Understanding Photobooks

Suite Vénitienne

1. Research a photo-book (select one you have looked at previously in your project) and describe what story/ narrative the book is telling – its subject-matter, genre, style, approach etc.

Story and Narrative – pdf edition and book : The book is a collaboration by Sophie Calle and Jean Baudrillard, though I will mainly focus on Calle’s work and photographs since Baudrillard includes only text in his section of the book. There is another edition of this book, one that solely focuses on Calle’s perspective and story, this is the one I have in hand.,The book follows a very chronological and linear storyline, it is almost written like a diary; Calle clearly documents her day to day observations and doings as she searches for Henri B. The genre is strictly documentary, the approach is rather informal and it remains that way throughout the book as the images are not stages but instead spontaneous. The main subject of her photographs is Henri B, though she follows and photographs a passing flower delivery boy during her search and some alleyways she spent time in. Other than that, the subject and theme is solely focused on Henri B. The book explores her journey and story from the start to finish, starting with the day she first met Henri and ending bitterly with a inevitable confrontation and her decision to stop following the man.

  • Book in hand: how does it feel? Smell, sniff the paper.

it’s light, small and portable. It smells a lot more like a literal story book than a traditional photobook.

  • Paper and ink: use of different paper/ textures/ colour or B&W or both.

The images are prominently black and white, the text is also black wirth certain points highlighted in the same blue as the cover. The paper is texture like a story book, very think and cream in colour. The texture of the photographs is a bit rough to the touch though it looks matte.

  • Format, size and orientation: portraiture/ landscape/ square/ A5, A4, A3 / number of pages.

There are 48 pages, the book is A5 and in portrait orientation.

  • Binding, soft/hard cover. image wrap/dust jacket. saddle stitch/swiss binding/ Japanese stab-binding/ leporello cover: linen/ card. graphic/ printed image. embossed/ debossed. letterpress/ silkscreen/hot-stamping.

 Hard cover with an image wrap. Simple swiss binding.

  • Title: literal or poetic / relevant or intriguing.

“Suite Venitienne” – translates directly to Venetian Suite, which is because this book is set in Venice, Italy. It is set there due to the origin of the story; Sophie Calle had followed a man in the streets one day but lost sight of him, incidentally, she met him at a party that night and overheard he was travelling to Venice. She had decided she would follow him there.

  • Narrative: what is the story/ subject-matter. How is it told?

Documentary approach, the story is told like a journey or diary that documents what Calle does each day during her search for Henri B. The subject matter is predominantly Henri B. though she does include multiples shots of streets and other people who she either followed in the meantime or were connected to Henri B. It can also be said that Calle becomes the subject. I became interested in her decisions and framing of Henri B. ad well as immersed in her detailed and straightforward descriptions of her subject. Calle tells us that she is in disguise — wearing a blonde wig. She carries a camera with a double reflective lens. In the charged moments when Calle reveals her proximity to Henri B. the act of following becomes a performance and the quality of the relationship between follower and followed reveals itself to be one of a high tension.

  • Structure and architecture: how design/ repeating motifs/ or specific features develops a concept or construct a narrative.

The design is linear and written entries create a very sharp and clear narrative. Calle describes her feelings, observations and doings to the audience; in a sense, it’s a little unsettling and would make the viewer uncomfortable but it also does not leave them wondering what is happening in each image and the context/relevance to Henri B.

  • Design and layout: image size on pages/ single page, double-spread/ images/ grid, fold- outs/ inserts.

The book design consists of a lot of empty space intervals mixed with very filled pages, her entries and writing tends to take up a whole page; even when the writing is very sparse. This is contrasted with an image usually directly linked to the writing, even with that, the images take up the whole page. There’s multiple full bleeds and images that go onto a double spread. Though, there are also  double spreads that contain just text.

  • Images and text: are they linked? Introduction/ essay/ statement by artists or others.  Use of captions (if any.)

The text and images are intertwined and have a distinct relationship. Without the text the images would be very disorientating and confusing – the text allows the audience to understand the images much better. Personally I think the text is really is where the artist shines. The writing is brilliant. It’s poignant and moving, it is also clever while hinting at its author’s various vulnerabilities. It frames the photographs and makes them a lot more interesting than they actually are in that sense.

Key Image Analysis

This image is a a double page from Rita’s book “where mimosa bloom” displaying two photographs one a still life and one a portrait, which work together conceptually and aesthetically. The image on the right where peoples eyes will be drawn to first is a portrait of a women with red hair, wearing a light floral shirt in front a of a textures pale blue background. The image on the left shows a type of calendar with blue and pink card, these colours have connections with the opposite image and share a pastel aesthetic. it is perfectly composed in the centre of the frame with an off white background. These are both naturalistic images showing important parts of the photographer and her mothers life and relationship. The circle shape on the left is parallel with the woman’s face and help to draw the viewers eyes to the important parts of the image. The format of the images next to one another is important, the simplicity of the image on the left doesn’t take away from the portrait too much but they compliment each other well. The Background colour of both images is in the same tone, the on on the left appears white at first glance  but is more of a pale grey blue  which matches the blotchy, slightly darker textured background on the right image. The portrait image looks like it was taken in natural lighting but not direct sun light, this is because of the subtle shadows on the subjects face. The space in this image has also been represented by the foreground and background which are distinguished with different focuses from the small dept of field.  In both these photographs the subject has been placed in the centre of the frame intentionally so the page spread is balanced.
Compared to real life the portrait image has been slightly manipulated to look paler and more gentle with a romanticised feel. When I look at these photos the first thing that stands out to me is the woman’s red hair which is one of the darkest parts of the two photos. The image of the left has not been much effected by flattening what we can see in real life to the 2D image because the object is flat anyway, however seeing it in a simple set up would make us appreciate it more that we would when just coming across the item in real life. On the other hand the portrait captures on split second of what was happening, meaning the facial expression pose and setting could have been very different in person. If i could ask the artist anything it would be about the relevance of the two images being placed together, i would like to know if their is a specific story behind it or if they just fit the theme and aesthetically match.

Experimenting With Text For Book

Once I had made a first draft for the layout of my book I decided to implement text into it. The text I wanted to add into the book would be quotes of the chosen photographers I studied, with my essay at the beginning. For me not only would this provide relevant text that links to the images, but also wouldn’t distract the viewer from the image causing it to lose its qualities. To do this I would firstly research various quotes from the photographers Edward Burtynsky and Henry J Fair, aiming to have them relate to the topic of consumerism, here I produced a mood-board which consisted of the quotes I found best related to the overall theme. These are my results: By implementing these quotes into blank spaces I hoped to utilize the area, preventing it from becoming useless and instead allowing it to serve as a more aesthetic implementation into the book. Below I explored a few ways in which the text could be positioned next to the designated images:When looking over the text positions I found that the left and right alignment would pose as the best position due to them taking up little space as possible, whilst aligning themselves aesthetically against the side of the photo chosen. The center position however I did not think would suit the design of the book and its layout, this is because of how it did not have any end or beginning to it, leading to an unorganized look which didn’t compliment the environment it would be put in at all. Some examples of how I would like the text to be positioned next to the images can be seen below: I found the text to be most effective when looking over various books to be ending as the image starts, this creates an aesthetic effect which does not draw attention from the photos but instead subtly adds a bit of information. I would probably place the text near the top or bottom of the desired page due to the being the most implicit compositions to place it in, as the middle would be to clear. As a result of this I have concluded that the text should be placed in an isolated area of the blank space which does not take away from a photos visual appearance, whilst only being seen when observed closely.

additional images and editing process

After speaking to both of the photography teachers, their favourite shoot is the water reservoir shoot, where I show both a combination of colour development, and use the light in such a way to evoke a sense she herself is submerged within the water. Both the water shows reflections of not only the Light and sky, but of the woodlands themselves. This illusion of the setting being repeated shows a really interesting aspect to the images themselves. All these are images which I did not choose when I did my first selection process. This just showing the pivotal importance it is to look back on your images as there will be a good variation which are too successful. The top three of my images I edited in such a way where her eyes and the water is the same colour, and both are over exaggerated to create a mystical and perhaps even a Utopia atmosphere altogether. I believe these images are very successful and That I will be using these inside my end product photobook. I belive I will replace these images withe the underwater Go Pro ones. This is because the go pro images, not only are not the best detail, but most of which do not have such a successful composition as these do. I do not want my book to be a reflection of the development of my project, but just a successful finished product. Not only this but due to their quality, it is near impossible to edit the colour of the images clearly and successful, so they do not blend and work with the rest of their images. I will now start experimenting with the way I will be able to use these images, alongside the current layout with my photobook, and hopefully this change will really benefit the quality of my images, and create a deeper interest within the book.       I have edited an array of images, all with the variations of slightly different styles throughout. Some I have edited just in order to change the tonal colours. This is because I want to show a reflection of a certain theme, or perhaps I wanted to emphasis the tonal  colours within the piece.  However, due to the majority of my pieces being complicated to shoot and being largely full of many elements, many of them I do not need to specifically photoshop further. This is seen within many of many water imagery. However some of my images I though to would be interesting to see how far I could take them and possibly change and refine them to appear more sublime.

Another shoot I decided it would be worth while to look at and find more images of was, the pool shoot. Due to me discussing about removing many of the go pro images as they do not fit in with the newly created narrative as much as the images above, I thought it would be interesting to experiment with finding and editing more of the images from this shoot.

With these more colour experimental images left over, I wanted to show a more abstract water life through the sublime. The water and mounting of the bubbles is all over the place, and because of this I thought it would possible to create very interesting imagery to split apart my much more controlled tablo shoots. I edited the images to have an array-of blue tonals but deferring from dark blues to greens and purples e.t.c.I perhaps Will experiment with possible ways which I could apply this in my book, however I belive currently, the rainbow rock image are the main priority for the concept of how I am splitting apart my images. Additionally these images are not as successful as the shoot above, and I only want to show the most successful of my work throughout the book.

Forth Photoshoot

Photoshoot Plan: I am planning to take photos of family members who link to my Grandpa and share memories with him. I decided to take portrait images of my Gran who also shares his love for the environment and garden. This is why I want the location to be in a greenhouse, where there will be very bright lighting . I  want her to wear a bight colour to stand out and display her personality and style. 

After doing the photoshoot I think I have achieved the style of images I was hoping to create, the photos are simple but display a strong character in them, the location of the greenhouse worked out well due to the bight natural lighting from all angles. The colours in the greenhouse of the dried out tomato plants in the background tie in with the red jacket and scarf and contrast with the slight green of the leaves and background. One thing I might change if I were to do this photoshoot again is the unintentional solemn look to the photos. with the dead plants in the back and the slight blue tint the portraits have a slightly sad tone. 

First Draft Photobook Layout

This is my first book sequence draft which I believe successfully follows what I originally intended for the design of my book. In my design specification I stated ”Some images will be best as full page spreads (single or double), some images will look best with boarders and some will look best grouped together, and therefore I am not going to limit myself by completely sticking to one uniformed layout and will instead lay out my photographs in the way which I believe individually best suits them…The sequencing of images in the book I intend to follow a narrative of how surveillance is evolving/developing. So as the book continues the images represent closer and more personal forms of  surveillance, such as surveillance through our own devices. Whereas in the beginning it will look at visual forms of surveillance (birds) and then early forms of technological surveillance (CCTV etc.)” This, as I said, was something which I definitely followed up on and stuck to.

Possible layout – ongoing draft

Photo-book Layout

These are three possible layouts I have decided on for my phonebook. I have only changed specific images throughout the three designs as I believe some images are strong how they are and don’t need changing. I have included borders around certain images to create variety as a large proportion of the images are full bleed, double page spreads. The use of borders and different positions of the images throughout the layouts, I believe Create a strong effect on the book as it means the book doesn’t have the same monotonous feel to it. I want the viewer to know the story behind the images in the clearest way possible so I chosen these as I believe they are all different to one another and show a different perspective of the subject reacting to its surroundings. These layouts are still to be added to and adapted but create a rough outline for how I want to present my book.

Third Photoshoot

Photoshoot Plan: The third poem is called tunnelling and talks about my grandpa when he was younger and the memories he had on the beach with his parents. I want to take photos on the beach near Corbiere lighthouse which illustrate the poem and also link to memories I have of family walks in the same place.

I found cuttle fish lying in a pile in the beach and decided to arrange them in a pattern on the sand creating a leading line along the beach towards the lighthouse mimicking the walk the would have made. 

I am happy with how this photoshoot turned out, although on the day the weather was over cast, I like the feel it gives the images because they look more real and show what the landscape looks like the majority of the time. The sea also look rough which gives it a dramatic feel. Also the colours that this lighting gives the images is very bright but not sunny making everything look golden more pastel and muted which is the aesthetic I wanted for the book.

Earlier in my coursework whilst looking at and creating work on collections I took photos of one of the any collections my grandpa had. small figure lighthouse which were displayed in their bathroom for years. I took Photos of these in front of an off white backdrop to show the simple details and how they all go together. I am thinking of incorporating these images with the new ones I have taken.

Second Photoshoot

Photoshoot Plan: I want to take photos at Grosnez Castle, when I was younger we used to visit the ruins of this castle with my grandpa. It was in walking distance from their house so many family outings happened here. I was always fascinated by the stories he would tell me of my dad and uncle growing up in the area and historical facts. I want to take photos of the castle at dusk when the lighting has interesting colours too help give a dramatic effect. I want to show the area as I would have seen it when I was younger, as big and mesmerising. 

I like the style and colours in the photos that I took because it give a romanticised effect and exaggerates the landscape however the lighting at the time was bad and the photos have a lot of noise. it was also very windy so the camera was shaking a lot this mean the long exposure images weren’t as sharp as I would have liked I want to do this shoot again and improve the lighting. I will also stay for longer and get more images of the actual castle.