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analysis, sequencing and development of final book display

The sequencing and development of final photo-book, started off with thinking and discussing the final theme and narrative story which I want to show throughout my book. I believed I wanted it to still have strong connotations to the sublime, but also relations to emotions given off by the images. This then led me to ask myself, which of my shoots were the most successful, yet also work together through a sub- chronological story. To my mind, I believe my most powerful, emotional and successful shoots I have so far, are the sublime water ones. This leads me to choose the primary imagery from 4 shoots, and the other 10 shoots to be used to separate and create a more interesting narrative, yet without removing the theme that I want. I then wanted to choose a handful of 50 images from the primary shoots, and an additional 20 additional edits and images from the shoots less linked to the sublime, in order to create a variation and to keep interest throughout the photo book. These images where then categorise to what sizes would be most complimentary for their simply. So I ended up with a variation of images able to be on a double page spread e.t.c. I was very careful that when I started my composition for the book itself, not to allow two similar images, or similar layouts of images next to each-other and this repetition does not look correct and does not feel natural when going through the book. I wanted the structure to flow easily, yet still have a clear peak interest in each and every one of the images I used landscapes, and underwater images in order to operate many of The portrait’s throughout my work. Although all of the images have a clear conviction and interest of a certain point or another, It was still clearly apparent I needed an interesting set of images to divide up my photo-book. Because of This I decided to add images which have a mystical influence of rocks covered in different developments of rainbow patterns.

The development of my photo-book:

Other options, I decided on my final layout however as there was a good natural flow of colour synergy and the amount fo images within he dynamics of portraiture and landscapes.

My final photo book presentation:

 

Front cover and back cover:

I chose this image in particular for many reasons, The first being the dark tones and deepness of the water creates a sense fo mystery and reinforces he fact of the book being about pleasure and pain. Secondly the use of water in itself is important as this is a key essence continuously repeated throughout my photo-book. So I believe it is a necessity to demonstrate clearly what will also be seen within my book. The front cover is also quite interesting in that side is quite abstract, it is divided into two half,  giving away any information about the rest of the image itself. This plain front allows a clear and informative title, which can easily be shown. However due to the amount of portraits within the book itself, To have a face visible as part of the front cover is important. However due to it only being visible on the back is interesting as it almost creates a narrative experience, and puts the aspect of human vs nature all into one narrative image. This is why I feel as though this image is definitely the most successful.

what my book title is and why:

I chose ‘The Evolution Of Essentialism’ Due to it being a pivotal part of my photography essay, additionally, essentialism has a clear link to water as it is a primary part of living, so also creates a clear indication of my subject from right at the beginning. The evolution part links in well throughout how water can be linked back to romanticism, Pictorialism and surrealism yet still be used to make an array of different sublime imagery seen through portraiture and landscape, as seen within the book.

The stories I used within my final photo-book are the following:

1:“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime,
attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt”

2:’A meditation rose on me that night
Upon the lonely mountain when the scene
Had passed away, and it appeared to me
The perfect image of a mighty mind,
Of one that feeds upon infinity,
That is exalted by an under-presence,
The sense of God, or whatso’er is dim
Or vast in its own being’

3:“Whatever is fitted in any sort to excite the ideas of pain, and danger, that is to say, whatever is in any sort terrible, or is conversant about terrible objects, or operates in a manner analogous to terror, is a source of the sublime; that is, it is productive of the strongest emotion which the mind is capable of feeling.”

4:’The sounding cataract Haunted me like a passion: the tall rock,The mountain, and
the deep and gloomy wood,
Their colours and their forms, were then to me An appetite;
a feeling and a love’

 

Final Photobook and Evaluation

71 pages

Evaluation of Project and Photo Book:

In conclusion, I think i approached the project Political Landscapes successfully and developed my concept of the changing environment thoroughly. I started my project with the intention of exploring issues of pollution and plastic specifically, taking inspiration from the photographer Mandy Barker and experimented in my first shoot by taking images with string infront of the lens looking at rules of manipulation. I then found the photobook ‘The Meadow’ by photographers Barbara Bosworth and Margot Anne Kelley which is what first interested me in photographing and exploring specific areas, as well as gathering objects and photographing them. I also discovered the photographer Chrystel Lebas and her photobook ‘Field Studies: Walking through Landscapes and Archives’ which is where I read about the changing environment. She compared her modern images to the photography of Edward James Salisbury in the early 20th century and walked in his footsteps, going to the same areas he did to explore how the environment had changed over 100 years. This is where I decided that the concept for my project would be looking at how the natural environment had changed over 90 years at the location La Motte. I found archival images from this area and thought i would build my photobook around them, comparing and contrasting them to my own images. I noticed Lebas’ influences from sublime ideologies by Edmund Burkina his book ‘Enquiry into the Origin of our Ideas of the Sublime and the Beautiful’,with her images being vast and other-worldly, which is an aspect I wanted to reflect in my own work.  From then on, I did an additional five shoots where i went and took landscape images of La Motte and at the same time gathered natural objects that i found on the island and the beach i.e. rocks, seaweed, flowers. I did multiple shoots where I photographed these objects formally with plain background and edited them to reflect the work of early botanists where they used light sensitive paper to create photograms. I did this as i thought it would give my project and photobook a scientific appearance and reflect that of an investigation into a specific area. Towards my final shoots, I walked around La Motte and tried to find man made objects that I could photograph to perhaps represent how the natural landscape had changed.

The front and back cover of my photobook is the same continuous archival image taken at La Motte showing the eastern end of the grave with E T Nicolle, J Sinel and J Sinel junior within the photo. I choose this as my front and back cover as I think it intrigues the reader and I also specifically liked the composition. The earth of green island fills up 3/4 of the image with the man on the bottom level looking up towards the two men at the top. Also I think because it is in black and white it creates a more authentic and historical appearance for the book. I didn’t include the title of the book on the front cover, and just had it along the spine off the book so there was more mystery when opening the book. The first page contains the title of the book ‘La Motte’ and the sub title ‘Walking through Landscapes and Archives’ which is inspired by Chrystel Lebas’s book title ‘Field Studies: Walking through Landscapes and Archives’ as her photo book is something I take a lot of inspiration from in my project, so including the same sub title immediately connects my work to hers. The second page contains an full page photo of one of the images from my photogram section in my book. I thought that I would include this as my first image as I think that it interests the reader about my project without giving too much away. On the other page I included the text: “La Motte is a tidal island, and listed archaeological site, also known as Green Island, located in the Vingtaine de Samarès in the parish of St Clement on the south-east coast of Jersey, Channel Islands.” I did this so the reader had some background information about the area they will be looking at and by informing them about the history makes the project more understandable. On the forth and fifth page i included an archivel image across the two pages of of the naturalist and archaeologist Joseph Sinel at the excavation. I used this as a double page as i liked the diagonal shape of the earth, making an interesting composition, as well as the position Sinel is sitting in.  I then contrasted this image with the sixth and seventh page showing one of my own images. I used the same layout, but mirrored, creating variety in the sequence of the book. I chose this image to contrast with the archival one as i liked the bright blue sky and detailed rocks in the foreground in comparison to the black and white image of the earth. Also because of the similar composition of the diagonal line and shape in the center of the image. This creates a more modern interpretation of the archival one. For the next two double pages I contrasted one of my images to an archival one using a full page and a smaller photo as the layout on the first double page, and the mirrored on the second. This creates the repetition of mirroring the layout to the previous one, producing a more interesting sequence of images. I included more text in these two double pages about the excavation and what was found there as that is what is happening in the archival images displayed and by explaining more about it makes the book easier to understand. The 12th and 13th page is the fist double page image inside my photo book. I chose this image as the liked how it has different sections all showing different aspects of the beach ie. blue sky, rocks, sand, creating an interesting composition for a double page spread. In the 14th and 16th double pages I chose to display the images 3/4 of the way onto the oppsite page as if these image were displayed as full pages I think hat important detail would be cut off due to how the book would be printed. By diplaying the images like this it shows more of the details in the images, with less being cut off. Especially on the 16th double page where the main subject of the image in the incinerator which is centered, meaning that this would be cut off in printing. Across these two double pages I mirrored the layout again to keep variety in the sequence.

For the rest of the landscape images in my photo book, 8 double pages display one of my modern images contrasted alongside an archival one. When chosing these combinations I tried to find similarities between the two images so that they would complement each other but also contrast each other. For example the 21st page displays one of my images of the earth of green island at a close up angle which i contrasted with a similar archival image of the earth from the early 20th century on the opposite page. In my image i tried to emphasise the warm colours, as well as the light and shadows. This then contrasts to the black and white of the archival image, complementing each other. Another example is the 25th page where I used the archival image of a skull and contrast it to one of my modern image, the main subject being a rock.  I think this this combination of images works well as the shape of the bright rock in my image resembles the shape of a skull and is a similar colour. This creates a link between the two images which I think makes a good layout, linking the past to the present. When editing I brightened the rock so it was more noticeable, which i think also makes the link more noticeable. I also like the contrast in the background of the two images. The archival image has a lack background as it’s a formally taken photo, this then contrast to the background of my image which is brown rocks, adding more detail to the image. I also used various full double page images where I specifically edited them so they have emphasised blue tones to increase the vastness to reflect sublime. I used the graduated filter in light room to make the skies more dramatic and to contrast more the bottom halves of the images.The one layout which was completely different to any other landscape imagery was on the 41st page where i only displayed one image across the double page spread, one of the page being blank. I chose this layout for this image as I think that it’s a powerful image and by putting emphasise on it will make the reader pay more attention to it. I specifically like this image for many reasons, the main one being the cross in the center of the image that I think links to the previous archival imagery of the excavations where they found bodies. I also like the composition in this image as it is split into three sections , with the cross in the centre of them. The bottom part is darker part of the image, the dark brown tones contrasting to the light blue ones in the sea. The tones in the  bottom part of the image link to that on the horizon which creates a more aesthetically pleasing image. This is also because the blue tones in the sea complement the colour of the sky.

Towards the end of my photo book I included a series of images completely different to the landscape images in the first part of my book. I was inspired by the work of Chrystel Lebas in her photo book ‘Field Studies’ where she included a section towards the end called ‘Plant Portraits or Weeds & Aliens Species’ taking inspiration from the way Edward Salisbury documented species by uprooting them and photographing them by using  photogenic paper- she produce her own interpretations of his work. I tried to create the appearance of a photo gram by inverted the images and adjusting the hues to create variations of the same image. I then displayed these together in my photo book. I also think these edits reflect the photograms that early botanists made with light. One example is Anna Atkins’ photograms of algae in 1843 which is a botanist i took inspiration from in my 5th photoshoot.  I then ended my photobook with a single full page image of the rope i found at La Motte as I think it represents how the landscape has changed from a fully natural one, to one that’s now has man made objects affecting the natural environment.

Overall, I think my photo book sums up my political landscapes project well, the images showing the final outcomes of my developed ideas. I think that the contrast between the archival images of La Motte and my own images is effective in representing how the natural environment is changing. Also the edited variations of the objects I gathered shows the final outcomes of the colour experimentation i developed throughout my project. Photographing natural landscape is an aspect to photography I wasn’t as used to as I normally focus on buildings and industrial structures and by moving away from this, I think i produced a range of images that are unlike any I’ve photographed before with a different appearance and atmosphere.

Here is an online link to my photobook: La Motte: Walking through Landscapes and Archives

text to put inside my photobook

I belive after much research it would probably be too much text if I were to research stories, because of this I belive I will focus on quotes and short stories about the sublime. I wanted to start off by looking at poems which attempt to describe the sublime, which is a great relation to the subjectivity it has. With this I believe it would be possible to connect these explanation of what someone sees and connect them to my own imagery. The poems are divided into more abstract and contemporary feeling describing what the sublime is, combined with a more of a defiant research by a philosopher or writer describing what he thinks the sublime is, and what it means to people.

A meditation rose on me that night
Upon the lonely mountain when the scene
Had passed away, and it appeared to me
The perfect image of a mighty mind,
Of one that feeds upon infinity,
That is exalted by an under-presence,
The sense of God, or whatso’er is dim
Or vast in its own being (1805 Prelude, lines 66-73)

I chose this short part of a poem written by William Wordsworth as it reflects on his experience. The means by which ‘Nature’ transforms the mist into an ocean. It’s quite comprehensive and subjective as a text in its relation to each person, but this is why it is successful, as it mimics the feeling to that of the sublime.

Is with infinitude, and only there;
With hope it is, hope that can never die,
Effort, and expectation, and desire,
And something evermore about to be. (1805 Prelude, lines 538-42)

The sounding cataract Haunted me like a passion: the tall rock,The mountain, and
the deep and gloomy wood 
,Their colours and their forms, were then to me An appetite
; a feeling and a love (our emphasis 76-81
“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt”
― Immanuel Kant, Critique of Pure Reason
“And I find a happiness in the fact of accepting —
In the sublimely scientific and difficult fact of accepting the inevitable natural.”
― Alberto Caeiro, The Collected Poems of Alberto Caeiro

Whatever is fitted in any sort to excite the ideas of pain, and danger, that is to say, whatever is in any sort terrible, or is conversant about terrible objects, or operates in a manner analogous to terror, is a source of the sublime; that is, it is productive of the strongest emotion which the mind is capable of feeling.”

 

analysis:
After speaking to one of my photography teachers, I know the importance of the size and where the text lies on the page, and to make sure it is not too crowded. Because this I have above experimented with three different forms which I could lay out my book. The first being a short poem, which is quite large over the page. I believe the poem, first off, being next to this image is successful. The image itself is quite ambiguous yet does inflict connotations of loneliness abandonment and mystery. Because of this the poem discuses a lonely girl mimicking a lovely landscape which she believes to be sublime. To my mind this is a perfect example of a text and image helping each other in order to further evoke an emotion and a narrative story for discussion. However an important aspect which I need to change, is the sizing of the text. This on screen does not look large but when it is printed, this will overwhelm the page and make the layout look too messy with the large gapping. Overall I belive this double page spread with this text is successful and I will further develop this to my final cut of the book.
The second composition I experimented with I am less keen on. I  wanted to experiment with this image because it is a mimicked expression as what the sublime stands for. Her being underwater and face divided shows a beauty and inevitability of death yet peacefulness. Because of this the image should be displayed on a much a larger level. However due to the poem I chose being quite long to the extent of the space the text overwhelms and creates the page lookout to be too busy and then takes away from the poem , instead of enhancing the image itself. I believe the poem I have used already is successful on its own but the overall composition with this a layout, even with a smaller text is not very successful, and should not be used for the final edit of the book.
The last layout is a long extended poem discussing the limitlessness of beauty. These go hand in hand with the young girl in a deep tonal colours with a light shining on her, this symbolises her beauty, and  due to its darker tones also creates an aspect of Pictorialism within the photo. The boarder use also frees up space making the text look less crammed for space The smallness of the text itself also works and due to its shortness this once again enhances the image and I should develop this further, and possibly keep this as a final composition.

additional images and editing process

After speaking to both of the photography teachers, their favourite shoot is the water reservoir shoot, where I show both a combination of colour development, and use the light in such a way to evoke a sense she herself is submerged within the water. Both the water shows reflections of not only the Light and sky, but of the woodlands themselves. This illusion of the setting being repeated shows a really interesting aspect to the images themselves. All these are images which I did not choose when I did my first selection process. This just showing the pivotal importance it is to look back on your images as there will be a good variation which are too successful. The top three of my images I edited in such a way where her eyes and the water is the same colour, and both are over exaggerated to create a mystical and perhaps even a Utopia atmosphere altogether. I believe these images are very successful and That I will be using these inside my end product photobook. I belive I will replace these images withe the underwater Go Pro ones. This is because the go pro images, not only are not the best detail, but most of which do not have such a successful composition as these do. I do not want my book to be a reflection of the development of my project, but just a successful finished product. Not only this but due to their quality, it is near impossible to edit the colour of the images clearly and successful, so they do not blend and work with the rest of their images. I will now start experimenting with the way I will be able to use these images, alongside the current layout with my photobook, and hopefully this change will really benefit the quality of my images, and create a deeper interest within the book.       I have edited an array of images, all with the variations of slightly different styles throughout. Some I have edited just in order to change the tonal colours. This is because I want to show a reflection of a certain theme, or perhaps I wanted to emphasis the tonal  colours within the piece.  However, due to the majority of my pieces being complicated to shoot and being largely full of many elements, many of them I do not need to specifically photoshop further. This is seen within many of many water imagery. However some of my images I though to would be interesting to see how far I could take them and possibly change and refine them to appear more sublime.

Another shoot I decided it would be worth while to look at and find more images of was, the pool shoot. Due to me discussing about removing many of the go pro images as they do not fit in with the newly created narrative as much as the images above, I thought it would be interesting to experiment with finding and editing more of the images from this shoot.

With these more colour experimental images left over, I wanted to show a more abstract water life through the sublime. The water and mounting of the bubbles is all over the place, and because of this I thought it would possible to create very interesting imagery to split apart my much more controlled tablo shoots. I edited the images to have an array-of blue tonals but deferring from dark blues to greens and purples e.t.c.I perhaps Will experiment with possible ways which I could apply this in my book, however I belive currently, the rainbow rock image are the main priority for the concept of how I am splitting apart my images. Additionally these images are not as successful as the shoot above, and I only want to show the most successful of my work throughout the book.

IMAGE ANALYSIS – essay

This photograph is very simply constructed, with a simple background, lighting and colour palette that connote clinical and clean environments, representing certain aspects of the beauty industry. From an audiences perspective, by Miyaziki looking directly at the viewer, it seems like an intrusion of privacy and gives the unwanted impression of scopophilia while also, Miyazaki has caught the audience out on the act of peering in on her. The direction of light also adds to the the illusion of intrusion. The light hits the subjects front on and from the same direction of the viewer.

This self portrait was taken by Japanese working artist Izumi Miyazaki which simply depicts her turning to look at the camera while peeling an apple with a pink razor blade. This simple and abstract action carries different connotations of a ‘traditional’ female role; the razor blade and the apple, blending two sides of a suppressed and idealized female; beauty and domestic life. The razor blade is a tool used by many women to remove their natural hair on their own bodies, simply because of beauty standards that have been created all around the world in different societies that are constantly reinforced by advertising and the media. The apple could indicate the suppressed domestic female role, an idealized role depicted throughout history, particularly post WW2 in western society. Women had experienced working in dominated male industries due to the lack of workers because of the war,  yet when the war was over many women were pushed out of work and subliminally forced to stay in their traditional domestic roles through advertisements commissioned by the Government.  These advertisements conveyed women satisfied, content and happy from everyday domestic appliances that seemed to make their domestic lives easier, for example a dishwasher. These advertisements were aimed at women, reinforcing pre war mindsets and attitudes towards women and setting ideologies of their roles in society. As a female from a western society, these are the sort of connotations I receive from Miyakzaki’s picture, a blend of two dominant ideologies based around women thrown together with a bi-product of humor – commenting on the ridiculousness of these standards. Attitudes towards women and feminism has changed radically since the beginnings of its movement, the fight for equality between the two sexes are not seen as urgent as they used to. The word feminism is constantly disregarded by everyone due to the change of meaning the word now carries. Although its definition hasn’t changed, the word has been misused and it now carries a bad reputation. I don’t think Miyazaki has purposely created this image with a feminist message, most contemporary photographers will comment of blatantly obvious issues in the world. Attaching the word feminist to any piece of art usually disrupts the incentive of the image as the meaning of the word has been disrupted itself.

 

Image Analysis

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Rothiemurchus in Scotland

This photograph was taken in Rothiemurchus, Scotland, linking to concepts of sublime photography and focusing on nature as being the main subject.. The Rothiemurchus estate is one of the largest surviving areas of ancient woodlands in Europe where the average age of the Scots pines exceeds 100 years with some more than 300 years old. Le bas’ panoramic landscape photograph expands what is seen by the audience of the scene. The underlying story of this photograph to me is the detrimental  effects that mankind have had on the environment over the past years. This photograph was taken in 2012 which I think is Lebas’ way of expressing to people how mankind is effecting the environment today and is still very much a relevant issue. The way this photo was documented makes it seem to me as though she has stumbled across this on her walk which adds the to shocking nature of it. The surrounding trees are perfectly in tack but the tree in the centre of the image  is completely snapped in half on it’s side. This makes the audience question why it’s like this and creates mystery behind the scene.

The surrounding trees are all tall and straight, some going out of the frame on the left side of the image which adds to the contrast of the standing trees to the broken one. As well as this, most of the green tones in this image are on the surrounding trees, the broken one being a light brown tone which is different from the rest of the image, further emphasising the contrast of the two elements in the photo.   This follows on from Lebas’ environmental series looking at how the environment has changed over 90 years in comparison to Salisbury’s photograph. This image in comparison to Salisbury’s is shocking which I think emphasises the effect of climate change. “My photograph shows more trees than Salisbury’s black and white plate. Mark Spencer explained that these could have been growing thoughout the 90 years surrounding the older tree seen in the center of the image. Thus showing me that in order to understand that habitat one must understand its history.” So Lebas’ true meaning behind this image in particular was to show how landscape changes over time, portraying new trees that have grown over the 90 years, and the older tree falling apart on its side, portraying how trees are growing, falling apart and re-generating themselves.

The loss of plant and animal species due to human activities have been more rapid in the past 50 years than at any time in human history, increasing the risks of abrupt and irreversible changes to ecosystems. (www.anthropocene.info) When Lebas revisited the areas that Salisbury did she found that species that were there over 90 years ago weren’t there anymore, reflecting her views about species going extinct within her photography. The book is “an investigation of a landscape that now has such a heavy human footprint as to no longer be “natural” in the way Salisbury would have understood the term. ” stated in his article in The Guardian. I think this is true as the landscape she visited has changed so much that a whole plant species has gone extinct. This reflects the ideologies of anthropocene where atmospheric, geologic, hydrologic and other earth system processes are now altered by humans, which is a concept I think Lebas is trying to represent.

I also think many of her photographs  greatly link to the ideologies by philosopher Edmund Burke in ‘Origin of our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful (1757)’ where he talks about the thrill and danger of confronting untamed Nature and its overwhelming forces. This image displays nature as untamed through the broken tree in the centre of the image and the towering trees filling most of the photograph, nature overwhelming the senses. “Lebas sees her works as referring to the Romantic tradition, citing Casper David Friedrich and notions of the sublime as key influences. With images of escape, wilderness and the grandeur of nature, her practice relates some of the main tenets of Romanticism to photography and raises significant questions about how the contemporary (urban) viewer engages with nature.” (Deborah Schultz, Portfolio Catalogue – Contemporary Photography in Britain). I can see how Lebas’ work takes inspiration from the 19th-century Romantic landscape painter Casper David Friedrich through the tones she’s emphasises to portray vast nature as well as the bright backgrounds against the darker subject, creating a romanticised aesthetic.

 

Caspar David Friedrich Cairn in Snow 1807, Midday 1821-22

Sean O’hagan thinks that “Lebas’s images have a kind of heightened elementalism. She uses a panoramic camera and often shoots at dusk when the light quality in these still, quiet places can be almost otherworldly” (Sean O’Hagan, Photography reviewer, The Guardian). I agree with this statement as i think her use of cool dark tones adds to to an elementric quality. Elementalism refers to ‘worship of the natural elements of earth, air, water, and fire.’  and i think Lebas’ photography  has an awareness of spirituality in living things. In this image the way she’s accentuates the patterns in the dark green trees against the bright sky makes them seem alive and spiritual in comparison to the broken tree. Also the way she shoots at dusk emphasises the mystical atmosphere and shadows that consumes the image adding to the elementalism.

I agree that Lebas “alerts people to the changes wrought by man and the climate on the landscape, than by drawing them in through these photographs to consider how fragile it has become.” (Liz Jobey, Photography reviewer, Natural Histories, Weekend magazine) to an extent. Although she does present nature being ‘fragile’ and vulnerable to changes of  human activity, she also presents it as vast and powerful through her use of cool tones and boundless landscapes. Overall she presents  her underlying message that the changes in natural landscapes are due to humans and climate change and portrays nature as immense and beautiful at the same time.

Understanding Photobook

Field Studies by Chrystel Lebas

The narrative behind this photo book is the ‘grim reality of climate change leaving it’s marks on the landscape.’ She looks at the work of Sir Edward James Salisbury between 1925 and 1933 in Scotland and looks at how the landscape has changed over 90 years looking closely at botany and identifying locations he visited.

For example, she walked around the envions of the village of Arrochar in Argyll and Bute in the Trossachs National Park searching for Salisbury’s viewpoints. She observed how the sea appears to have risen dramatically in comparison to Salisbury’s black and white photograph. Salisbury was interested in the Scirpus [Bolboschoenus]  maritimus species that was now abundant in this particular place. A car park had been built on the same spot and the course of the road had been altered and now it seems that the species has disappeared.

She made these observations and documented them in her photobook, using panoramic images to show the changed landscape. Each chapter in her photobook she re-visits particular places that she found in Salisbury’s photographic records and his notes.

Chapter 6 in Field Studies changes from the archival and panoramic images and looks at ‘Plant Portraits or Weeds & Aliens Species’. The chapter starts with a quote from Salisbury, “We can in fact only define a weed, mutatis mutandis, in terms of the well-known definition of dirt as matter out of place. What we call a weed is in fact merely a plant growing where we do not want it” . Lebas took inspiration from the way Salisbury documented species by uprooting them and placing them directly onto paper or fabric to photograph them by using  photogenic paper in a darkroom to produce her own interpretations of his work. A few of the chosen plants are part of the species that Salisbury researched extensively and described in his book ‘Weeds and Aliens’.  The filtration values and exposure times are carefully annotated beneath each photogram.

http://www.chrystellebas.com/Re-visiting/re-visiting.htm

Book in hand: how does it feel? Smell, sniff the paper.

The book feels quite big as it has nearly 200 pages and is nearly A4, making it quite long compared to other phonebooks. It feels new and well put together through the brown card, making it have a strong front and back cover.

 Paper and ink: use of different paper/ textures/ colour or B&W or both.

The front and back cover are made from brown card and the spine of the book has canvas around giving the book a more authentic look. One of Chrystel Lebas colour images is displayed on the bottom half of the book and the way its printed makes it look as though its been stuck there by hand barbecue of the contrasting material to the card. One of Edward Salisbury’s black and white archival imagery is printed in the top right , the brown card behind the image replacing the whites.

Format, size and orientation: portraiture/ landscape/ square/ A5, A4, A3 / number of pages.

The size of the book is just bigger than A4 and is portrait. There is a total of 184 pages with a contents page at the front explaining the different chapters of the book e.g the different places Lebas re-visited and the pieces of writing included by other people.

Cover: linen/ card. graphic/ printed image. embossed/ debossed. letterpress/ silkscreen/hot-stamping.

It has a cover made for brown card, with canvas on the side of the book. The image on the front appears as though its been stuck on giving the photo book a handmade look. The archival image has been printed straight onto the card, Le bas telling the reader that the bigger image thats been stuck is her image, rather than the archival image.

Title: literal or poetic / relevant or intriguing.

The title of the book is ‘Field Studies: Walking through Landscapes and Archives’. On the first page of the book it states ‘The Sir Edward James Salisbury Archive Re-visited: observing environment change in British Landscape’ which is literal. It indicates the scientific nature of the book.

Narrative: what is the story/ subject-matter. How is it told?

The story of the photo book is looking at the changes in the landscape over 90 years and re-visiting the places that Edward Salisbury documented. Its looks at his landscape imagery as well as his scientific and botanical images. She looks at how factors such as climate change effect the environment.

Structure and architecture: how design/ repeating motifs/ or specific features develops a concept or construct a narrative.

She displays her images in chapters looking at one specific place and then in the next chapter going to another creating a journey travelling to different areas. The end of the book is like an evaluation of the objects she found there which is then followed by three pieces of text by Dr. Mark A. Spencer, Bergit Arends, and Liz Wells.

Design and layout: image size on pages/ single page, double-spread/ images/ grid, fold- outs/ inserts.

Lebas uses her panoramic landscape imagery on most of the pages on the first couple of chapters in the book. She uses fold out pages so the images can be full page, she then contrasts her images to Salisbury’s from the same location so you can see the effects of time. She writes alongside the image where it was taken, information about the place and what was found there. Chapter 6- Plant portraits or  Weeds & Aliens Studies displayed some of the plants and weeds she found in these locations formally with no writing. This contrasts with the start of the book that has a lot of writing.

Editing and sequencing: selection of images/ juxtaposition of photographs/ editing process.

She uses the juxtaposition of Salisbury’s archival imagery with her new panoramic images to show the effects of time and climate change on the environment

Images and text: are they linked? Introduction/ essay/ statement by artists or others.  Use of captions (if any.)

Her photobook include pieces of writing by others such as Dr. Mark A. Spencer, Bergit Arends, and Liz Wells alongside her writing and photos all linking to nature and the changing environment. This makes the book a lot more informative than other photo books as a lot of it is writing informing the reader about the places she’s visited and what she found there in comparison to Salisbury.

“My work is increasingly focusing on these particular issues around the environment and how we, human beings, influence it, however sometimes it is more complex then it appears and that is why we need science to step in and demonstrate the urgencies we face. In my photography and film works I am pointing out at the issues, hopefully engaging with a wider audience to share my findings and at the same time asking questions that might just provoke a reaction or a dialogue. My photographs are accompanied with GPS coordinates so that the locations can be retraced back and observed years after my photographs and Salisbury’s were taken, hence the recording of potential change in the landscape will continue.”

Essay introduction and plan

Essay Question:

My hypothesis and narrowed down six possible questions are:

.Examine how the sublime and reality work hand in hand to  visualise how they reflect a personal emotion. And how the artists… and ….. show this in different ways.

.How can politically movements of photography such as surrealism and the sublime effect the way which photographs see and demonstrate emotion in their work.

.How does the power of pain and beauty found within the sublime, have such s strong influence on the emotions of artists and photographers.

.Does objectivity and reality effect how we view and react to our emotions. How does the sublime have such an emotional response dependent on the persons current emotional status. And how do photographers capture such a unique set of emotions all at once.

.Merging the boundaries of the sublime and surrealism; How are emotions and personal identity represented conceptually throughout photography. Why do these photographers …..consider their work to be sublime.

.Examining the sublime: A photograph should not be able to have such strong emotional occupancy, so that it effects how someone perceives reality and views their own emotions.

I belive I am able to start writing this essay now as all of these titles link in a  successful manner and I should still be able to communicate the same ideas and themes through the beginning of the essay without knowing the specific title itself.

Essay Plan:

Make a plan that lists what you are going to write about in each paragraph – essay structure.

  • Essay question:
  • Opening quote:”the sublime is something which has power to compel and then destroy us. Pleasure is only pleasure if it is felt and the is to be said about pain. ” Edmund burke 
  • Introduction (250-500 words): What is your area study? Which artists will you be analysing and why? How will you be responding to their work and essay question?

“The sublime is something which has power to compel and then destroy us. Pleasure is only pleasure if it is felt and the same is to be said about pain. ” E:burke .The area I have chosen to study is the Sublime. I have done so as I belive the sublime owns such power it is often metonymic. It allows the thinking eye to add more value of what it is sees, but it is sole proof of seeing emotion as a medium. To develop a photo is a chemical reaction but what is develops is undevelopable in the essence what has been taken and experienced by someone, can not ever be repeated. The sublime is an instance of instances, It causes an independent reaction to each persons’ emotions and what they believe to have seen. It is not only something to be shown through art and photography, but a philosophical question which I want to look further into. My area of study will be how can the sublime be shown through the representation of emotions through the human body. I have chosen to compare two artists and two philosophers within my own subject of work, as they both focus on the ideals of human form reflective through such powerful emotions. The hypothesis I propose to answer is ‘Merging the boundaries of the sublime and surrealism; How are emotions and personal identity represented conceptually throughout photography. Why do these photographers …..consider their work to be sublime.’ The argument I intend to prove and also challenge, is the argument derived  as a  defence of the deliberative value of immoderate speech from an unlikely source, the  account is ‘ I say the strongest emotion, because I am satisfied the ideas of pain are much more powerful than those which enter on the part of pleasure. Without all doubt, the torments which we may be made to suffer are much greater in their effect on the body and mind, than any pleasures which the most learned voluptuary could suggest, or than the liveliest imagination, and the most sound and exquisitely sensible body, could enjoy.’ Burke states here how a persons emotions are strongest when pain and terror are so closely used, yet not to the extend of deat. This certain pleasure has a breadth of imagination that people can use for enjoyment. To my mind, this is has some truth, so through my three artists and two philosophers I will develop and explore their hegemonic and oppositional ideas, responding  trough the work of Tim Walker and how his style has such a strong juxtaposition to that usually expected within the sublime. Walkers tablo worldly images that inspired a transgressions of out of place beauty combined with incoherent objectification of mythology form interesting compositions that could be addressed as ‘sublime’. However I will be comparing his work to Claude Cahun and Franceseca Woodman, These two women’s styles catapulted the understanding of social and political issues when it comes to dealing with emotions It is ironic how they were both raised and worked in a time before the period of post-modernism, as their work stemmed from the view to change and explore how authorship of work should be an expression of identity and not to follow a path paved by those gone before. Historically the sublime is a term in which refers to a greatness beyond all possibility of calculation, measurement, or imitation’  It was first written in the 1st century AD though its origin and authorship. However it is evident that the sublime did not become a common influence until the 16th century, having a strong contextual reference to that of the renaissance period and its association to ‘romanticism’. My official aim is mimicking how photography can access political and emotional dependancy of reality through landscapes and portraiture to express a non direct emotion. My images will form a narrative of emotion further expressed through the colouring and text developing the surrounding piece itself. My investigation to how strong emotions can be seen such as pain and beauty ( which makes up the sublime) links successfully from my practical work and both my analytical.  This ares of work has always fascinated me as it s so fabricated and philosophical that there is no direct answer but just a group of proposals and theories. This allows my artists never to be wrong while expressing their opinion but just subject to exploring in various ways without being deemed as wrong or incorrect. The relation to romanticism and emotions seen within a landscape still has a clear connection to the subject matter of political landscapes, and if anything forms more themes of cohesion throughout my project itself.

Pg 1 (500 words): Historical/ theoretical context within art, photography and visual culture relevant to your area of study. Make links to art movements/ isms and some of the methods employed by critics and historian. Link to powerpoints about isms and movements M:\Departments\Photography\Students\Resources\Personal Study

  • Pg 2 (500 words): Analyse first artist/photographer in relation to your essay question. Present and evaluate your own images and responses.
  • Pg 3 (500 words): Analyse second artist/photographer in relation to your essay question. Present and evaluate your own images and responses.
  • Conclusion (250-500 words): Draw parallels, explore differences/ similarities between artists/photographers and that of your own work that you have produced
  • Bibliography: List all relevant sources used

Essay Introduction, to include: 

  • Begin to read, make notes, identity quotes and comment to construct an argument for/against.
  • Explain how you intend to respond creatively to your artists references and further experimentation and development of your photographic work as part of your POLITICAL LANDSCAPE project.
  • Complete a draft version of your introduction 250-500 words) and upload to the blog by Mon 26 Nov.
  • Establish coherent and sustainable links between your own practical work with that of historical and contemporary reference.

Think about an opening that will draw your reader in e.g. you can use an opening quote that sets the scene. You should include in your introduction an outline of your intention of your study e.g. what and who are you going to investigate. How does this area/ work interest you? What are you trying to prove/challenge, argument/ counter-argument? Include 1 or 2 quotes for or against. What links are there with your previous studies? What have you explored so far in your Personal Investigation, or what are you going to photograph? How did or will your work develop. What camera skills, techniques or digital processes in Photoshop have or are you going to experiment with? Show evidence for an on-going critical and analytical review of your investigation – both your written essay and own practical work in response to research and analysis.

Overall essay structure: 

The plan: ,My question,Post modernism,Barthes analysis of photos,The emotion ,Cahun living and working what movements and ism why (modernism and post hadn’t come about),Sublime,Edmund Burke ,Discuss what I want to capture,Discuss about those three words of reality and such,Tim walker ,Tablo and created the likelihood and false reality of the danger of the sublime itself,My official aim wanting to access political, emotional dependancy of reality,How this links to political landscape,Overall what I want to have in my images and shoots,How these artists and philosophers have changed what I think about my work,My overall aim,Closing and finial analysis of question