analysis, sequencing and development of final book display

The sequencing and development of final photo-book, started off with thinking and discussing the final theme and narrative story which I want to show throughout my book. I believed I wanted it to still have strong connotations to the sublime, but also relations to emotions given off by the images. This then led me to ask myself, which of my shoots were the most successful, yet also work together through a sub- chronological story. To my mind, I believe my most powerful, emotional and successful shoots I have so far, are the sublime water ones. This leads me to choose the primary imagery from 4 shoots, and the other 10 shoots to be used to separate and create a more interesting narrative, yet without removing the theme that I want. I then wanted to choose a handful of 50 images from the primary shoots, and an additional 20 additional edits and images from the shoots less linked to the sublime, in order to create a variation and to keep interest throughout the photo book. These images where then categorise to what sizes would be most complimentary for their simply. So I ended up with a variation of images able to be on a double page spread e.t.c. I was very careful that when I started my composition for the book itself, not to allow two similar images, or similar layouts of images next to each-other and this repetition does not look correct and does not feel natural when going through the book. I wanted the structure to flow easily, yet still have a clear peak interest in each and every one of the images I used landscapes, and underwater images in order to operate many of The portrait’s throughout my work. Although all of the images have a clear conviction and interest of a certain point or another, It was still clearly apparent I needed an interesting set of images to divide up my photo-book. Because of This I decided to add images which have a mystical influence of rocks covered in different developments of rainbow patterns.

The development of my photo-book:

Other options, I decided on my final layout however as there was a good natural flow of colour synergy and the amount fo images within he dynamics of portraiture and landscapes.

My final photo book presentation:

 

Front cover and back cover:

I chose this image in particular for many reasons, The first being the dark tones and deepness of the water creates a sense fo mystery and reinforces he fact of the book being about pleasure and pain. Secondly the use of water in itself is important as this is a key essence continuously repeated throughout my photo-book. So I believe it is a necessity to demonstrate clearly what will also be seen within my book. The front cover is also quite interesting in that side is quite abstract, it is divided into two half,  giving away any information about the rest of the image itself. This plain front allows a clear and informative title, which can easily be shown. However due to the amount of portraits within the book itself, To have a face visible as part of the front cover is important. However due to it only being visible on the back is interesting as it almost creates a narrative experience, and puts the aspect of human vs nature all into one narrative image. This is why I feel as though this image is definitely the most successful.

what my book title is and why:

I chose ‘The Evolution Of Essentialism’ Due to it being a pivotal part of my photography essay, additionally, essentialism has a clear link to water as it is a primary part of living, so also creates a clear indication of my subject from right at the beginning. The evolution part links in well throughout how water can be linked back to romanticism, Pictorialism and surrealism yet still be used to make an array of different sublime imagery seen through portraiture and landscape, as seen within the book.

The stories I used within my final photo-book are the following:

1:“Whereas the beautiful is limited, the sublime is limitless, so that the mind in the presence of the sublime,
attempting to imagine what it cannot, has pain in the failure but pleasure in contemplating the immensity of the attempt”

2:’A meditation rose on me that night
Upon the lonely mountain when the scene
Had passed away, and it appeared to me
The perfect image of a mighty mind,
Of one that feeds upon infinity,
That is exalted by an under-presence,
The sense of God, or whatso’er is dim
Or vast in its own being’

3:“Whatever is fitted in any sort to excite the ideas of pain, and danger, that is to say, whatever is in any sort terrible, or is conversant about terrible objects, or operates in a manner analogous to terror, is a source of the sublime; that is, it is productive of the strongest emotion which the mind is capable of feeling.”

4:’The sounding cataract Haunted me like a passion: the tall rock,The mountain, and
the deep and gloomy wood,
Their colours and their forms, were then to me An appetite;
a feeling and a love’

 

Final print presentation and layout deisgn

I chose the following images, As I have previously spoken about their quality that they hold and the amount of narrative which is found within the pieces. I wanted to create a final presentation that both showed element of landscape, portraiture, surrealism the sublime and lastly clear indication of water, as the end title of my political landscape model was named ‘ the evolution of essentialism’. I wanted to experiment within the orientation of my piece and more interesting and sublime ways which they could be positioned, as I think this would only further develop the narrative of my work altogether. I tried to choose images which have a similar colour theme yet not overall repetitive and bland to look at. The base tones are beige greens and blues, yet with vibrant purples lilacs and some pastel undertones to create a more interesting highlight. As seen as above with the last layout, I wanted to try to incorporate both presentations into one, however, this in turn looks far too crowded and actually removes the successful element to the pieces themselves.  I belive I cold do further experimentation with the ways I could possible present these, such as what type of frame and colour. Due to my images being quite vibrant, I do not feel as though black would be the best background, as it might remove some of the tones, and create a background which you cannot properly see the base texture. I believe this project overall has really allowed my images to have a much stronger narrative and really expand on the ways in which I am capable to take images and develop them further tonally and create a true theme to my progression of work.

I want my images of the girl cover in water and bright highlights to be front and centre, for the purpose as this is possibly the most dynamic and eye-catching image, and so would allow the viewer’s eye to be drawn in and then slowly go out looking towards the rest of the imagery. I believe I should separate the two images which are very dark tonally (the one by the reservoir and underwater) this is due to the equally weight of the dark tones to be spread out throughout the presentation as a whole.  Once again due to the strong narrative they hold, discussing the sublime. To do these on foam board would be beneficial, it would further create a three-dimensional dynamic against the white, and form a much more tied together final presentation. Due to this project being about the research of a narrative and not a chronological story, it does not matter the arrangement in an order or where my images are, as to why I am placing theme o this large piece of board and not using a window frame. Overall I believe this development will very much help me achieving a successful final presentation.

Finished essay for political landscape

Photography essay for political landscape

Question: ‘To what extent have the movements Romanticism and Surrealism, effected the view of the Sublime, shown through artists; Tim Walker and Julia Margaret Cameron’

quote : “The sublime is something which has power to compel and then destroy us. Pleasure is only pleasure if it is felt and the same is to be said about pain. ” E:burke .

 The area I have chosen to study is the historical movements which have inspired many surrealism concentrated artists such as; Tim Walker. I have chosen to do so, as I believe his work can be viewed within the premise of Romanticism, and often shares similarities between the aesthetic theory of the sublime. This combination of power is often seen as metonymic. During the 1800’s, many creative pioneers (such as) philosophers, writers and artists, began to propagate a new vision of the world, which was coined ‘romantic’. It was an exploration which covered the idea of nature being a divine spirit. This universal immersion of creative minds yearned for the harmony of man and nature. These ideas soon developed into traditions of antiquity, soon many artists no longer wanted to produce work which was characterised as ‘named artistic style’, turning their back on traditional renaissance work. In contemporary usage this subsequent art movement now carried with it many connotations seen as ‘romantic love’. Romance is formed from the combination of sentiment and sentimentality, However, It allows the thinking eye to add more value to what it sees, so subjectively, many onlookers would agree. The sublime is said to be ‘an instance of instances’. (Barthes 1980) This was said by Roland Barthes, when he was stating why and how photography has the ability to enable emotions. It causes an independent reaction to each person’s’ emotions and what they believe to have seen as romantic. These experiences are those which transcend rational thought, words or language. It is an experience which is a meeting of subjective-internal (emotion) and the objective- external (nature). The creation of Romanticism, as well as being an emotional response to an ideological concept, It was also to show beauty within an -altered landscape, so at the time too being a reaction against religion. Not only this but their work was an emotional response as revolutionaries and other forward thinkers. In the 18th century, the  break from religion, was when science became the hegemonic ideology, the inventions then started to undermine god, and create a scientific basis of the world. So the romanticism was apart of such a revolutionary time. This war of independence colonised romanticism as the new form to see the world, and endeavour a new history for western cultures.

The hypothesis I propose to answer is ‘To what extent have the movements Romanticism and Surrealism, effected the view of the Sublime, shown through artists; Tim walker and Julia Margaret Cameron.To start off my investigation I intend to look into a painting which is based from the ideas of the romanticism movement, and which I personally consider to be sublime. The piece I have chosen is called ‘A Sea Storm’ by Claude-Joseph Vernet. The piece was formed off the impulses of the eighteenth century, this new philosophical artistic view of the world incorporated a new intellectual view in to their art pieces. They incorporated the validity of aesthetics, including the ineluctable values of the sublime alongside beauty based on individual taste and sensibility. The new physiological impacts concentrated more on the sensational aspects of nature and less on the subjectivity to each individual person. To my mind this painting denotes excitement, power and strength. The vast quick strokes of genius form an oxymoron of spontaneity creating a intoxication of fascination of man versus nature within this painting. The incorporation of narrative charters a new exotic archaic means of experimentation. Finally the colours of the purples and dark tonal colours mimics that of the fallen, this is a pavement for ‘pleasurable terrors’ of human passions. I believe the impact of Edmunds Burke’s ‘A Philosophical Enquiry into the Origins of our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful’ creates a formal description of figurative passions. Burke states that

‘I say the strongest emotion, because I am satisfied the ideas of pain are much more powerful than those which enter on the part of pleasure. Without all doubt, the torments which we may be made to suffer are much greater in their effect on the body and mind, than any pleasures which the most learned voluptuary could suggest, or than the liveliest imagination, and the most sound and exquisitely sensible body, could enjoy.’ (E:Burke 1757, philosophical enquiry into the sublime and beautiful)

Historically the Sublime is a term which refers to a greatness beyond all possibility of calculation, measurement, or limitation. This was first written in the 1st century AD though its origin and authorship what was soon developed became a piece of art, or photography and in essence what has been taken and experienced by someone, can not ever be repeated. So both Romanticism and the Sublime, have the challenge of capturing a feeling which was only experienced by themselves. Developing from romanticism this combination of nature, fantasy and undertones of imagination, leads us to the intellectual artistic transition of Tim Walker.

Tim Walker, has many associations with international magazines, his work shows a wealthy exposure of history, lasting knowledge and understanding of British culture. Many of the areas in his work are accomplished through a romantic ‘spirit of place’ said to be rural and paradisal. His exciting talent made him friends with many, describing him as ‘A strange fox-like person’ He is fearless to capture human physiognomy, his sensibility overshadowed by his glorious colour of flamboyance. The raw freedom of eccentricity creates himself a ‘artistic bohemia’. Walker’s tableaux worldly images inspired a transgression of ‘out of place’ beauty combined with incoherent objectification of mythology. Forming interesting compositions that could be addressed too as ‘sublime’. He encapsulated  an understanding of social and political issues in a childlike expression of beauty, rather than disagreement or anger. His angle of postmodernism fashion photography is stemmed from the authorship of expression paved before him through the creation of romanticism and the ideas of the Sublime.

A Tim Walker piece that had a great influence over me was the piece as seen below. I chose this image due to the influence of meanings. The piece inquires a generosity of skeptical. The elements of surrealism echoed through the mystical atmosphere are reflected within the lent pose and bright colours that the model herself radiates. It does not objectify but give herself an understanding of infinity, as she has an obvious place within the narrative.  The aesthetic of darker colour gives the icon a dominant strength and agency of female empowerment, something typically not expected to be seen through the perspective of a male photographer. The connotations within this image has to the sublime, is the effects of pleasure and pain. Although there was no direct reenactment of this word, it still obtains influence of words derived from his, such as desire. Desire and eroticism is prevalent much of surreal works, this provokes the image so the reader sees endorsement of excitement. This soon can either transpire into love or power, and in this case, it is the power that is entirely bounded between normal living. The height and bottomless depths forming from both ends of this piece, transpired into the physical representation of ecstasy. This image in relation to Burke, I believe, poses his fundamental thoughts of displaying both pleasure and pain, and how the woman evokes a woman’s femininity of love, yet her surroundings of the darker tonal range perspire that of hate. The mystery and smokey effect of the light itself, creates a truculent influence of romanticism, creating a delicate sense of atmosphere, mimicking the femininity of the women centred in the image.

This leads me onto the analysis of my own work. I had such a strong influences of surrealism, emotions and the effect of pleasure and pain in my work. I believe this is evident through my images. I have chosen this piece; as it undergoes a repugnant change it is as if the image itself is a distant reality and a dream like desirability of towering virtues of ecstasy. It is essentially a surrealist image, although my intention of this piece the development of the inability to breath underwater, creating a juxtaposition of the beauty that water, essentially is the effect of nature trying to kill you. It creates an irony of how the sublime is  alive for pain, and how we take pleasure from being submerged in something that has the ability to end our lives. Due to Walker being a modern photographer, his work not only shows the more traditional view on the forming of photography, but too the modernisation of colour in order to create the subjectivity of surrealism. Surrealism within his work is the most prevalent aspect, Surrealism was founded through the progressively expanding boundaries of art, it engages the whole environment of a piece, curating a pluralistic environment.Its modern aesthetic forms significant ideas into a more psychoanalytical subject of body. These perspectives define the techniques which once formed photography. Walker is a pioneer of surrealism. However his conceived position on professionalism makes his work still fall under more traditional objections such as Pictorialism and his work although not demeaning on women, however it does show demonstration of ‘ The Male gaze’  For as long as it is known, the female body has been used as decoration in much of photography, many models seen naked with a cornucopia of little respect given to them other then what the male bodies desire. The reaction to the continuously provocative use of women to my mind is a predicament of the current cultural time we live in today and if it is still okay to use women as a fundamental trend of pleasure. During the age when art was born it was visual culture to paint them naked, however; This art would only ever be made for capitalist men creating a fallacy. The exorcism soon continued into Pictorialism, usually only prevalent within male works. The visual of female nakedness attributes a sentiment of ‘the male gaze’ to Tim Walker’s work. I don’t believe there is such a thing as ‘female’ or ‘male’ photography. Through only showing the dominant rhetoric of narrowing women to their nakedness, it connects to an unfortunate wider view of gender inequality. We need an artist who despite them being male, they strive on the unprecedented phenomenon of focusing on femininity being heard.   I believe Tim Walker is this photographer. It is key there are photographers not only female such as ‘Julia Margaret Cameron’  who too can establish a neutrality and establish an inquiry and impulse to photographing a woman without misconceptions as to why.

After reading Burke’s work A Philosophical Enquiry into the Origins of our Ideas of the Sublime and Beautiful I too wanted to show a strong narrative of the sublime, and for the piece to become inundated feeding many aspects which would not typically be seen within a photography piece. So to achieve this I believed the most creative way to show an interesting landscape would be underwater. Not only does the water liquify emotions, but it creates a softness to an image, while also demonstrating the ownership the water has upon the young girls life.

An older art piece, based off that of Pictorialism, also gave me inspiration to focus more towards female models and friends in order to re-create and make an effective embodiment of surrealism and not sexualisation. Pictorialism was occurring in the 1880s-1920’s this is when new camera technology were developed and Jersey was part of a large revolution and hot-bed for photography and experimentation, for example in the innovations of Thomas Sutton. Soon photography was the height of Impressionism and was developed less from science and derived more into art. These allegory paintings  are based on a short story and myths from more biblical tales and then further depicted into literal paintings. These allegorical and spiritual matter of religious scenes applied the principles composition and design, but the subjective spiritual motive. I believe my work should be conceptualised as more of a vertiginous complex, showing imitations of otherness and exploring the right of artistic theory. The influence of the sublime on my work allows my work the comprehensive experimentation as to how you can articulate moments which exceed comprehension. I believe water is a key factor of essentialism yet also a great representation of the power of nature formed from romanticism. It has such beauty which is unconceivable, it is difficult to describe, we need it to live, however within minutes its power has the capability to kill us. This is why much of my surreal work has relations to the sublime through the accord of using water. However an interesting juxtaposition to my work is the delicacy of the female form, not used in such a way to be sexualised, but for the purpose of women’s empowerment and narrative. This leads me onto my next inspiration and also past ‘ism’ that has helped form the creation of my work.

 The Artist who I looked at was, Julia Margaret Cameron. Cameron was a photographer in the Victorian era. The bulk of her work from being illustrative allegories based off religious and literary works. In the allegorical work in particular her work had a clear influence from that of Pre-Raphaelite. Her work has delicate limp poses with soft lighting. Her work was unconventional through the intimacy created through the long exposure, her subject moved and thereby leading the lens intentionally out of focus. There is a strong sense of allegory within her work, she creates a symbolism of a short story in order to demonstrate her family. The bulk of her work are depicts forms of being illustrative allegories based off religious and literary works. In the allegorical work in particular her work had a clear influence from that of Pre-Raphaelite. Her work has delicate limp poses with soft lighting. Her work was unconventional through the intimacy created through he long exposure, her subject moved and by leading the lens intentionally out of focus. This lead me further into looking at how unique it was to be a female influential photographer at the time. Her work is very different to anything that a man would produce. Women are looked at as pure and seen to have. loving relationship with family and sister in a clearly taboo and posed setting, almost table like. The has a strong juxtaposition to that of the male sense of photography at the time. The man’s eye and the photographic gaze, women historically are being looked at different though the representation is often eroticised and objectified.these naked figures seen as art for only the pleasure of men. However a female would show herself being empowered as a mother and ally clothed showing the sexism within the period and soon this leads onto larger postmodernism topics such as feminism and the fight for women’s rights and demand for less sexualisation of their bodies. This demonstrates the influence of females within my own work, and the slight male gaze onto the work of Walker. She expresses females emotions to be of importance, more than that of their bodies. The young women’s strong stature and colour possess power and starts off the discussion of the capability of women historically, and how they themselves should be considered as a ‘sublime’ being.

The approach of female nakedness creates an interdisciplinary approach reflected the themes of Pictorialism and the social influence of the male photographer at the time, However due to Tim Walker being a fashion photographer for the most part. I believe this piece from Cameron perfectly captures what the majority of her images are about, this being a glowing persona of childhood innocence and a relationship within the subject and the person taking the photos herself. The almost religious and heavenly light that she moulds her into the feminine aspect we would expect from a teenage girl. The evocation of spatial immensity is formulated to create a more fully immersive effect of space and light. This image, I believe starts discussions of a rich endeavour and the possibilities a young girl is able to have. It has been said by Edmund Burke, that ‘one source of sublime is infinity’ (E:Burke 1757) and through the directions of light shining upon her and the wisdom shown through the light, that she, is infinite.

My own imagery which is indicative of the influence of Pictorialism and you are also able to see a clear indication of the much more surreal elements within this work. It is once again composed in such a way you would not expect to see a women in a bath, it is a much more contemporary feel to the angle and the composition, it captures so many effects of how water and light can be used to form elements of indifference. Once more it shows water to be sublime within its more abstract beauty. The etymology of the sublime is derived from its boundless limits, formed of what emotions are given. The water here is a literal connection with something most angelic and magical. The small circles are heavenly with their softness and brightness of colour. The complimenting light purples and blues seemingly create an inventive of new life and beauty. The passion and vibrancy reflects that of a childish wonderment, creating a new passion of the sublime without pain.

To conclude, the creation of the Sublime itself is a rendered disinterest in aesthetic judgments and is the sentiment of what ethics the body believes they have been subjected to. Your emotions must be suspended for it to become abundantly clear, the orchestration of subjectivity of pleasure and pain is a private introspection which is acquired through a separate consciousness. Zhang Han said that, ‘the body is the only direct way through which I come to know society and society comes to know me. The body is the proof of identity, the body is language.’ As previously spoken about Romanticism and Pictorialism, where not simplify to derive an emotion which cannot be received by everyone the same, it is a political and social revolution of the way art should make you feel and what art is said to be. Surrealism is the modern experimentation of how emotions can be viewed and seen in many forms. This can be seen through the fashion work of Tim walker or more Pictorialist work of Cameron.  Walker shows his unique seeing eye not only to allow interpretation of the male gaze, but also his non sexualisation of women highlights his own influence of female Pictorialism, which can too can be seen through my work. To my mind the answer to my hypothesis ‘To what extent have the movements Romanticism and Surrealism, effected the view of the Sublime, shown through artists; Tim walker and Julia Margaret Cameron. Is that; The sublime is made for the purpose to evoke feelings of transcendence and has taken importance from Abstract Expressionism. The sublimity of a piece is swept over and people do not realise the extent that Romanticism and Surrealism that have formed the basis of what we feel in a piece. Overall it is what we make of a piece with our own unique feeling that is what we see. The innovation of Surrealism and Romanticism creates prosperity for more groundbreaking photography.