I have been looking through your blog posts and I’m concerned that you need to complete and publish more blog posts
You still have quite a few missing from tasks set before Christmas, eg. 1000 word mini-essays on Clare Rae/ Lewis Bush and Photography and Truth.
Overall your blog posts are also a little ‘thin’ in content and needs to be more ‘meat on the bone’ ie. more writing, more examples of images, experiments, hyperlinks to research/references.
Your analysis also needs to be more detailed and extensive going beyond the descriptive language of technical/ compositional to talks more about your interpretation, meaning and context of images and artists etc.
See my blog post here Critical Image Analysis for more help
Currently there are very few posts about how you are developing your research and writing your essay.
Please can you complete and upload missing blog post ASAP – especially
Essay plan and Introduction
Interim deadline for draft essay; Mon 4 Feb
Deadline for all CW, photobook, completed essay and all relevant blog posts demonstrating research > analysis > planning > recording > experimentation > evaluation > presentation is your MOCK EXAM on Mon 11 FEB.
Your project has great potential and you are an able and creative students – but evidence must be on the blog demonstrating your skills, creative processes and thinking.
Your target grade is a B but with there is no reason why you could not achieve an A-grade with the right amount of commitment and effort.
Make sure you evaluate your shoot and describe what you were focusing on in this shoot and how it supports/ develop your project
I have been looking through your blog posts and I’m concerned that you need to complete and publish more blog posts
You still have quite a few missing from tasks set before Christmas, eg. 1000 word mini-essays on Clare Rae/ Lewis Bush and Photography and Truth.
Overall your blog posts are also a little ‘thin’ in content and needs to be more ‘meat on the bone’ ie. more writing, more examples of images, experiments, hyperlinks to research/references.
Your analysis also needs to be more detailed and extensive going beyond the descriptive language of technical/ compositional to talks more about your interpretation, meaning and context of images and artists etc.
See my blog post here Critical Image Analysis for more help
https://hautlieucreative.co.uk/photo17ase/2018/01/10/critical-image-analysis/
Or use Photopedagogy method of analysis that you are familiar with from last year
https://www.photopedagogy.com/photo-literacy.html
Currently there are very few posts about how you are developing your research and writing your essay.
Please can you complete and upload missing blog post ASAP – especially
Essay plan and Introduction
Interim deadline for draft essay; Mon 4 Feb
Deadline for all CW, photobook, completed essay and all relevant blog posts demonstrating research > analysis > planning > recording > experimentation > evaluation > presentation is your MOCK EXAM on Mon 11 FEB.
Your project has great potential and you are an able and creative students – but evidence must be on the blog demonstrating your skills, creative processes and thinking.
Your target grade is a B but with there is no reason why you could not achieve an A-grade with the right amount of commitment and effort.
See tracking sheet below for full details