set and my great uncles camera. These all link into the history side of photography and how conventional objects can also be passed down through families. This also links to my first photoshoot where I looked how the lives of people living in Jersey were affected by the occupation in 1940s,the overall concept of the images to represent daily life for islanders during and the idea that history and memories can be represented though conventional objects.

 

Final Outcomes

Image 1:

My first image is an edit from my 4th photo shoot. I cropped the original images to focus in on certain section of the original images. I did this to focus on the different textures created by the different materials on the beds in the Merchants house set in 1860’s at the Jersey Museum. I think the way this is displayed is more interesting than the images by themselves as it compares the different colours, tones, textures and patterns. I tried to emphasise the contrasting colours by using the different images containing different colours in each e.g the top left has cold blue colours, the top right has red curtains with pink tones in the bed sheets, the bottom left has green curtains with yellow undertones, and the bottom right has brown and yellow undertones. These colours would have been noticeable if the images were displayed by themselves separately, but are emphasised when displayed together. The concept of this image is to show how conventional objects and furniture have history and stories connected to them. The objects and furniture shown in these images create the impression that someone still uses them based of the casual appearance the settings give. This links to Walker Evan’s images where he pays particular attention to the inanimate objects that are present, almost representing them as characters themselves, also representing absence and the passage of time. My images show furniture and rooms like someone is living and using the furniture, but there aren’t any people, also representing, like Walker Evan, absence and the passage of time

Experimentation:

Displayed above is the original images that were cropped. Below i have displayed how i experimented with the cropping on each image.

This image has natural lighting which emphasises the yellow and brown undertones within the image. I specifically tried to make the images in this shoot look natural so the setting would not look manipulated and staged like it was in real life. I used a fast shutter speed when taking this image as i wanted it to be clear and detailed with no blur. This photo has a range of light and dark tones within it, the bottom left corner is dark brown and contrasts with the lighter colours of the bed sheets and the light shining through the window. When experimenting with cropping i decided to focus on the textures created through the materials of the bed sheets and draping around the bed.

This image contains warm and cool colours, the bedding having yellow tones contrasting with the cooler green colour of the draping from the four post bed. There are vaeriety of patterns created in this image, from the squares on the wardrobe door contrasting with the vertical lines created by the material of the green drapings. When cropping this image i wanted to incorporate the pattern created by the green draping but also she the texture of the bedding.The image on the top left has cold tones from the wallpaper behind which contrast with the dark metal bars in front. The bars from the bed create bold geometric shapes within the image and shadows behind, adding more depth to the image. When cropping this image i wanted this image to contrast from the other cropped images so looked at the geometric shapes and lines compared to the texture and patterns of the material in the other images. I also wanted to show the shadows created.

This image contains pink tones and shows the red draping from the four post bed. I cropped this image, focusing on the bed sheets on the left side rather than the window and light on the right side as I think the lighting is too bright and intense. By cropping the audience doesn’t get distracted by a bright light, but the bed it still lit up naturally from it. I like the contrast on the red draping to the bed sheet that has yellow tones and also the pattern of vertical lines created by the draping and the pattern printed on the bed sheet. I wanted to incorporate all these features when i cropped the original image

Compare and Contrast

One similarity between mine and Walker Evans photography from his book ‘Message from the Interiors’  as we both pay particular attention to the inanimate objects that are present, almost representing them as characters themselves. I think the images I took represent the passage of time and absence, showing furniture and beds of people in the 1860’s, but the absence of people in the images show the history and how a conventional objects within a house can have more meaning than the purpose of what it was built for.    One difference between mine and Walker Evan’s images are that my images are of settings recreated of the 1860’s, whereas his images are actually depicting the 1960’s, the time he was living in. He uses black and white photography presenting the bed as they are in that time in single photographs, whereas I display my images as a collection of coloured images. I decided not to edit my images black and white as when i was editing i focused on the contrast between the warm and cold colours between each picture and the contrast in textures. If i had edited the images in black and white it wouldn’t show the contrast in colours and therefore the textures wouldn’t be significantly different.

Image 2:

This second image is from my 3rd photoshoot. The mirror in this photo was owned by my grandma, the piano music is something which my grandad sent me in a letter when i was younger, and the newspaper background, which is seen in most of my images from this shoot, is newspaper dated back to Feburary 16th 1973 which i found in a box where my great great grandma’s silver tea set was kept. This is my favourite image from the 3rd shoot as it includes different aspects of my family that are important to me, combined together and shown in one image. It also links closely into Mari Mahr’s work using deeply personal objects and resoning behind her images. I chose to take this image to show how an photo containing conventional objects can have historic links and also personal ones and that there is more to an object the  what meets the eye as there’s probably a story or personal connection to it. For example, in this image I used objects from past family members displayed together in one picture showing how what might just look like objects arranged in a certain way  actually have personal and autobiographical meaning with stories behind them,

I experimented with both artificial lighting and natural lighting and found that natural created a more authentic, personal look, compared to the artificial that made the objects look staged, manipulated and in the spotlight. The natural lighting coming from the left side lights up all aspects of the photo but focuses more on the left side of the image, emphasing the folds and creases in the newspaper and creating a small shadow on the right side from underneath the piano music.This allows for a range of tones to be presented. For many of my images in this photoshoot i used a tripod, but for this image i didn’t as it’s taken from an above angle, so i used fast shutter speed.

The newspaper, used as one of the background layers in this image, creates an interesting texture as it dates back to 1973,  showing how the condition over the past 45 years has deteriorated. The colour of the newspaper links to the other images as they all contain brown and yellow undertones, emphasisng the fact that what is being photographed is old. This contrasts with the off-white colour of the piano music, which also shows signs of ageing around the corners. The tones of the newspaper link into the colour of the outsides of the box containing the mirror. This makes the overall image more aesthetically pleasing as the colours and tones all complement each other and make for a more balanced image. I also reflected newspaper in the mirror so it wasn’t completely white and so it complements the newspaper background. I arranged the objects in a way so that the angles each object were placed at balanced each other out, e.g. the piano sheet music angled to the left, complemented the box with the mirror angled to right, together creating horizontal lines and different layers and aspects in the photo

Experimentation

I edited the image in different ways, one way to interpret Mari Mahr’s work more, one to emphasis the shadows in the image and others to experiment with the tone of the image.

I decided to choose the black and white image as my final piece as it interprets Mari Mahr’s work, but also emphasises the mall details within the image, like the shadows created by the creases in the old newspapers and shadows that have been created on the right side of the box by the light shining in the left.

Compare and Contrast

I think it  is hard to compare photos to the style of Mari Mahr as each of her photographs is so different, unique and represents a different part of herself and her life within it, being deeply personal. So i’ve displayed a selection of her photography above in comparison to mine. One similarity between our images is that we both used personal objects that have meaning in our lives. She uses objects from her family, photos and objects that remind her of her mother, and objects that remind her of her childhood in Geneva. In my photos i used objects that were owned by me and my family members. For example, a tea set owned by my great great grandma in 1896, piano music my grandfather sent to me in a letter when I was younger, a camera owned by my great uncle, and my grandmas mirror, all linking to me my family history. Both me and Mari Mahr’s photos are autobiographical and have connections to out families and childhoods wishing the images. On difference between mine and Mari Mahr;s work is that her work addresses universal human concerns regarding where it is that each of us come from, and where it is that we each belong. My work does not do this as much as i focused on linking my images to my family history, although does address how where each of us comes from in terms of my family.

Image 3:This 3rd image is from my second photoshoot, taking inspriation from the artist Giorgio Morandi where his painting have contain simple domestic objects with solid colour background creating a simplistic yet detailed image. I decided to use these images as one of my final outcomes as it significantly contrasts with my other images from this project and shows the variety within my work.  The others taking a more authentic, eclectic style looking at the history of objects and the personal connections and stories behind them. This image however still links in to the idea of objects having a story and personal connections, but look at it in a much more modern way, using bold colours and geometric patterns within the image.

The lighting used in this image is artificial, i used this so the whole image was lit up rather than a certain section. This emphasises the bright colours and the objects in the foreground of the photo. The second image of this collection is closer up than the first, gaining a different perspective on the same scene. Most of the colour used in these images are cold, which is another aspect that contrasts form my other images form this project where they mostly use brown and yellow tones creating an authentic look. The cold colour used make the images seem more modern, although the objects in these images are not. This demonstrates how a certain backgrounds can change the concept of the image, and even make the audience think the photos are taken in a different time. These images create geometrical shapes and focus on the straight lines eg. the horizontal line across the background contrasting with the vertical lines on the vase showing how it’s 3D. When arranging these domestic objects I looked at the levels each objects where at, placing the vase in the center as it’s the tallest and the main object because of it’s colour. I placed the smaller white objects either side of the vase to complement it , putting them at different angles to gain different perspectives of each image. In the second image I took the photo with sides of the two objects coming of the photo, creating a different composition than the first image so I could display them together. The concept behind this image is linked into the theme coneventions like all my other photoshoots in this project, looking at domestic household objects and looking at how an object may only be seen as the purpose it was made for, but can have personal stories and connections behind. This reasoning is the same as my other still life photographs, except this photo shoot was more staged and planned.

Experimentation:To edit and experiment with the original images i decided that the solid colors in the images could be easily change so i could see if warm or cool colours would look better. I adjusted the hue in photo shoot and change the colours on each of the images. The original images contained the warm colour orange, yellow , and red, wheres the best edited versions had blue and green changing the overall tone of the images from warm to cool.

Compare and Contrast

One similarity between mine and the artist Giorgio Morandi’s work is that we both looked at domestic household objects, presenting them simplistically with plain background and solid colours. Although his painting’s were simplistic they were detailed at the same time looking at the tone and textures of the objects he was painting. I also think i have achieved this in my photographs, for example I emaphasised the dark vertical lines  going the the vase in the center of the image to create depth and show how the object is 3D. One difference between mine and Giorgio Morandi’s work is that where he uses neutral tones like cream, brown, oranges for his background and objects, I used bright bold colours. My original image had a bright yellow and orange background, but i edited so it’s blue in one image and green in the other. I did this as i think the bright colours emphasise the objects in the foreground. Another similarirty between mine and Giorgio Morand’s work is that in nearly every still life painting, he has a horizontal line creating a division through the center of the image, splitting it in half. I also tried to achieve this in my images, showing the contrast from the darker tones behind the objects and the lighter tone underneath. Creating this horizontal line adds more depth to the image as it make the set the objects are placed look 3D. If the background was only one colour than the image would look 2D.

Edits

To experiment with the presentation of my images and to start displaying images from all the photo shoots combined I explored different layouts and arrangements of the photos.

This first layout are images from my fourth photoshoot where i went to the Jersey museum and took photos in the style of Evan Walker. For this edit I focused in on smaller sections of the images and cropped them into square shapes so the overall layout would be square and symmetrical. Focusing in on certain sections of the original images. I did this as i liked the photos as single images but think more of a concert is formed when the are displayed together.

I also tried editing the images into different arrangements like horizontal and vertical rows seeing which ones looked the most aesthetically pleasing. I found that this worked less well that the display of 4 as the composition in each image is too similar but adding the fourth image balances it out, also making the overall display symmetrical and balanced.

The images shown below I have edited on photo shop so that the colour in each photo is different. I did this so I could display a selection of the same images together, rather than having a single image by itself. It also develops from the original image. I decided to edit bright colours rather than in the neutral tones that Giorgio Morandi used in hi paintings as I didn’t want to completely copy his style and wanted to make my photographs unique in some way.

I tried arranging the different coloured images in different layouts, repeating the same images more than once in different colours and also incorporating other images from the same photoshoot to gain a different perspective of the same setting. The bold, bright colours I have edited in emphasise the straight lines and geometrical shapes within the image, and also emphasise the objects in the foreground of the image . I found the images that worked best were the ones with the greatest contrast between the two colours in the background from dark to light as it creates a division across the image and adds another aspect, rather than the background being plain like the first part of that photoshoot.

Displaying my Prints:

For the images I printed out i wanted to display them as a collection of images together rather than single images by themselves. If these images were displayed separately I don’t think they would make sense, displaying them together gives the images a story. They also all link together though the brown and yellow tones in each image, giving the display as a whole an authentic and eclectic style. I decided on using a white background as it emphasises the yellow tones within the images and makes the photos seem brighter.

Photoshoot-4

 

For my fourth photoshoot I decided to go to the Jersey Museum and focus on the Merchant’s house, looking at the old furniture. I wanted to interpret Walker Evan’s photography, specifically the photos in his book ‘ Message from the interior’ where he pays particular attention that he pays to the inanimate objects that are present, almost representing them as characters themselves.

The Merchants house is a recreation of the home of Dr. Charles Ginestet, homeopathic doctor and political activist. The house was built in the English Georgian Style in 1818 by Philippe Nicolle, in what was then the red light district of St. Helier. It has been furnished to represent what it would have looked like in 1862.

Philipe Nicole was one of the most successful merchants pf his time with about 20 ships. He and his wife had 13 children but upon his death in 1836 the house was left to one of his daughters, Jeanne.

At the age of 47 Jeanne met Charles Ginestet who had been imprisoned in France for his political views and was recently widowed with three children to support. Within the year Jeanne married Charles who moved into the house with his children.

Technical
  • The lighting used in this image is natural, the light coming from the window on the right. This gives the image a more authentic look as it doesn’t look manipulated or too intense. I used a fast shutter speed so there was no blur in my image.
  • The angle this image was taken looks at the a four post bed from a sideways angle creating an interesting composition, rather than the image being taken from a front angle.
  • This images ranges with dark brown tones to light ones, dark brown in the bottom left corner, which is then contrasted with the light bed sheets and canopies which have yellow and brown undertones.
Visual
  • The lighting in this image creates light undertones, linking on with my other images from my project where the images look authentic and natural.
  • I specifically wanted to photograph beds when i went to the merchants house as i wanted to interpret Walker Evan’s images of different beds in houses from the book ‘Message from the Interior’.
  • The texture created by the material on the bed is what i focused on when taking the photo which gives the image depth and adds more detail. There’s a contrast in patterns made by different materials on and around the bed, e.g the checked pattern on the bed sheet, compared to the texture of the blanket on top and the pattern on the canopies on the four posts.
  • This image depicts what a bedroom was like 1860, the appearance of the bed looks like a person has just slept in it and the casual placing of the furniture and the ornaments surrounding the bed giving the appearance of a natural setting rather than a staged one. This makes it easy for the audience to imagine that the image was taken in 1860.
Contextual
  • The image is taken of a recreation of a bedroom from the 1860’s in the Merchant’s house.
  • I took these images of the recreation of bedrooms and rooms in the 1800’s as i wanted to show what life was like then and show how conventions have stayed the same and some have changed. E.g some aspects like furniture have stayed similar, but the conventions of how we live have changed from the 1800’s to now.
Conceptual
  • I wanted to take photos of furniture from a house in the 1880’s to link to my projects theme of how conventional objects and furniture have history and stories connected to them.
  • The objects and furniture shown in these images create the impression that someone still uses them based of the casual appearance the settings give.
  • This links to Walker Evan’s images where he pays particular attention to the inanimate objects that are present, almost representing them as characters themselves, also representing absence and the passage of time.
  • My images show furniture and rooms like someone is living and using the furniture, but there aren’t any people, also representing, like Walker Evan, absence and the passage of time.

Rooms shown in the pictures:

Anne Nicolle’s bedroom:
  • Her room is decorated in red, reflecting her family’s association with the Rose party.
  • Gas lighting was installed in the 1830’s but paraffin lamps and candles were still used.
  • Her was an ‘Albert’ with a partial canopy curtained for privacy and warmth and four posts.
Sydney Nicolle’s bedroom:
  • His father (Jeanne’s brother) died and his mother remarried and movies to England, too he stay in Jersey and lived with his aunt Jeanne.
  • His room was very simply furnished with a brass bed and various Militia items- uniform and sword.
Berthe and Alice Ginestet’s Bedroom:
  • They shared the albert bed for warmth, and it was unusual for everyone to have their own bedroom in 1862.
  • The room is typically floral with French wallpaper, drapes and privacy screen
Schoolroom
  • Education in 1862 was not compulsory but those wealthy enough employed a governess to educate their children at home.
  • Toys were designed for an educational purpose or to develop skills to take you into adult life.
  • In a horse drawn society, a young boy would need to know how to ride a horse which is what the rocking horse was for.
  • Jigsaws orientated from cutting out maps and scenes and fitting them back together, and the cup and ball encouraged hand/eye coordination and was known to be played by Queen Victoria.
  • Children’s clothes did not exist before 1860 an they wore cut down versions of adult clothes i.e. sailor suits.

The flooring throughout the house is mahogany, imported from South America on board one of Nicolle’s ships. The floors were caulked with tarred string, like the deck of the ship. Victorians liked to show off their wealth, particularly if they were ‘new money’. The clothes they wore and the buildings they lived in demonstrated this. Paintings were often displayed in the hallways indicating the occupant’s wealth and status because this is where the guests were received.

I edited some of the images from the photoshoot black and white to better interpret Walker Evan’s work and displayed them above. Below I have shown some of his photography to compare our images. I think I successfully interpreted his work paying particular attention to the inanimate objects that are present, almost representing them as characters themselves. I think the images I took represent the passage of time and absence, showing furniture and beds of people in the 1860’s, but the absence of people in the images show the history and how a conventional objects within a house can have more meaning than the purpose of what it was built for. In one of Walker Evan’s images shown below it displays a bed where it is clear someone is living in it as the bed is unmade like someone has just slept in it, which is also what I think i showed in my images. One difference between mine and Walker Evan’s images are that my images are of settings recreated of the 1860’s, whereas his images are actually depicting the 1960’s, time he was living in.

 

Evaluation and idea artist comparison

For my chosen final pieces I was mainly inspired by two artist being:

 Midori Harima

Comparison between artists work and mine:Harimas work is based around creating a 3d collage being a print off of her own image and wrapping this around a head structure to form a sculptor,I interpreted this as cutting up pieces from my portrait images and making this into a collage and then forming it in a curved manner to look 3d,I think it is quite evident to see the similarities between the pieces.And that my inspired piece works well with the techniques used.

conceptually it is an interesting piece as is symbolises different aspects of human emotion, the lighting to form a shadow is also effective as it further enhanced the three dimensional feel to the piece itself.

 

Connie imboden

Second comparison:My main inspiration for this was themes of isolation from the behaviour of water, my image is a lot more abstract with a strong essence of movement, yet still has a similar composition and a similar facial expression to the artists work.Due to the unreliability of how the sea would be I think this is the most accurate presentation I could have to the artist. My other images all still carry the same concept of her work throughout.

Overall evaluation of project and final display:

Overall I think this project is very different to any work I have done before and very diverse within itself which using collage, themes of nature and behaviour; and finally  mirroring and editing techniques to remove features of a persons identity.I am happy with the final images I am left with and think they do reflect what I originally wanted to show through my work from the start. My work is clearly inspired by my artists but not a complete carbon copy,making  sure to add my own technique or additional themes of  human behaviour, isolation or loss of identity. when focusing on the words of:codes,conevtnions and secrets I feel as though I have touched on them all, being the ‘conventions’ of human behaviour and how we as humans are influenced through others behaviours,and also the unreliable behaviour of nature. Secondly ‘secrets’ is seen through the loss of identity and removal of features alongside the lack of presentation to people we think we know. lastly ‘codes’ is seen through the repetition of these characteristics  throughout many groups of people as if it is a code to be followed. There is a large range of editing between each shoot, the shoots are more concentrated on removal of identity I edited out significant features and used this to enhance the images.I also used photo techniques of mirroring and collage ,so overall using a large combination of many different ideas.The majority of my work is purely tonal shades of black and white, this is due to this being more appropriate to the pieces and themes behind them. At the beginning of the project I wanted to focus more on surrealism and I do think I have incorporated  some of these themes into my work, although I do think it has come out more of a direct portraiture observation,but with a complex presention and still does not fit wihtin the generic conventions of portraiture work.Overall I think this project is very unique and does apply to my themes and the outcomes I think all work well together.

 

Final display ideas

 

Set 1;

For this final outcome I want to frame all three of these images on window frames with black border, the top two I will lay across a long a3 size board with a small gap in the middle.I said earlier about these images all being highly impactful and able to have them all attached with black strings or metals bars to the image below.This could symbolise as emotion of human behaviour suspended.

However This is the new and updated version,I think the top piece is a lot more effective and works better with the concept of hanging the image bellow,addtinally because this is the same person edited in different manner it is an interesting  overall concept and I think works well.I think these two piece should be a4 size and then attached to each other with a black metal bar or black string. Both of these images will be on white board to make them have more depth and possibly a black boarder surrounding the images.

Set 2;

I will present this piece separately due to it not being landscape and also being more unique as it has the edited wave at the bottom and it being a portrait.The image will be a3 on white board surrounded by a black window frame.

The black boarder on its own removes the light tones and I don’t  think this works best.However the white and black double boarder  is more visually appealing and works better conceptually. I chose this layout as all the images are alined and in from and facing a similar direction, I don’t think it would look as good going horizontal as it would be an uneven too long of a line. I would like all these four images from this set to be a3 and have. a large strong impact altogether.

Overall this is what I want my outcome to look like, I think this overall layout is interesting and will be effective in displaying all the sets of images in the best way.

I think the inner boarder works well highlighting the images but the darker one surrounding is needed to finish off the form of the images,because of this I will put them on white board and then into a black window frame. I will do the same with all the images and then hang and present them like this:

 

 

Final images and possible additional editing

My first final outcome range

I chose this image as it contains a mirroring self removal of identity and questions the codes and conventions of people and how they act in groups when presented against another being. I think this is successful due to the tones and the removed fragments but after consideration I do not think is the most entertaining or edited to the level I would want for a finished piece.

I chose this to be a final image as it successful conveys my themes of presenting many aspects of human behaviour and emotion presenting one identity and being, due to this being a collage of a photoshoot I had done it is increasingly abstract ,tonally and yet also demonstrates a distortion wihtin people and a secret that we hold in out identity. Overall I think the composition of this image is interesting and still allows a three dimensional  aspect of realism. I think this image has such a strong impact and I would want the size around a3 and to be printed on its own on a large black canvas.

This was originally a development idea for a final piece but I have since released I do not think the top piece is the most successful, because off this I will continue on the idea of hanging the collaged face piece but accompanied with a different piece on top. 

This image I have decided will definitely be accompanied with the collage piece, as it is interesting wihtin the mirror lines and the shades and again connotes a direct eye contact and a humanness mirrored of different emotions of different self, it proposes the idea what is real and if what we are seeing a a reflection of something untrue or if it is real.

I was considering this piece as a final but then have realised it,s not the most effective due to the editing not being the best and not finished to the standard I would want, although it would work well In a series it is not the standard of image I would want  to show.

Second final outcomes

I then decided to focus on these following images as I think the moulding of the behaviour of nature and humans is more effective and the unpredictability of the water accompanied with additional editing has made a more accomplished set of images. I will have these four images as my main set, but separate this profile image and have it as its one successful separate image. I think this image is interesting with the amount of circular curves around the person, this allows a secret of hidden identity and being submerged and separated from society from being wihtin the water. Additionally the wave from below is interesting as it connotes tones of smoke and a gradually movement to the piece.

wihtin this image there is an emotion of isolation but it is highly accomplished and effective with the isolating pale tones of water contrasting to the darker face and direct eye contact to the camera.The composition works well as the face is at the bottom of the image as if it is being swept away.

This images I wanted to show a removal of being and an aspect of  trying to escape the image, this simple editing enhances the image and still holds a simplicity.I chose this because it too still sticks to my themes and will work successful among the others. 

lastly I chose this images as there is a syncricity wihtin the previous and holds themes of escapism and surrleism within the hand almost coming through and out of the image, the textures on the floor also enhance a movement being surrounded by the water.Overall all these 6 photos(2 sets) of images will be successful and still convey human behaviour in two different environments and subject matters.

Secrets, Codes and Conventions – Final Outcomes + Presentation Methods

These are the final two photographs that I want to use for my final piece in the externally set assignment. I chose these two photographs as they both reflect the abandoned theme within Gregory Berg’s work and both contain long pathways that lead the eye of the viewer from the front to the back of the photograph.

For the presentation of my photographs I will be looking at either presenting it on a black or white board or a combination of both. I think that because of the dark nature of the photographs I will be used a black background to compliment it and to not create too much contrast with the background but a white background along with the black may create some aesthetically pleasing contrast

Experimentation

On black board then white board

On black board

On white board

On white board then black board

For my final presentation I have decided that I will present the two photographs on white board then then on black board. I have decided this as it will provide contrast whilst helping to separate the photographs from the background which makes the photographs and the shadows/colours within them more emphasised.

Secrets, Codes and Conventions – Selection and Editing

These are the final three images that I have shortlisted for my final presentation for the externally set assignment. I definitely want to incorporate all three of these photographs into my final presentation but I like the landscape images better and don’t think that the portrait photograph will fit in very well. Because of this I want to photoshop the photographs in order to incorporate it into one of the landscape images.

I decided to incorporate it into the photograph with the gates in it as the shape of the photograph fitted the shape of the gates suitably. I started off by placing the portrait photograph over the gate and then I changed the opacity of the photograph from 100% to 45% so that the gates behind the photograph would show through and the portrait photograph would merge into the landscape photograph.

Below is the final composition of the edit, to me this reflects how many different paths and areas there are to the subway, and the different secret passages that are unknown/out of bounds to the majority of people.

Jesse Draxler:shoot 4

For this shoot I really wanted to focus again upon the conventions of human behavior being  neglected and removed from being treated as a person as this is what the artist does. I wanted to edit the images in order to reflect a personal emotion onto the image and present how human behavior works through the overall representation of the image itself.

original photos,contact sheet:

Final edits:

For these two images I was inspired by some of draxlers images where he cuts different profiles and angles them up in order to form a new composition of faces and a new style and angle to the original.I wanted to completely alter the images in order to create a whole different meaning behind them.

The editing for these images I  wanted to connote the removal of identity and how the unique abstract purposes a complexity to human behaviour. Although there is still a strong highlighted effect of surrealism within the images,the effect of emptiness creates a sense of suspension and secrecy within the image as they no loner represent who they are.

To edit the images I wanted to remove sections of structure and a flowing sense wihtin the face, In this case being the cheeks line and the side of the face,addtionally I wanted an absence of eyes wihtin the images, to do this I used instant alpha and removed sections at a time,but it was not as smooth as I wanted the overall image, because of this I filled in tonally with the brush tool with the same skin tone and rounded off the edges.This is more effective and creates a better overall finish to the images.lastly I created shade within the inside white area to create a more three dimensional real effect to the images.

Final edit:

Similarly with the previous image I wanted to remove the eye but then copy that section below to form many missing sections of eyes, again to do this I used instant alpha and then used photoshop to smooth over the image and make it seamless throughout(using the smudge tool),This image is meant to presets a mask to identity but still an absence of our real behaviour.

Final edit:

similarly I repeated this technique but wanted to form an effect of a mask so not blending the eyes in but showing a shape that has been repeated, to do so I experienced in different methods to find the most successful:

 

Final edit:

Final edit:This image is purposely experimentation to try and remove and cover a different sense of identity and not just purely eyes.

The next two images I think are less successful and more concentrated on experimentation;within these images I wanted to find an interesting composition of repetition of faces of different angles and edit them all into one to from an abstract and surrealistic piece. I did this similarly to my artists inspiration of demonstrating the combination of many different human emotions that we have and representing this in an abstract method.

Final edit:

I edited the images by removing the body and editing only the sections of the faces that I wanted,I the framed them into an interesting composition and surged the lines to form a more synced piece.

Final edit:

Overall I think the most successful images was the removal of facial features, this is due to the most successful editing and a simplicity but effectiveness of connection of human absence within the images themselves.