Evaluation, critique and analysis of my final response

This piece of work is a true representation of the past. It represents a discovery of forgotten things which brings a realization that this place was someones past; the history of lives we never even knew. There is great use of leading lines and depth of field within these photograph which help to direct the viewer around the piece as a whole. The carefully positioned pictures create a strong contrast and juxtaposition to the photos themselves which are completely wrecked and derelict. This use of contrast may be a reference to the atmosphere which once was present to how it appears to be now. This links to the way the hospital used to be run, probably smooth and regulated well, compared to the myths associated with it and how it looks now. Personally, I believe that viewers should appreciate the subjects of this work but keep them in mind as examples of humanity’s wastefulness and the impact society has on nature. I think that to make this piece of work better, I could have explored a variety of derelict sites as appose to only one. I could have also thought about the presentation more to create something more visually pleasing such as a 3D sculpture, incorporating my photos within it.

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