Evaluation of my Photo-Sequencing

Summary

The making process of my photo-book has been a challenging but enjoyable experience. The end product is that I have successfully designed a hand-made photo-book, printing off my photographs and placing them in a traditional photo-album I brought.

This process has required a large amount of work and effort. I will now evaluate the end result and refer to the stages and thought-processes behind this finished product.

Sequencing of my Photo-Book
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The sequencing design I have gone for is based on slowly building up context to my story; starting off slowly and revealing more clues as I go along.

I have started off with a very simple front cover by keeping the original brown cover as it is; not adapting or changing anything. I have done this because I want to images to speak for themselves, and to establish a degree of subtly straight away.

To further this sense of intrigue I have placed my images in a cardboard folder, usually used for storing paper documents. This idea was influenced by a similar designed evoked by Martin Parr in ‘Life’s a Beach’ in which he placed his photo-book in a cardboard style folder. I like this feature because it adds a sense of playfulness to my book – it is interactive and emphasizes the photo-book as an object in itself, to be significant.

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For the first part of my story I wanted to address immediately the theme of absence. To explore this idea in a subtle way I decided to put photo-corners into the first page of the story – which I have then taken out, leaving a page with photo-corners but with no photograph inside. My thought process behind such an idea is that the empty pages serve as a metaphor for the fact my Grandfather, who is the basis behind the story, cannot be photographed, and cannot therefore exist in any of my photographs. This sets up the idea therefore that  the images within the book are somehow all connected to this absence, telling a story about something which isn’t there. Like Toropstov’s work therefore, mine is very much a journey of discovery.

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I did not mention at the start of my photo-book that my Grandfather was no longer alive, nor do I even suggest that the story is based on him. This is because it will make it easier to build-up a narrative slowly and overtime, without giving anything away. The first two images of the narrative start to suggest the story is based around my Grandparents; the left-hand image is a old archival image and I have included the caption “my Grandparents wedding day – 1949”. The right-hand image is a close-up of my Grandmother holding her wedding ring  (which she wore when she was married to my Grandfather. The fact she is holding the ring does subtly imply the fact my Grandfather is no longer alive, a symbol of something which is no longer here; a object which connects to the past.

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The fifth page of my story –  consisting of two images on one page – relates to my Grandfather in a symbolic way. The images are of his shed in the back of my Grandma’s Garden, and the still-life is of the tools which he would have used. This use of symbolism is one of the main ways in which I have been able to replicate a sense of his presence. This use of symbolism extends the degree of intrigue behind the story because the viewer will not yet be able to fit. On the next page however, I have included the caption “Sommerleigh House, St. Peter. Where my Granddad grew up.”. This will invite the suggestion that there is a link between my Grandfather with page 5, and well as an implication of his presence throughout the entire story.

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For the next couple of pages I continued this process of taking candid images reflecting my journey of discovery; photographing my Grandma, her garden and the gates to the graveyard where my Grandfather is buried. The light-switch is a key point in breaking up the narrative, as immediately on the following page, I have jumped away from the present time line and to some degree theme, by including an archival image of my Dad. This begins a smalls break in the narrative of two images,one of a watch and one taken of the moon late a night, the latter in particular reflecting not reality but instead a state of mind.

 

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I would also consider these two pages as key images because they are very poetic images, designed to represent the the perspective of my Grandmother, photographing things that she would view going about her everyday activities. I have again connected my Granddad directly by including the caption, “Your Granddad served in WWII as a navigator for the RAF. He never spoke much about it”. This continues the viewers gradual introduction to my Granddad. On the following page a similar reflection can be shown, through an image of a Masai Mara statue and I have included a caption through which my Grandmother discusses her view of the time the family spent in Kenya. during the 1980s

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To again break the flow in the narrative, I have included five landscape images of the scenery of St Ouens. These images don’t show anything in particular and are more-so metaphors for the journey I have taken. In a way I think they represent my state of mind and mood when making this photo-book. As they don’t really represent anything they therefore have quite a low intensity and thus provide a nice break before the ending of my narrative.

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The penultimate image of the photo-book is one of my Grandparents in their Salvation Army uniform. My Granddad was nearing the end of his life by point and it is one of last photos ever taken of him. Even by this point I have not yet mentioned my Granddad is no longer alive, although his absence implies this. In this image I have included the caption “We planned to retire in 1986. Your Granddad wanted to visit his Brother Frank, in Australia”

 

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On the next page/final image I wanted the image of both my Grandparents in their uniform on the last page to contrast directly with this one – emphasizing the fact he is no longer here. I feel that this image is an extremely powerful image because it emphasizes the fact my Grandmother is still part of the Salvation Army, but is now doing so alone. The simple caption explaining that my Granddad died in 1985 aged 63, finalizes the narrative and clarify his absence. I felt that relating this caption with the image of my Grandmother alone, emphasizes the reality of this situation.

 

Photo Book Layout | Shrinking Violet

Photo Book | My Thoughts

I decided this week that I was going to make a photo book for my project as I have made some staged images and think that this will work really well with the short film that I created of my mum. I want it to look as professional as possible and for my work to stand out. I do not want to add the essay to the end of my photo book as for me it takes away from the images. I don’t want to have other photographers work in my own photo book as I want to exhibit my own work and to show my stylistic approach rather than evaluating someone else’s. I do have my essay on the blog and think that looks good enough. Editing together the photo book is going well and I am also adding in some quotes from my essay to bring more context to the photo book. I think that this is the best way to include my essay and is more original and interesting for my spectator rather than having to go through a huge chunk of text. I like to make my own quotes that hold impact and think that these look a lot better than an essay would and really embody the whole message that I want to get across in my images. I have really enjoyed making a photo book and think that it looks really great and professional as it all comes together.

Layout Idea | 1

This first idea consists of black and white staged images as well as images in colour that are of objects. I wanted to have some double page spreads as I really like the way it looks as well as a mix of colour and black and white. I like this idea but I am unsure whether or not it takes a bit away from the black and white images as they are supposed to be my main focal point. I have just been experimenting around with different layouts and am trying to find what looks best for my work. I don’t think that I will be using this for my final book as it isn’t strong enough and doesn’t look as professional as I would like it to look. This mainly just helped me get into Lightroom and how to move photos around and how to use the editing software to create the book. I feel that this design/layout is a bit all over the place with the colour and black and white images. I do think that it would look a lot better if I just stuck to having all of my images black and white and kept to a better sequence than this one. I still really like the double page spread and might use this in the future for other projects but it just doesn’t work as well for this particular project for me.

Layout Idea | 2

This layout is the one that I want to use as my final book. I think that it does look professional and is interesting for the spectator to look at. I really like that I have started with a quote of my own and ended the book with a quote of my own. I think this book is more effective as everything is in black and white so all of the images compliment one another. I tried to order my photos in such a way that represents how my mum cleans the house and in the same order that she actually cleans it. Starting from the kitchen and then ending in her bedroom this is the way my mum cleans the house. I decided to use few images as I only wanted to include my very best and my favourites. I think that this has worked out well and I have plenty of images to make an effective book. When creating this photo book I didn’t really have any photographers photo book in mind. I created something that made sense to me and that looked good for my project, I wouldn’t have been able to mimic someone else’s work or take inspiration from them as I know myself what I wanted to produce. I feel that doing this gave me more freedom to experiment and create whatever I wanted to without feeling that I need to create my book in a similar style to that of someone else’s.

 

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Quotes for book [my own]: 

Opening quote –  ‘I refuse to be a shrinking violet. I will not allow old tradition to consume my freedom and make me succumb to the societal norms that are expected of me

End of book quote ‘Gender defines everyone and, at times, can be limiting. It makes us feel that we need to belong and conform to the expectations placed on us at birth solely on whether we were born male or female.’

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Typology Layouts

From studying the Bechers work, I realised that when they formatted their images in grids, they took time in placing the images in a specific order, so that images in the same row or column would have similarities, and so I have tried to incorporate this into my Typologies.

Screen Shot 2016-02-26 at 10.35.22Within this image you can see similarities between all 8 houses, as well as neighbouring images, for example in the top left two images, they both have doorways with outdoor porches, and in the three images circled on the right, they all have the same windows. The bottom left two images also both have extensions and balconies.
Screen Shot 2016-02-26 at 10.58.50This image has a lot more comparisons, and the layout choice is more obvious than the last one, with the three images in the middle row being semi detached (attached only by garages, and not connected on the other side as well) and so their roofs are built in a different way. I prefer this typology over the first one, as there are more comparisons to be made with all the I’m ages, and the format is more like that of the Bechers’.

Essay final

How does my mum’s role as breadwinner abdicate from her culture?

“A Legend of the Strength of… Motherhood.” [20]

Motherhood is the state or experience of having and raising a child.

In this essay, the first thing I am going to do is analyse and compare the links between my personal study and Dorothea Lange’s Iconic ‘Migrant Mother’ photographs. I have chosen to analyse the photograph of ‘Migrant Mother’ In particular because it is such a well-known photograph with a powerful context behind it which is very interesting to me. Furthermore I have found that it relates to my personal study because my mother is also an economic migrant who came to Jersey In 1987 to work and create a better life for herself. Secondly, I am going to explore my mum’s work ethic, female traditional roles and how my mums’ role as a breadwinner of my family abdicates from her culture. My mum was born in Madeira which means that the female exceptions of her are very different to the role that she ‘plays’ now.  To explore this concept I have been photographing my mum in her working environment over a period of months. I am also going to include my personal archive photographs to compare my mum’s role before and now.

Migrant Mother by Dorothea Lange

‘Humanity is a hypothesis that has run its course’ (Aragon 2002:21) – Dorothea Lange: The Heart and Mind of a Photographer

In 1939 during the Great Depression Dorothea Lange was working on a project for the Farm Security Administration (FSA), which was created to help combat American poverty. The aim of this project was to capture the effect that the Great Depression had on people. According to Dorothea Lange, this photograph was taken when she was driving past a camp site that caught her eye and she then stopped and approached ‘Migrant Mother’ and within 10-15 minutes she had taken 6 different exposures. Dorothea Lange said that ‘Migrant Mother’ had been living off frozen vegetables from the field and wild birds the children caught and that they could not move on, because her husband had just sold the tires from their car to buy food. On the other hand Florence Owens Thompson who is ‘Migrant Mother’ herself says that the encounter happened differently. She said that the photograph was taken on a camping site where they had set up temporarily while her husband had gone to get the car radiator repaired. Lange had also promised that the photographs would not be published, however she sent it to San Francisco News as well as to the Resettlement Administration in Washington, D.C. Since then the photograph has become an Icon and a representation of the Great Depression time period.

Propaganda is the formation, of photographs or other sources of information, especially of a biased or misleading nature, used to promote or publicize a particular political cause or point of view. Some people argue that the photograph of Migrant Mother was used as propaganda to raise awareness of the 1930’s from a specific political point of view, which is the depression and poverty. The photograph is of a mother and her children who are subjects that everyone can relate too and therefore this creates a lot of empathy from the viewers. The photographs were also used to raise money; however none of that money was given to Migrant Mother herself. However some of the money that was raised was given to the people on the crop farm where the photograph was originally taken. The Migrant Mother photograph was then appropriated on to many things such as stamps and cartoons; so much so it soon became the most reproduced photograph in the history of photography.

Social reform is a kind of social movement that aims to make gradual change by changing certain aspects and opinions of society, rather than making rapid fundamental changes. A reform movement is distinguished from more radical social movements such as revolutionary movements.  A Danish migrant, Jacob A. Rils published a photo book called ‘How the Other Half Lives’ which was based on the slums of Manhattan. This then triggered photographers such as Lewis Hine and Dorothea Lange to document through photographs industrialization of American working class families. This brought to the attention the need for housing and labour reforms. These photographs then led to what we know now as photojournalism and documentary photography which are used to tell stories, raise awareness and document events.

One of the first most obvious links that I found between my personal study and Dorothea Lange’s photographs of ‘Migrant Mother’ is that both our main subject matters are woman and mothers which is an important factor although, I am photographing my own mum.  Another link that I found was the social class both Migrant Mother and my mother are immigrants of a working class even though they are portrayed at two different ends of the spectrum. Florence Owens Thompson as a more of a ‘typical’ migrant mother with no job and living in poverty. Whereas my mum is portrayed as someone who has immigrated but is now in better conditions. Finally, the idea of documenting gendered photographs is a link which both our work incorporates. Photo historians have said that Lange is the ‘mother’ of documentary photography. They have also argued that being a female photographing other women has made her photographs more compassionate. ‘Migrant Mother’ upholds the idea of mother and child and symbolises the universal concept of motherhood. Following on from this I have used an archive photograph of me and my mum as an equivalent of a personal photograph which represents motherhood.

Culture is the customs, arts, social institutions, and achievements of a particular nation, people, or other social group. We often expect individuals to present themselves within the norms of their culture. We create prejudice assumptions about the way they think, act and live based on their culture.  Through this personal study I am hoping to break assumptions about cultural stereotypical role and give my mother, her own identity.

” In an era of face recognition software and data sharing between governments and corporations, the only way to protect your identity, and hence your privacy, may be to destroy all pictures of yourself” – Paul Wombell: British journal of photography (2010)

In my personal study I have chosen to obscure my mums face with objects and make her identity unknown. The only time we see her full identity is at the beginning of the book where I have included an archive photograph of me and my mum. I chose to obscure my mums face because I think it links in with her job title, as a domestic I think my mum’s work is done ‘behind the scenes’ and not taken much notice of. I think obscuring my mum also links in with my mum’s culture because often in a Portuguese society men have the most ‘dominant’ roles therefore woman are mostly in the background. I represented this in my photographs by ‘hiding’ her face with an object. When I first started photographing I did this unconsciously, it was only when I looked back at the photographs that I realized it would work really well as a concept.

“I’d watch my brothers leave every morning to go to school whilst I would stay at home all day to help my mother” – Adelina Freire

This project is about my mother who immigrated to Jersey in 1987, from a disadvantaged background in the hopes of having a better life. My mother is the eldest child of six, who grow up in a village called Machiço on the east side of the Island of Madeira. After leaving school at the age of 9 to work on the land to provide for her family, she developed a hard working ethics. Statistically, the Portuguese are the third most hard working nation in Europe on average working nine hours per day. Currently, she is the breadwinner within my family working in five different jobs all within the domestic area. My mum works from Monday to Saturday; an average working day for her would be working from nine am until eight pm in two to three different locations. This is very different from what is expected of her traditionally and even today, in Madeira a woman of my mums age would likely not be working instead looking after her children. The culture within the Portuguese society is very male orientated, the men are portrayed as very masculine and as the ‘dominant’ sex, although they are respectful towards women many men still occupying the most important positions.  Women were expected to behave in a certain way; had very specific roles. My mum was taken out of school at the age of 9 to fulfil this role. Their main priority was to stay at home to do household chores and look after the children although my mum helped her parents by working on the land. An example of this stereotype is my grandmother who has never had a job before. Up until my mum moved to Jersey this was the role she had not by choice, however now she is currently the breadwinner within my family therefore she challenges the concept of gender stereotypes within society and her culture. One of the reasons my mums is the breadwinner of my family is because of circumstance, originally my dad used to be the breadwinner, he worked at a bakery for 30 plus years this lead him to develop chronic back pain which now incapacitates him from working. As a result of this my dad now takes on ‘stereotypical’ female roles such as doing some household work, cooking and looking after me and my brother.

In conclusion, after doing research and photographing my mum over a period of months I have come to the conclusion that my mum’s role as the breadwinner of my family has abdicated from her culture and way of life. Now that she is working in five different jobs, she has taken on the role the breadwinner which is normally the man’s role which means she has less time to household work which is what woman within her culture do. Not only that but I feel that my mum has come out of the ‘shadow’ that women in marriages are in, by this I mean that my dad Is no longer seen as the most ‘dominant’ sex and there is more of an equality between them.

As a woman from a Portuguese background, I see my future as being very different to the one that my mum has encountered. With the aspiration of continuing my education and going to university.  It’s likely that I will never have to work more than one or two jobs and that I will not have to work in a labour intensive job.

Photobook editing

 

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After experimenting with different front covers including a plain white cover, I chose this photograph because I think it is one of my strongest photos and it’s also a key image in the story telling process. I also experimented with different back covers, I was originally going to have a blurry photograph of my mum cleaning, however after arranging the order of the photographs within my book I found that the photograph of my mum with the flowers didn’t fit in with the sequence although it is one of my favorite photographs. I then tried it as the back cover and found that it worked  much better with the front cover due to the colours and was a much stronger image. I chose to put the title Domestic on my mums back because I think it works well  as symbolism of a ‘label’.

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My inspiration for the inside of the book was ‘Mimosa Bloom’ by Rita Puig I. choose this book as an inspiration for my photo book design because we are both female photographers with a similar background photographing our mothers although the context is different. I also like the way that she has laid out the book, with portraits and and object opposite. In my book I have used a mixture of this layout with portraits of my mum cleaning and an object within that location or a photograph of the location itself. I also put key images over a double page spread to emphasize this.  I also made some strong photographs in full bleed which I think makes the viewer feel like they are in the room. The final thing I did with the photographs is I sized them at 20pt I did this mostly with objects to show that they are not as important as the portraits however they are essential to tell the story properly. Throughout the whole sequence I tried to keep a consistency in photograph size and I was continuous about matching colours.

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For the final part of my book I ended it with photographs of my mum at home which i photographed before and after she came back from work. I used this as the last ‘stage’ of the book with the other ‘stages’ being photographs of her at different work locations. I did this because I think it was a nice way to conclude the book. I began the photographs of my mum at home with a photograph of my cat, because I thought this was a good way to break up the photographs and give the viewers a sense of something more personal.  I have also added quotes onto some pages which are facts about the Portuguese working culture. I think this helps to narrate the story and gives the viewer some more insight into my mums culture. I now need to add my final essay into the back of my book along with some illustrations.

Designing my own photo book:

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When designing my photo book I was weary of overcrowding and putting too many unneeded photographs or quotes. Therefore, before I began by design I researched photo books which had been created through Lightroom in order to grasp an understanding of how to use the programme. I knew already I wanted to reflect Laia Abril’s style from her project The Epilogue. The essay needed to feature photographs from the photographers I had spoken about in it. However, I wanted it to remain looking clean and professional. 

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I included a variety of different image styles, for example I wanted to use landscape shots in order to represent the places that remind me of my grandfather. I also have included close ups for the detail, portraits of my grandmother and still images of the items and objects of my grandfather’s that my mother kept. It was important that the narrative followed in an appropriate sequence so that it makes chronological sense and aesthetically pleases the eye. 

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Before I placed the photographs in their order I developed them slightly, I adjusted the exposure and contrast to make sure the lighting of the image was right. I also amended the clarity and detail so the photograph would look more interesting and intricate. Cropping was also essential so those images which were either scanned in or needed to be similar to another image.