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Question:How has Boltanski, Abril and Toroptsov represented the concept of capturing the invisible and reflecting the meaning of memory through the medium of photography?

Introduction:

Someone once said that you die twice: when you die the first time and when somebody finds a photo of you and no longer remembers who it shows.’

We are made up of fragmented memories and forgotten dreams. Our entirety rests in the fate of old letters, burnt photographs and meaningless possessions. We never question the invisible, it is as though we are on a relentless pursuit to try and capture the invisible.  We abide by the rules and limitations that are enforced by the concept of death. But what happens to those who become untouchable, those who are no longer part of the flux. Their existence becomes empty and lost, they are no longer perceptible to the eye. Yet we still feel impossible and unexplained connections to the spiritless. We yearn to cherish the ‘good’  memories and except the restrictions we are faced with regarding mortality. In doing so, the feeling of life is created, the tangibility of pleasure and pain enters our worlds and consumes us. But, photographs hold heritage and meaning, they have a depth of knowledge and feeling to them. Photographs capture single moments of existence. They can tell a narrative of a second in a stranger’s life in an instance. Whether it is personal, isolated, private or rare, it is has an essence of being and timelessness. The allure of time, is its youthfulness. Time is the cure for it never fails to reveal the truth. ‘Human life is embedded in time: we remember the past, we plan for the future and we live in the present. We swim in an ever-rolling stream.’ 

I am exploring how the invisible can be captured and portrayed through the medium of photography. And why memories hold such a powerful influence over our past, present and future. I want to find out what makes a photograph meaningful, what gives the photograph reality and how through photography the memory of a person can live on. My project focuses on exploring the invisible through three female generation’s memories; this includes my grandmother, my mother and myself. These distinctive view points will enable my project to become more personal and really seek the depths of my grandfather’s life. I think memory is more than simply remembering a once present thought, but it is about connecting with the past in order for the past to live on. 

Essay Plan

The theme for my essay is going to be the concept of Love. I have chosen this theme because my grandparents have been married for 51 years and are so perfect for each other. I split the the theme of love into 5 sections which I think are most appropriate and most important in my Grandparents lives. Over the past three months I have been collecting photographs, archive material and film where I have been capturing their lives from five different perspectives; music, Jersey, Wales, Faith and Family. I have really enjoyed using my family as my personal project as I am able to as I have been able to use your

Possible questions;

how do  Larry Sultan’s and Sam Harris’ photographs of their family represent/ interpret the concept of love.

.Essay question: hypothesis

Opening Quote- need to find.

intro; 250- 500 words.

PG1- Larry Sulton

PG2-Sam Harris

PG3- your work and responses

Conclusion

Bibliography (List all of your sources)

Bibliography:

Bibliography:

Boltanski, (1999), ‘Christian Boltanski: Menschlich’. KATALOG Journal of photography & video, (Vol. 11 No. 1 1999): 53-56.

Goldblatt. L. (2013), ‘Still Here‘. Germany, Hatje Cantz

La Grange. A. (2005), ‘Basic critical theory of photographers‘, in: Barthes. R. (Ed) (2005), ‘Roland Barthes, Camera Lucida’. Great Britain: 

Bibliography and quotes

These are my resources where I have gathered research from:

  • Germann. M, Gorner. M, Zander. T (Eds) (2010), Katherine Avenue Larry Sultan Gottingen: Steidl

introduction to quot’quote’ (Germann 2010:14)

  • Burbridge.B, Celia.D (Eds) (2013) Photoworks, Family politics.  Brighton: Grande Parade

introduction to quote  ‘quote’ (Williams.V 2013:85)

  • Hattersley-Smith.K, Spenser.J (Eds) (2006), Photography: A Cultural History 2nd edition, Mary Warner Marien. London: Great Russell Street

http://www.americansuburbx.com/2011/10/roswell-angier-roswell-angier-on-larry-sultan-pictures-from-home-2006.html

http://larrysultan.com

http://www.americansuburbx.com/2011/10/roswell-angier-roswell-angier-on-larry-sultan-pictures-from-home- (Roswell Angier, (2011), americansuburb.com

http://www.theaustralian.com.au/life/weekend-australian-magazine/sam-harris-the-middle-of-somewhere-and-photographs-of-a-new-life/news-story/df8ba352e7e9a3a20549f9e25eab6842 (The Telegraph, London 2015)

 

 

ESSAY PLAN

1.Think of a hypothesis and list possible questions.

The use of archival photographs in photography
Describing the contrast between past and present photographs
How Sarello and Casanova’s work share similarities
How Julian Germain captures loneliness but uses bright colours in his work to show this
2.Essay Plan: make a plan that lists what you are going to write about in each paragraph.

One paragraph focusing on the use of archival images in an essay
Another focusing on the type of work created by Sarello and another on the type of work created by Casanova and then compare similarities and differences
Maybe a paragraph focusing on how Germain captures moments that show his loneliness
3.Finish a draft version of your introduction (500 words) and hand in Mon 11th Jan.

essay structure

Think about an opening that will draw your reader in e.g. you can use an opening quote that sets the scene. You should include in your introduction an outline of your intention of your study e.g. what and who are you going to investigate. How does this area/ work interest you? What are you trying to prove/challenge, argument/ counter-argument? Include 1 or 2 quotes for or against. What links are there with your previous studies? What have you explored so far in your Coursework or what are you going to photograph? How did or will your work develop. What camera skills, techniques or digital processes in Photoshop have or are you going to experiment with?

Produce a photographic response to your investigation in Personal Study. You must plan and produce at least another 3 photo-shoots in the next 3 weeks (e.g. responding to photographers subject-matter, style, form, aesthetics, specific skills, techniques, methods)
Continue to review your responses and shootsand experiment with your pictures appropriate to yoru intentions Lightroom/Photoshop e.g. cropping, change colour balance/ b/w, brightness/ contrast, blurring/ movement, blending/ montage techniques.
Select your best experiments and picturesand include in your Personal Study for analysis and comparisons.
PLANNING, RESEARCH

Personal Study Question

I have now decided on how to phrase my title question for my Personal Study on the Bechers.

How did the Bechers Typology of industrial architecture influence a new generation of artist?

This title will allow me to explore everything I had planned on writing about; Who influenced them and who they influenced etc.

Harvard Referencing System

Harvard Referencing: Guide. Harvard is a style of referencing, primarily used by university students, to cite information sources. Two types of citations are included: In-text citations are used when directly quoting or paraphrasing a source.” ~https://www.citethisforme.com/harvard-referencing

Reference lists are created so that if readers want to look at the sources in more depth themselves, they can. To make this possible reference lists will usually include various bits of information including the:

  1. Name of the author(s)
  2. Year published
  3. Title
  4. City published
  5. Publisher
  6. Pages used

Generally, Harvard Reference List citations for a book by one author follow this format:

Last name, First Initial. (Year published). Title. Edition. City: Publisher, Page(s).

For a book with two or more than one author the format is as follows:

Last name, First initial. and Last name, First initial. (Year published). Title. City: Publisher, Page(s).

 

For example with one of the books I have been looking at, the reference would be:

Becher, B., Becher, H. and Zweite, A. (2003). Typologies. Germany: Schirmer/ Mosel München, (Page number of included quote etc.).

 

For Chapters in an Edited book:

Last name, First initial. (Year published). Chapter title. In: First initial. Last name, ed., Book Title, 1st ed.* City: Publisher, Page(s)

The edition for the book is only included if it isn’t the first edition.

For Print Journal Articles:

Last name, First initial. (Year published). Article title. Journal, Volume (Issue), Page(s).

For citations from a website or database:

Last name, First initial. (Year published). Article Title. Journal, [online] Volume(Issue), pages. Available at: URL [Accessed Day Mo. Year].

There are many other sources, for example blogs, court cases, conference proceedings, dissertations, DVD’s, Email’s etc, but above are the main examples of how to use the Harvard Referencing System.

Hypothesis of overall Personal Study

Objectives:

  • Establish coherent and sustainable links between your own practical work with that of historical and contemporary reference.
  • Show evidence for an on-going critical and analytical review of your investigation – both your written essay and own practical work in response to research and analysis.

Hypothesis: Possible questions to investigate

Within my personal study, there is evidence of various techniques. These include: Portraiture, Documentation, Landscape, Abstraction and Reflections on Photography (themes of Aesthetics, Codes, Truth, Seeing, Looking)

Questions to consider concluding my overall hypothesis:

Portraiture

Does a portrait tell us more about the person portrayed or the photographer?

Here is a link to an interesting article by Canon, who released a project directed to the relationship between the camera and the person.

Canon Experiment Article – http://petapixel.com/2015/11/04/6-photographers-asked-to-shoot-portraits-of-1-man-with-a-twist/

After reading this article, I strongly believe that a portrait can be re-represented in any way. The photographer is the pivitol force within a photo-shoot. Emphasis to strong stereotyping and styles are reflected throughout the article, but with persuasion photographers perceive an image in a different way, therefore reflecting the photographer more.

Can personality and identity be expressed in a portrait?

Visual Arts –

  •  Portraits contain clues about the people pictured in them that can tell us things about the subjects’ cultures, identities, traditions, and roles in society.
  • Portraits can express how people think about themselves and their world.
  • Portraits can include symbols that reference interesting aspects of the people in them.
  • When creating a portrait, an artist makes many artistic choices that affect how we understand the image.
  • Artists make choices about media, style, background, and embellishments to visually describe themselves or others

What are the differences/ similarities in a formal or informal approach to portrait photography?

What makes an iconic Photograph?

What are the Influences of the Old Masters and other painters on modern photographic portraiture?

What are the key elements if Portraiture and Intimacy?

How Can Photography reflect inner emotions such as fear and isolation?

Documentary and Street photography:

Is it possible for photography to capture moments in time objectively and truthfully?

Examining the documentary aesthetics: A photograph should not be manipulated, so that its authenticity, veracity and sense of realism can be maintained?

What is the relationship between photography and realism?

How can photography bear witness to the ways of life and events of the world?

What is the relationship between Henri Cartier-Bresson’s theory of the ‘decisive moment’ and subjectivity?

What are the intentions of Voyeurism and the nature of observation and intervention in documentary photography?

Landscape photography

Issues in Landscape Photography: Romantic or idyllic representation of nature vs culture and the man-made world.

What is beauty in landscape photography?

How does people control, interact and construct the environment in which they live?

In what way has the work of Ansel Adams influenced Joe Cornish?

To what extent could the work of Ansel Adams be considered spiritual?

What is the Meaning behind William Eggleston?

How Is William Eggleston At War With The Obvious?

What was so different about the ‘New Topography’ exhibition in 1975?

Two Photographers, One Aim: Preserving nature. Looking at the different approaches to landscape photography between Ansel Adams and Robert Adams.

Abstraction:

Two photographers, one aim: Looking at the different approaches to abstract photography between Eliot Porter and Aaron Siskind.

In what way can abstraction make visible what is invisible in the natural and urban landscape?

Reflections on Photography; Aesthetics, Codes, Truth, Seeing, Looking

Examining the documentary aesthetics: A photograph should not be manipulated, so that its authenticity, veracity and sense of realism can be maintained?

 

 

 

 

Essay Planning | What To Include

This is basically my current thought process of what I want to include in my essay and to see what is relevant to my findings. I want to develop  further in my essay the work of activist groups and organisations as well as incorporating the work of Claude Cahun and Cindy Sherman. I find this the most interesting and want to find out more about a lot of it. I also want to add in some media theorists like Laura Mulvey who talks about the male gaze and what audiences and spectators will expect to see in film, photography and art. I am still unsure as to what question I want to ask as there is so much to talk about. I think that I will need to pinpoint one specific part of the whole topic and focus on that and give an in-depth understanding of this rather than giving a more generalised essay about the entire movement of feminism as it is such a huge and broad topic.

Title/opening quotation: 

title ideas – ???

– possible opening quote – “some people have told me that they remember the film that one of my images is derived from, but in fact I had no film in mind at all.” – Cindy Sherman
– possibly use a quotation from my mother when interviewing her
– find a quote from a feminist activist

Introduction plans | What’s in it?

– brief synopsis of what I want to find
– artist references (Cindy Sherman and Claude Cahun)
– possibly mention the Pussy Riots and Femen (add own opinion)
– what are my goals for the whole project
(make sure to have a clear argument or opinion that remains strong throughout)
– focus in on one or two specific areas of feminism [housewives and fashion]

Paragraphing | What to focus on

– make individual paragraphs about Claude Cahun and Cindy Sherman as well as cross referencing and comparing the two to one another
– mention modern day (present) movements within feminism especially in Russia and Ukraine with Femen and Pussy Riot – talk about the controversy within these movements and with other feminists
– talk about my own work and how I have responded to all of this [shoot of my mum and then re-staging those images myself to parody them in a sense and the work of gender equality within the fashion industry]
– link in my own work and its relevance to the movement of feminism
– mention the movement of feminism and how it all started with the Suffragette movement and now into the third/fourth wave of feminism
– has my work been influenced by my chosen artists or does it contradict/go against their work

Conclusion | Creating a final judgement

– come to a final judgement about everything and refer to the question and hypothesis
– give a final judgement similar to what I was trying to say in the introduction
– talk about if my initial thoughts and judgement are the same now as they were before. Have I proved the point I wanted to make or disproved it?

Personal Study: Ideas and Possible Format

Personal Study – Typology

For my Personal Study I am going to mainly focus on looking and Bernd and Hilla Becher and their work with typology and buildings, I chose to study this as architecture greatly intrigues me and I wanted to look into something based around Architecture and buildings.

As well as looking at the Bechers, I want to research their link to the new topography movement, who influenced them, who they influenced and how their photography has changed certain elements of photography for everyone.
Essay Question: … ?
Opening quote – Introduction
Chapter 1
– Bechers and link to new topography movement
Photographers to look at:
– Robert Adams
– Lewis Baltz
Chapter 2
– What and Who influenced the Bechers?
Photographers to look at:
– Albert Renger-Ptzsch
– August Sander
– Karl Blossfeldt
Chapter 3
–  How did the bechers influence a new generation of photographers?
Photographers to look at:
– Thomas Struth
– Andreas Gursky
– Candida Hofer
Conclusion
Hopefully giving my essay this structure will help me to create a better study, and will help to make sure I cover all areas of what I am wanting to talk about.