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analysis, sequencing and development of final book display

The sequencing and development of final photo-book, started off with thinking and discussing the final theme and narrative story which I want to show throughout my book. I believed I wanted it to still have strong connotations to the sublime, but also relations to emotions given off by the images. This then led me to ask myself, which of my shoots were the most successful, yet also work together through a sub- chronological story. To my mind, I believe my most powerful, emotional and successful shoots I have so far, are the sublime water ones. This leads me to choose the primary imagery from 4 shoots, and the other 10 shoots to be used to separate and create a more interesting narrative, yet without removing the theme that I want. I then wanted to choose a handful of 50 images from the primary shoots, and an additional 20 additional edits and images from the shoots less linked to the sublime, in order to create a variation and to keep interest throughout the photo book. These images where then categorise to what sizes would be most complimentary for their simply. So I ended up with a variation of images able to be on a double page spread e.t.c. I was very careful that when I started my composition for the book itself, not to allow two similar images, or similar layouts of images next to each-other and this repetition does not look correct and does not feel natural when going through the book. I wanted the structure to flow easily, yet still have a clear peak interest in each and every one of the images I used landscapes, and underwater images in order to operate many of The portrait’s throughout my work. Although all of the images have a clear conviction and interest of a certain point or another, It was still clearly apparent I needed an interesting set of images to divide up my photo-book. Because of This I decided to add images which have a mystical influence of rocks covered in different developments of rainbow patterns.

The development of my photo-book:

Other options, I decided on my final layout however as there was a good natural flow of colour synergy and the amount fo images within he dynamics of portraiture and landscapes.

My final photo book presentation:

 

Front cover and back cover:

I chose this image in particular for many reasons, The first being the dark tones and deepness of the water creates a sense fo mystery and reinforces he fact of the book being about pleasure and pain. Secondly the use of water in itself is important as this is a key essence continuously repeated throughout my photo-book. So I believe it is a necessity to demonstrate clearly what will also be seen within my book. The front cover is also quite interesting in that side is quite abstract, it is divided into two half,  giving away any information about the rest of the image itself. This plain front allows a clear and informative title, which can easily be shown. However due to the amount of portraits within the book itself, To have a face visible as part of the front cover is important. However due to it only being visible on the back is interesting as it almost creates a narrative experience, and puts the aspect of human vs nature all into one narrative image. This is why I feel as though this image is definitely the most successful.

what my book title is and why:

I chose ‘The Evolution Of Essentialism’ Due to it being a pivotal part of my photography essay, additionally, essentialism has a clear link to water as it is a primary part of living, so also creates a clear indication of my subject from right at the beginning. The evolution part links in well throughout how water can be linked back to romanticism, Pictorialism and surrealism yet still be used to make an array of different sublime imagery seen through portraiture and landscape, as seen within the book.

The stories I used within my final photo-book are the following:

1:“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime,
attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt”

2:’A meditation rose on me that night
Upon the lonely mountain when the scene
Had passed away, and it appeared to me
The perfect image of a mighty mind,
Of one that feeds upon infinity,
That is exalted by an under-presence,
The sense of God, or whatso’er is dim
Or vast in its own being’

3:“Whatever is fitted in any sort to excite the ideas of pain, and danger, that is to say, whatever is in any sort terrible, or is conversant about terrible objects, or operates in a manner analogous to terror, is a source of the sublime; that is, it is productive of the strongest emotion which the mind is capable of feeling.”

4:’The sounding cataract Haunted me like a passion: the tall rock,The mountain, and
the deep and gloomy wood,
Their colours and their forms, were then to me An appetite;
a feeling and a love’

 

Final print presentation and layout deisgn

I chose the following images, As I have previously spoken about their quality that they hold and the amount of narrative which is found within the pieces. I wanted to create a final presentation that both showed element of landscape, portraiture, surrealism the sublime and lastly clear indication of water, as the end title of my political landscape model was named ‘ the evolution of essentialism’. I wanted to experiment within the orientation of my piece and more interesting and sublime ways which they could be positioned, as I think this would only further develop the narrative of my work altogether. I tried to choose images which have a similar colour theme yet not overall repetitive and bland to look at. The base tones are beige greens and blues, yet with vibrant purples lilacs and some pastel undertones to create a more interesting highlight. As seen as above with the last layout, I wanted to try to incorporate both presentations into one, however, this in turn looks far too crowded and actually removes the successful element to the pieces themselves.  I belive I cold do further experimentation with the ways I could possible present these, such as what type of frame and colour. Due to my images being quite vibrant, I do not feel as though black would be the best background, as it might remove some of the tones, and create a background which you cannot properly see the base texture. I believe this project overall has really allowed my images to have a much stronger narrative and really expand on the ways in which I am capable to take images and develop them further tonally and create a true theme to my progression of work.

I want my images of the girl cover in water and bright highlights to be front and centre, for the purpose as this is possibly the most dynamic and eye-catching image, and so would allow the viewer’s eye to be drawn in and then slowly go out looking towards the rest of the imagery. I believe I should separate the two images which are very dark tonally (the one by the reservoir and underwater) this is due to the equally weight of the dark tones to be spread out throughout the presentation as a whole.  Once again due to the strong narrative they hold, discussing the sublime. To do these on foam board would be beneficial, it would further create a three-dimensional dynamic against the white, and form a much more tied together final presentation. Due to this project being about the research of a narrative and not a chronological story, it does not matter the arrangement in an order or where my images are, as to why I am placing theme o this large piece of board and not using a window frame. Overall I believe this development will very much help me achieving a successful final presentation.

Finished essay for political landscape

Photography essay for political landscape

Question: ‘To what extent have the movements Romanticism and Surrealism, effected the view of the Sublime, shown through artists; Tim Walker and Julia Margaret Cameron’

quote : “The sublime is something which has power to compel and then destroy us. Pleasure is only pleasure if it is felt and the same is to be said about pain. ” E:burke .

 The area I have chosen to study is the historical movements which have inspired many surrealism concentrated artists such as; Tim Walker. I have chosen to do so, as I believe his work can be viewed within the premise of Romanticism, and often shares similarities between the aesthetic theory of the sublime. This combination of power is often seen as metonymic. During the 1800’s, many creative pioneers (such as) philosophers, writers and artists, began to propagate a new vision of the world, which was coined ‘romantic’. It was an exploration which covered the idea of nature being a divine spirit. This universal immersion of creative minds yearned for the harmony of man and nature. These ideas soon developed into traditions of antiquity, soon many artists no longer wanted to produce work which was characterised as ‘named artistic style’, turning their back on traditional renaissance work. In contemporary usage this subsequent art movement now carried with it many connotations seen as ‘romantic love’. Romance is formed from the combination of sentiment and sentimentality, However, It allows the thinking eye to add more value to what it sees, so subjectively, many onlookers would agree. The sublime is said to be ‘an instance of instances’. (Barthes 1980) This was said by Roland Barthes, when he was stating why and how photography has the ability to enable emotions. It causes an independent reaction to each person’s’ emotions and what they believe to have seen as romantic. These experiences are those which transcend rational thought, words or language. It is an experience which is a meeting of subjective-internal (emotion) and the objective- external (nature). The creation of Romanticism, as well as being an emotional response to an ideological concept, It was also to show beauty within an -altered landscape, so at the time too being a reaction against religion. Not only this but their work was an emotional response as revolutionaries and other forward thinkers. In the 18th century, the  break from religion, was when science became the hegemonic ideology, the inventions then started to undermine god, and create a scientific basis of the world. So the romanticism was apart of such a revolutionary time. This war of independence colonised romanticism as the new form to see the world, and endeavour a new history for western cultures.

The hypothesis I propose to answer is ‘To what extent have the movements Romanticism and Surrealism, effected the view of the Sublime, shown through artists; Tim walker and Julia Margaret Cameron.To start off my investigation I intend to look into a painting which is based from the ideas of the romanticism movement, and which I personally consider to be sublime. The piece I have chosen is called ‘A Sea Storm’ by Claude-Joseph Vernet. The piece was formed off the impulses of the eighteenth century, this new philosophical artistic view of the world incorporated a new intellectual view in to their art pieces. They incorporated the validity of aesthetics, including the ineluctable values of the sublime alongside beauty based on individual taste and sensibility. The new physiological impacts concentrated more on the sensational aspects of nature and less on the subjectivity to each individual person. To my mind this painting denotes excitement, power and strength. The vast quick strokes of genius form an oxymoron of spontaneity creating a intoxication of fascination of man versus nature within this painting. The incorporation of narrative charters a new exotic archaic means of experimentation. Finally the colours of the purples and dark tonal colours mimics that of the fallen, this is a pavement for ‘pleasurable terrors’ of human passions. I believe the impact of Edmunds Burke’s ‘A Philosophical Enquiry into the Origins of our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful’ creates a formal description of figurative passions. Burke states that

‘I say the strongest emotion, because I am satisfied the ideas of pain are much more powerful than those which enter on the part of pleasure. Without all doubt, the torments which we may be made to suffer are much greater in their effect on the body and mind, than any pleasures which the most learned voluptuary could suggest, or than the liveliest imagination, and the most sound and exquisitely sensible body, could enjoy.’ (E:Burke 1757, philosophical enquiry into the sublime and beautiful)

Historically the Sublime is a term which refers to a greatness beyond all possibility of calculation, measurement, or limitation. This was first written in the 1st century AD though its origin and authorship what was soon developed became a piece of art, or photography and in essence what has been taken and experienced by someone, can not ever be repeated. So both Romanticism and the Sublime, have the challenge of capturing a feeling which was only experienced by themselves. Developing from romanticism this combination of nature, fantasy and undertones of imagination, leads us to the intellectual artistic transition of Tim Walker.

Tim Walker, has many associations with international magazines, his work shows a wealthy exposure of history, lasting knowledge and understanding of British culture. Many of the areas in his work are accomplished through a romantic ‘spirit of place’ said to be rural and paradisal. His exciting talent made him friends with many, describing him as ‘A strange fox-like person’ He is fearless to capture human physiognomy, his sensibility overshadowed by his glorious colour of flamboyance. The raw freedom of eccentricity creates himself a ‘artistic bohemia’. Walker’s tableaux worldly images inspired a transgression of ‘out of place’ beauty combined with incoherent objectification of mythology. Forming interesting compositions that could be addressed too as ‘sublime’. He encapsulated  an understanding of social and political issues in a childlike expression of beauty, rather than disagreement or anger. His angle of postmodernism fashion photography is stemmed from the authorship of expression paved before him through the creation of romanticism and the ideas of the Sublime.

A Tim Walker piece that had a great influence over me was the piece as seen below. I chose this image due to the influence of meanings. The piece inquires a generosity of skeptical. The elements of surrealism echoed through the mystical atmosphere are reflected within the lent pose and bright colours that the model herself radiates. It does not objectify but give herself an understanding of infinity, as she has an obvious place within the narrative.  The aesthetic of darker colour gives the icon a dominant strength and agency of female empowerment, something typically not expected to be seen through the perspective of a male photographer. The connotations within this image has to the sublime, is the effects of pleasure and pain. Although there was no direct reenactment of this word, it still obtains influence of words derived from his, such as desire. Desire and eroticism is prevalent much of surreal works, this provokes the image so the reader sees endorsement of excitement. This soon can either transpire into love or power, and in this case, it is the power that is entirely bounded between normal living. The height and bottomless depths forming from both ends of this piece, transpired into the physical representation of ecstasy. This image in relation to Burke, I believe, poses his fundamental thoughts of displaying both pleasure and pain, and how the woman evokes a woman’s femininity of love, yet her surroundings of the darker tonal range perspire that of hate. The mystery and smokey effect of the light itself, creates a truculent influence of romanticism, creating a delicate sense of atmosphere, mimicking the femininity of the women centred in the image.

This leads me onto the analysis of my own work. I had such a strong influences of surrealism, emotions and the effect of pleasure and pain in my work. I believe this is evident through my images. I have chosen this piece; as it undergoes a repugnant change it is as if the image itself is a distant reality and a dream like desirability of towering virtues of ecstasy. It is essentially a surrealist image, although my intention of this piece the development of the inability to breath underwater, creating a juxtaposition of the beauty that water, essentially is the effect of nature trying to kill you. It creates an irony of how the sublime is  alive for pain, and how we take pleasure from being submerged in something that has the ability to end our lives. Due to Walker being a modern photographer, his work not only shows the more traditional view on the forming of photography, but too the modernisation of colour in order to create the subjectivity of surrealism. Surrealism within his work is the most prevalent aspect, Surrealism was founded through the progressively expanding boundaries of art, it engages the whole environment of a piece, curating a pluralistic environment.Its modern aesthetic forms significant ideas into a more psychoanalytical subject of body. These perspectives define the techniques which once formed photography. Walker is a pioneer of surrealism. However his conceived position on professionalism makes his work still fall under more traditional objections such as Pictorialism and his work although not demeaning on women, however it does show demonstration of ‘ The Male gaze’  For as long as it is known, the female body has been used as decoration in much of photography, many models seen naked with a cornucopia of little respect given to them other then what the male bodies desire. The reaction to the continuously provocative use of women to my mind is a predicament of the current cultural time we live in today and if it is still okay to use women as a fundamental trend of pleasure. During the age when art was born it was visual culture to paint them naked, however; This art would only ever be made for capitalist men creating a fallacy. The exorcism soon continued into Pictorialism, usually only prevalent within male works. The visual of female nakedness attributes a sentiment of ‘the male gaze’ to Tim Walker’s work. I don’t believe there is such a thing as ‘female’ or ‘male’ photography. Through only showing the dominant rhetoric of narrowing women to their nakedness, it connects to an unfortunate wider view of gender inequality. We need an artist who despite them being male, they strive on the unprecedented phenomenon of focusing on femininity being heard.   I believe Tim Walker is this photographer. It is key there are photographers not only female such as ‘Julia Margaret Cameron’  who too can establish a neutrality and establish an inquiry and impulse to photographing a woman without misconceptions as to why.

After reading Burke’s work A Philosophical Enquiry into the Origins of our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful I too wanted to show a strong narrative of the sublime, and for the piece to become inundated feeding many aspects which would not typically be seen within a photography piece. So to achieve this I believed the most creative way to show an interesting landscape would be underwater. Not only does the water liquify emotions, but it creates a softness to an image, while also demonstrating the ownership the water has upon the young girls life.

An older art piece, based off that of Pictorialism, also gave me inspiration to focus more towards female models and friends in order to re-create and make an effective embodiment of surrealism and not sexualisation. Pictorialism was occurring in the 1880s-1920’s this is when new camera technology were developed and Jersey was part of a large revolution and hot-bed for photography and experimentation, for example in the innovations of Thomas Sutton. Soon photography was the height of Impressionism and was developed less from science and derived more into art. These allegory paintings  are based on a short story and myths from more biblical tales and then further depicted into literal paintings. These allegorical and spiritual matter of religious scenes applied the principles composition and design, but the subjective spiritual motive. I believe my work should be conceptualised as more of a vertiginous complex, showing imitations of otherness and exploring the right of artistic theory. The influence of the sublime on my work allows my work the comprehensive experimentation as to how you can articulate moments which exceed comprehension. I believe water is a key factor of essentialism yet also a great representation of the power of nature formed from romanticism. It has such beauty which is unconceivable, it is difficult to describe, we need it to live, however within minutes its power has the capability to kill us. This is why much of my surreal work has relations to the sublime through the accord of using water. However an interesting juxtaposition to my work is the delicacy of the female form, not used in such a way to be sexualised, but for the purpose of women’s empowerment and narrative. This leads me onto my next inspiration and also past ‘ism’ that has helped form the creation of my work.

 The Artist who I looked at was, Julia Margaret Cameron. Cameron was a photographer in the Victorian era. The bulk of her work from being illustrative allegories based off religious and literary works. In the allegorical work in particular her work had a clear influence from that of Pre-Raphaelite. Her work has delicate limp poses with soft lighting. Her work was unconventional through the intimacy created through the long exposure, her subject moved and thereby leading the lens intentionally out of focus. There is a strong sense of allegory within her work, she creates a symbolism of a short story in order to demonstrate her family. The bulk of her work are depicts forms of being illustrative allegories based off religious and literary works. In the allegorical work in particular her work had a clear influence from that of Pre-Raphaelite. Her work has delicate limp poses with soft lighting. Her work was unconventional through the intimacy created through he long exposure, her subject moved and by leading the lens intentionally out of focus. This lead me further into looking at how unique it was to be a female influential photographer at the time. Her work is very different to anything that a man would produce. Women are looked at as pure and seen to have. loving relationship with family and sister in a clearly taboo and posed setting, almost table like. The has a strong juxtaposition to that of the male sense of photography at the time. The man’s eye and the photographic gaze, women historically are being looked at different though the representation is often eroticised and objectified.these naked figures seen as art for only the pleasure of men. However a female would show herself being empowered as a mother and ally clothed showing the sexism within the period and soon this leads onto larger postmodernism topics such as feminism and the fight for women’s rights and demand for less sexualisation of their bodies. This demonstrates the influence of females within my own work, and the slight male gaze onto the work of Walker. She expresses females emotions to be of importance, more than that of their bodies. The young women’s strong stature and colour possess power and starts off the discussion of the capability of women historically, and how they themselves should be considered as a ‘sublime’ being.

The approach of female nakedness creates an interdisciplinary approach reflected the themes of Pictorialism and the social influence of the male photographer at the time, However due to Tim Walker being a fashion photographer for the most part. I believe this piece from Cameron perfectly captures what the majority of her images are about, this being a glowing persona of childhood innocence and a relationship within the subject and the person taking the photos herself. The almost religious and heavenly light that she moulds her into the feminine aspect we would expect from a teenage girl. The evocation of spatial immensity is formulated to create a more fully immersive effect of space and light. This image, I believe starts discussions of a rich endeavour and the possibilities a young girl is able to have. It has been said by Edmund Burke, that ‘one source of sublime is infinity’ (E:Burke 1757) and through the directions of light shining upon her and the wisdom shown through the light, that she, is infinite.

My own imagery which is indicative of the influence of Pictorialism and you are also able to see a clear indication of the much more surreal elements within this work. It is once again composed in such a way you would not expect to see a women in a bath, it is a much more contemporary feel to the angle and the composition, it captures so many effects of how water and light can be used to form elements of indifference. Once more it shows water to be sublime within its more abstract beauty. The etymology of the sublime is derived from its boundless limits, formed of what emotions are given. The water here is a literal connection with something most angelic and magical. The small circles are heavenly with their softness and brightness of colour. The complimenting light purples and blues seemingly create an inventive of new life and beauty. The passion and vibrancy reflects that of a childish wonderment, creating a new passion of the sublime without pain.

To conclude, the creation of the Sublime itself is a rendered disinterest in aesthetic judgments and is the sentiment of what ethics the body believes they have been subjected to. Your emotions must be suspended for it to become abundantly clear, the orchestration of subjectivity of pleasure and pain is a private introspection which is acquired through a separate consciousness. Zhang Han said that, ‘the body is the only direct way through which I come to know society and society comes to know me. The body is the proof of identity, the body is language.’ As previously spoken about Romanticism and Pictorialism, where not simplify to derive an emotion which cannot be received by everyone the same, it is a political and social revolution of the way art should make you feel and what art is said to be. Surrealism is the modern experimentation of how emotions can be viewed and seen in many forms. This can be seen through the fashion work of Tim walker or more Pictorialist work of Cameron.  Walker shows his unique seeing eye not only to allow interpretation of the male gaze, but also his non sexualisation of women highlights his own influence of female Pictorialism, which can too can be seen through my work. To my mind the answer to my hypothesis ‘To what extent have the movements Romanticism and Surrealism, effected the view of the Sublime, shown through artists; Tim walker and Julia Margaret Cameron. Is that; The sublime is made for the purpose to evoke feelings of transcendence and has taken importance from Abstract Expressionism. The sublimity of a piece is swept over and people do not realise the extent that Romanticism and Surrealism that have formed the basis of what we feel in a piece. Overall it is what we make of a piece with our own unique feeling that is what we see. The innovation of Surrealism and Romanticism creates prosperity for more groundbreaking photography.

 

text to put inside my photobook

I belive after much research it would probably be too much text if I were to research stories, because of this I belive I will focus on quotes and short stories about the sublime. I wanted to start off by looking at poems which attempt to describe the sublime, which is a great relation to the subjectivity it has. With this I believe it would be possible to connect these explanation of what someone sees and connect them to my own imagery. The poems are divided into more abstract and contemporary feeling describing what the sublime is, combined with a more of a defiant research by a philosopher or writer describing what he thinks the sublime is, and what it means to people.

A meditation rose on me that night
Upon the lonely mountain when the scene
Had passed away, and it appeared to me
The perfect image of a mighty mind,
Of one that feeds upon infinity,
That is exalted by an under-presence,
The sense of God, or whatso’er is dim
Or vast in its own being (1805 Prelude, lines 66-73)

I chose this short part of a poem written by William Wordsworth as it reflects on his experience. The means by which ‘Nature’ transforms the mist into an ocean. It’s quite comprehensive and subjective as a text in its relation to each person, but this is why it is successful, as it mimics the feeling to that of the sublime.

Is with infinitude, and only there;
With hope it is, hope that can never die,
Effort, and expectation, and desire,
And something evermore about to be. (1805 Prelude, lines 538-42)

The sounding cataract Haunted me like a passion: the tall rock,The mountain, and
the deep and gloomy wood 
,Their colours and their forms, were then to me An appetite
; a feeling and a love (our emphasis 76-81
“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime, attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt”
― Immanuel Kant, Critique of Pure Reason
“And I find a happiness in the fact of accepting —
In the sublimely scientific and difficult fact of accepting the inevitable natural.”
― Alberto Caeiro, The Collected Poems of Alberto Caeiro

Whatever is fitted in any sort to excite the ideas of pain, and danger, that is to say, whatever is in any sort terrible, or is conversant about terrible objects, or operates in a manner analogous to terror, is a source of the sublime; that is, it is productive of the strongest emotion which the mind is capable of feeling.”

 

analysis:
After speaking to one of my photography teachers, I know the importance of the size and where the text lies on the page, and to make sure it is not too crowded. Because this I have above experimented with three different forms which I could lay out my book. The first being a short poem, which is quite large over the page. I believe the poem, first off, being next to this image is successful. The image itself is quite ambiguous yet does inflict connotations of loneliness abandonment and mystery. Because of this the poem discuses a lonely girl mimicking a lovely landscape which she believes to be sublime. To my mind this is a perfect example of a text and image helping each other in order to further evoke an emotion and a narrative story for discussion. However an important aspect which I need to change, is the sizing of the text. This on screen does not look large but when it is printed, this will overwhelm the page and make the layout look too messy with the large gapping. Overall I belive this double page spread with this text is successful and I will further develop this to my final cut of the book.
The second composition I experimented with I am less keen on. I  wanted to experiment with this image because it is a mimicked expression as what the sublime stands for. Her being underwater and face divided shows a beauty and inevitability of death yet peacefulness. Because of this the image should be displayed on a much a larger level. However due to the poem I chose being quite long to the extent of the space the text overwhelms and creates the page lookout to be too busy and then takes away from the poem , instead of enhancing the image itself. I believe the poem I have used already is successful on its own but the overall composition with this a layout, even with a smaller text is not very successful, and should not be used for the final edit of the book.
The last layout is a long extended poem discussing the limitlessness of beauty. These go hand in hand with the young girl in a deep tonal colours with a light shining on her, this symbolises her beauty, and  due to its darker tones also creates an aspect of Pictorialism within the photo. The boarder use also frees up space making the text look less crammed for space The smallness of the text itself also works and due to its shortness this once again enhances the image and I should develop this further, and possibly keep this as a final composition.

additional images and editing process

After speaking to both of the photography teachers, their favourite shoot is the water reservoir shoot, where I show both a combination of colour development, and use the light in such a way to evoke a sense she herself is submerged within the water. Both the water shows reflections of not only the Light and sky, but of the woodlands themselves. This illusion of the setting being repeated shows a really interesting aspect to the images themselves. All these are images which I did not choose when I did my first selection process. This just showing the pivotal importance it is to look back on your images as there will be a good variation which are too successful. The top three of my images I edited in such a way where her eyes and the water is the same colour, and both are over exaggerated to create a mystical and perhaps even a Utopia atmosphere altogether. I believe these images are very successful and That I will be using these inside my end product photobook. I belive I will replace these images withe the underwater Go Pro ones. This is because the go pro images, not only are not the best detail, but most of which do not have such a successful composition as these do. I do not want my book to be a reflection of the development of my project, but just a successful finished product. Not only this but due to their quality, it is near impossible to edit the colour of the images clearly and successful, so they do not blend and work with the rest of their images. I will now start experimenting with the way I will be able to use these images, alongside the current layout with my photobook, and hopefully this change will really benefit the quality of my images, and create a deeper interest within the book.       I have edited an array of images, all with the variations of slightly different styles throughout. Some I have edited just in order to change the tonal colours. This is because I want to show a reflection of a certain theme, or perhaps I wanted to emphasis the tonal  colours within the piece.  However, due to the majority of my pieces being complicated to shoot and being largely full of many elements, many of them I do not need to specifically photoshop further. This is seen within many of many water imagery. However some of my images I though to would be interesting to see how far I could take them and possibly change and refine them to appear more sublime.

Another shoot I decided it would be worth while to look at and find more images of was, the pool shoot. Due to me discussing about removing many of the go pro images as they do not fit in with the newly created narrative as much as the images above, I thought it would be interesting to experiment with finding and editing more of the images from this shoot.

With these more colour experimental images left over, I wanted to show a more abstract water life through the sublime. The water and mounting of the bubbles is all over the place, and because of this I thought it would possible to create very interesting imagery to split apart my much more controlled tablo shoots. I edited the images to have an array-of blue tonals but deferring from dark blues to greens and purples e.t.c.I perhaps Will experiment with possible ways which I could apply this in my book, however I belive currently, the rainbow rock image are the main priority for the concept of how I am splitting apart my images. Additionally these images are not as successful as the shoot above, and I only want to show the most successful of my work throughout the book.

Primary image Anylsis

Image analysis of main images found within my book:

I chose this image due to its clear relation to the sublime. The division of her face once again strips away any identity and importance to the girl compared to the importance of water. The reaching of the hand is almost an indication of help. I wanted to create a fluidity of movement within the piece and have an aspect of struggle and fight within the water. Although, while this piece does show aspects of the sublime and emotions of the power of nature, it is still clear through the dress and effortless posture of the girl that there is beauty and innocence within the photo. The use of the walls almost indicates a tunnel and also shows a sense of narrative to the image, as there is a physical tunnel pulling you in.This tunnel continues the narrative and suspends the image as less of a one off but as a journey this girl is on. Perhaps it shows more indications to that of sirens and being water based. The division of the face is something really deliberate that I knew I wanted to capture within this image although the division of the face between the water would show an illusion of repetition and almost capture the girl in a  different and mystical world. Not only does this show an extrusion to the image, but it also creates a direct form of interest for the girl herself. I did not think think this image needed any more photoshop due to the already complexity shown. For the colour I did not want to over edit the image, and keep a slight romanticized and old feel. The original was too bright and removed the element of segregation and abandonment and showed to much of a relation to the overly bright pool.

This almost illusion was created in order to show a more abstract view of water, and show a creativity within it. Despite the water being in front of the girl, it almost captures and shows an impersonation of the light hearted, young girls spirit. Once again I edited the tones to show it being more blue, but instead of doing so in such a way to create a darkness to the image, I wanted to lighten the image as this is the original emotion you get from this piece. The division of the close up secs of water, in comparison the the slow drifting of the smaller specs of water almost emphasis a falling of beauty and creates further connotations to the young girl herself. The direct eye contact with the camera breaks apart the photo and allows a direct connection with the girl and creates a contrast to the main importance of the image. There is something almost angelic and magical about this image, it not only is a question of the possibilities of how it was taken, but the magic within the image also constitutes to a sense of mythological accent to the images. The small circles are almost heavenly with their softness and brightness of colour. I believe too all the colours compliment themselves within the photo, the light purples and blues represented against the themes of my editing the water in blues, or greens dependent on the overall original tone of the image.  It seemingly purposes what the sublime is through the inventive collaboration of life and beauty and a new passion of wonderment, while without the pain. It is full for childish wonderment, the light pink of the lips emphasises the front of a profound yet beautiful image.

I took this image with the purpose to make the water and the boy to look as though they were one. I wanted the water to have an aspect of blending into him and see as through he is enjoying the use of water. I had this intention as much of my imagery is the frustration and aggression of water, whereas this looks almost peaceful and although the water is blessing or helping the boy. I wanted to make sure I got the water captured dripping at the bottom. I wanted a picture of slow movement yet the shutter fast enough in order to show a moment captured in time. The darkening of the photo shows an even more eccentric character of time and wonderment. The dark outter tones almost purpose a sense of time that is running out. The shadow of the boy also demands an question of, who is she and why is he here and how did this happen. I wanted to create a whole narrative and story within this on image as this is what is seen within a romanticised landscape. How did this beauty and circumstance happen for someone like me to be able to see it. The highlights of the light within the three areas of his face allow a life to be projected onto himself, and not just a still of emotionless wonderment. The tiles in the background, leave a question scenario, it indicates connotations to isolation and like a lab of enclosure. The crystal white also shows a his aspiration for cleanliness and purity, perhaps why he is washing himself. There is such a large extent to the emotions and delicacy within this image, and this is why I belive it is such a valid primary image.

I’m very set on having this image as a double page spread, at the end of my book before my essay. This is due the representation of her no longer being trapped under the water, or being seen facing the camera, but she is now able to stare into a sublime romanticised landscape, seeing the beauty and emotions herself, and no longer being subjected to be stuck within a landscape but part of it. This image also has clear denotations to pictorialism influence, I need this with clear intentions as she is a very classical looking young girl, and the use of the colour, too links with the old fashioned movement. This also influences a sense of purity to the last image, very different to the start of  narrative book where there is a greater representation of emotion. Her stance not only is strong and shows a power within a young girl, mimicking the power of nature, yet also as it is centered in the composition, it allows a balance to the book and creates implementations the sublime is just as much equally what someone makes of it then what it actually is. Her position also shows clear indication as if she is standing on water, this religious influence and enhances the landscape t be elevated above everything else due to it having a relation to being ‘godly’. Overall I think there is no better image then to end the book on. Not only could this image be an ending, but it purposes a start of a new journey, and for a novel this is fundamental as it allows the photos to have a future, it creates a wonderment of the journey the next photographer might perhaps go on. you cannot see an end to the water, and you do not know the direction the girl will go.

This is the starting double page spread of my photobook. I chose this image due to its disparity and the hectic atmosphere it contains. It shows a beauty within panicking, and creates a clear illusion of ‘pleasure and pain’. The position of her body is extended and demonstrates as if she is being pushed down and her hands are trying to grab onto something. The outward of bubbles surrounding her face, not only show an inability to breath, but whips any identity of the girl, this re-asserts the power the water has over the girl and her life. I decided to edit this image into deeper tonal blues, because I wanted to mimic the colour most related to water, I darkened the edges to show a fading of life, and lifelessness drifting. For an opening image it instantaneously shows the continuous theme of water and pain throughout my book, and also shows an interest to create images usually not seen in photography works. Once again the slow closing of the edges allow the life within the colour centered in the middle to show a sense of loosing breath and hope of escape within the image. Both allowing the image to have a combination of beauty and death combined. I did want this image also to look as though it was at a much greater depth. I had to take my images in a more shallow pool, due to this, I had to experiment with many more angles, in order to create a look as though she is in a great depth, as this increases the chance of pain and also a physical suspension and light weight edges of the water.

5. book specification

Describe in detail what your book will be about in terms of narrative, concept and design.  Produce a mood-board of design ideas and consider the following:

Narrative: What is your story?
Describe in:3 words:  romanticism surrealism sublime 

A paragraph: I belive it would be possible to show a written objective within my photobook  using the following: poems, of past stories and experiences that are deemed to have a relation to the sublime experience. I belive this would be interesting as the sublime is a concept which cannot be experienced through writing, it is something with is seen through subjectivity of the seeing eye and something no one else will ever have the capability of knowing. So the fact of me trying to share this concept is hard to put into thought, so using text perhaps might influence the images in a positive manner. How do you describe a feeling? much of my work is formed off the basis of romanticism, love and the sublime, the subjectivity of love is a feeling which cannot be explained, so the linking of language is the meaning derived from what someone is seeing, however the connection is still impossible to describe the experience itself.

possible titles: I decided it would be interesting if I had a sense of correlation between my essay I have written and the title, Also doing so enables myself to have more of a conceptual and contextual title, that creates a sense of question and answer within the narrative of the book. The titles I have pulled are from the beginning of my essay, they either have an opened ended question, or have an inspired concept to that of the imagery within the book itself, e.g linked to water, girls, emotion, the sublime, the titles are .An instance of instances, The evolution of essentialism, sirens, universal immersion of creative minds, traditions of antiquity, sentiment and sentimentality. These to my mind have the capability of transcending rational thought and creating a subjective internal narrative to the book within the context of the images.

The basis of my photobook : The starting point for my development was one of a few factors, the first being the sublime, the second surrealism, and the third being romanticism. This was then further categories into emotions of , pain, love, anguish, exoticism, fear, dependency and fate. All of these are derived from consequences of an action and purpled by an emotion. I have read and seen many philosophers talk about how individual subject topics such as this are such an interesting concept as there is no correct correlation between an image and the words themself. .Because of this I could have taken this project many routes. It started off as emotions reacting to an environment, then a reaction to the sublime, then water, and now it has formed almost a combination of all of these elements in order to create  a-subjective narrative and representative of a story of a powerful relationship of women to their environments and based off the inspiration of real and interpretative stories. This could be seen in more of  a mythical theme or perhaps to some people the images and stories which could be viewed as sublime. It is such a unique and off brand scenario for a book to be, but because I wanted all the images to be surreal they all hold their own  personal stories, so their stories should be shown within the text.

Design: Consider the following, How you want your book to look and feel:I want my book to feel as though you are about to uncover a secret. I want the cover t be hard but also thinking about a possible fabric like cover of softness, in order to create a unique style which systematically creates an interest for people. I what it to look rich, All the images are developed in an conceptual manner of deliberation in order to show surrealism, and each image to be able hold their own story, because of this it must look as through everything within holds importance.

  • Paper and ink: Due to my images because focused on the surreal, I believe it would be the most suiting to have glossy paper in order to exaggerate the dramatic colour scheme complimented by the complex composition to some of the pieces
  • Format, size and orientation:I want my book to be slightly larger as I feel as though the pieces would have the most impact in the larger format, I also belive this would help benefit the use of the glossy paper too. Due to my combination of portraiture and landscapes I decided I would do a square book, as I belive a direct orientation to either landscape or portraiture would not be the best suiting option.
  • Binding and cover:I am currently between two options for my front cover, with creating a wrap around with a hard cover of a very surreal image, or either creating a hard cover with a softer fabric over cover with a symbol that I belive would suite the book, similarly to ‘ the Earth is just a little spec of dust under our feet’ . Perhaps a mermaid would be suiting such as the conceptual cover of a unicorn for the book i studied as it would pursue both options.
  • Title : My title originally was going to be surrounding that of the more mythological side, so considering that the title was going to be called ‘sirens’. However after doing research into two books they have much more interesting and more profound titles that give an in-depth question o the book itself. SO because of this factor I believe I will call my book: The listed names of ideas is as following: An instance of instances.The evolution of essentialism, sirens, universal immersion of creative minds, traditions of antiquity, sentiment and sentimentality, 
  • Structure and architecture: The structure of my book will focus primarily on that of an overall topic narrative, and not showing a chronological or perhaps inspired story. I have decided this due to my images being focused more on surreal aspects.
  • Design and layout; For my design I want a variation between how the pages are displays, I want to show my images in the format most complimentary to them, this will be over double spread pages, complimenting images next to each-other, and shown in a way which creates a interesting composition to the narrative concept of the book itself. I believe a main priority for me is to make sure not all my most successful images are at the beginning but spread put throughout the book itself. This is also a large part of the editing and sequencing of the images.