For my second shoot I decided to go out in slightly different weather conditions, on this day it was quite sunny which meant that the lighting in the photos was different and that activities going on outside created some more interesting things to photograph, because of the good weather I also was able to go on an open top bus which was particularly useful to get better angles and slightly clearer views of the things going on outside of the bus. For this shoot I went out for a few hours and took 4 bus trips to try and take photos of things happening in various areas. Below are a selection of what I think are some of my strongest images from the shoot unedited, overall I am pleased with how the shoot turned out and how I have succeeded to create some images slightly different to my first shoot, for some of my next shoots I plan to take the bus to more different areas but also to create some images earlier in the morning and later in the day and night so that and can have a final outcome with a progression of images where the lighting changes from morning to evening.
As discussed, I think your images are beginning to become something.
Do at least two more bus trips
For the book you need some other element eg.
text – interview your folks who worked in tourism or find quotes/ text from its heyday in 1950s-80s
map of Jersey – download one and manipulate in photoshop. Or even better draw a simple outline one and scan/ photograph to make it digital.
See book here by Nial McDiarmid
http://www.niallmcdiarmid.com/books.php
https://www.photobookstore.co.uk/photobook-crossing-paths.html
Archives: find images from Jersey during its tourism heyday. At the Societe Jersiasie Photoarchive they have a set of colour post cards from 1960s-70s-80s
Also show more experimentation with adjustments, colour, B&W etc