Essay Writing

Week starting Monday the 18th January 

Objectives and Criteria from the syllabus 

Be aware of some of the methods employed by critics and historians within the history of art and photography.
Demonstrate a sound understanding of your chosen area of study with appropriate use of critical vocabulary. – use for image analysis
Investigate a wide range of work and sources
Quotation and Harvard System of Referencing

Use quotes to support or disprove your argument
Use quotes to show evidence of reading
Take notes when you’re reading…key words, concepts, passages etc.
Write down page number, author, year, title, publisher, place of publication so you can list source in a bibliography
Use Harvard System of Referencing…see Powerpoint: harvard system of referencing for further details on how to use it.
Here is an overview of an essay structure. See below for a more detailed breakdown on what you could focus on in each paragraph.
Blog: Produce a number of posts that show evidence of the following:

Essay: Complete writing paragraphs 1 , 2 & 3 in your essay

Paragraph 1 Structure (500 words) : Use subheading. This paragraph covers the first thing you said in your introduction that you would address. The first sentence introduces the main idea of the paragraph. Other sentences develop the subject of the paragraph.

Content: you could look at the following…exemplify your hypothesis and introduce your first photographer. Select key works, ideas or concepts and analyse in-depth using specific model of analysis (describe, interpret and evaluate) – refer to your hypothesis. Contextualise…what was going on in the world at the time; artistically, politically, socially, culturally. Other influences…artists, teachers, mentors etc. Personal situations or circumstances…describe key events in the artist’s life that may have influenced the work. Include examples of your own photographs, experiments or early responses and analyse, relate and link to the above. Set the scene for next paragraph.

Include relevant examples, illustrations, details, quotations, and references showing evidence of reading, knowledge and understanding of history, theory and context!

Paragraph 2 Structure (500 words) : Use subheading. In the first sentence or opening sentences, link the paragraph to the previous paragraph, then introduce the main idea of the new paragraph. Other sentences develop the paragraphs subject (use relevant examples, quotations, visuals to illustrate your analysis, thoughts etc)

Content: you could look at the following…Introduce key works, ideas or concepts from your second photographer and analyse in-depth – refer to your hypothesis…Use questions in Pg 1 or add…What information has been selected by the photographer and what do you find interesting in the photograph? What do we know about the photograph’s subject? Does the photograph have an emotional or physical impact? What did the photographer intend? How has the image been used? What are the links or connections to the photographer in Pg 1? Include examples of your own photographs and experiments as your work develop in response to the above and analyse, compare, contrast etc. Set the scene for next paragraph.

Include relevant examples, illustrations, details, quotations, and references showing evidence of reading, knowledge and understanding of history, theory and context!

Paragraph 3 Structure (500 words) : Use subheading. In the first sentence or opening sentences, link the paragraph to the previous paragraph, then introduce the main idea of the new paragraph. Other sentences develop the paragraphs subject (use relevant examples, quotations, visuals to illustrate your analysis, thoughts etc)

Content: you could look at the following…Introduce key works, ideas or concepts from your third photographer and analyse in-depth – refer to your hypothesis…Use questions in pg 1 and pg 2 or add…How does the photograph compare or contrast with others made by the same photographer, or to other images made in the same period or of the same genre by other artists. How does the photograph relate to visual representation in general, and in particularly to the history and theory of photography, arts and culture. What are the links or connections to the photographers in pg 1 and 2? What are the similarities, differences or links and connections? How does this work compare to yours? Include examples of your own photographs and experiments as your work develop in response to the above and analyse, compare, contrast etc. If more paragraphs are required, set the scene for the next paragraph.

Include relevant examples, illustrations, details, quotations, and references showing evidence of reading, knowledge and understanding of history, theory and context!

William Eggleston

William Eggleston is an American photographer who is known for working with colour photography. Using his home environment  Memphis and Mississippi as his subject matter, Eggleston became famous for monumentalizing everyday subjects in his large-format prints. Eggleston captured Large amounts of his home environment, making his images very personal to him. William then went on to more commercial photography where he continued colour photography and highly saturated images in an awe for people to see insight of his life. I felt William was an idea artist for me to work from as his works his way around peoples lifestyles in an interesting and captivating way. I feel his utilising images are powerful in a sense that each individual has a very different routine in life and that different moments spark different opportunities. In this instance, every person has a journey and within that journey are multiple opportunities and goals within a day to day basis. I am going to continue by using Eggleston’s work as a guideline and inspiration into capturing random moments with an open mind.

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Huntsville, Alabama, CA. 1970

“Sometimes I’ll leave the house with a fully loaded camera and end up with nothing. Its just about being there. Anywhere. Even the most uninteresting, ugly or boring places can for an instant become magical to me”.

I really like this quote from Eggleston, he understands about there being a time and place. I feel my ambitions for my project may take of in the style of Eggelston, as he knows how to compose a story. Above, “Huntsville, Alabama, CA. 1970″ shows a strong image of a man with a high working class status of his time. His trimmed clothing and wide open spaces signifies his detailed identity of power and wealth. Eggleston’s work is very symbolic, an iconic representation of humans in a position of various power and status. I wish to base this aspect primarily around my own family, so the reader is able to understand a story without a composed narrative.

William Eggleston’s Memphis: Photographs by Joanna Welborn

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William Eggleston at the offices of his archive in Memphis, Tennessee, August 2008

William Eggleston’s groundbreaking reinvention of color photography in the 1970s established him as one of America’s most original and influential artists. In Autumn of 2008, photographer Joanna Welborn made portraits of William Eggleston at the offices of his archive in Memphis, Tennessee.  Welborn then spent time photographing throughout Memphis, at some of Eggleston’s favorite haunts as well as making photographs that evoke Eggleston’s own groundbreaking color images. Welborn here discovers a more intimate side to Eggleston, exploring the reminiscences of where he spends his time creating new ideas and media, the heart of his lifestyle and time. In my own project, I wish to accomplish a similar response so that the viewer could understand the relationship between my parents and our house.

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Welborn captures some of Eggleston’s past times and interests, other than just his workplace. This significant representation makes the reader understand the diversity of his lifestyle in a broader depth.

Here is a link to the Article about Joanna’s project on Eggleston:  http://www.cdsporch.org/archives/2590

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‘The Democratic Forest’

 

 

 

Essay Writing

Week 18-19: 18th – 29th Jan

DEADLINE: Hand in draft version of your essay Fri 29th Jan.

Objective: Criteria from the Syllabus

  • Be aware of some of the methods employed by critics and historians within the history of art and photography.
  • Demonstrate a sound understanding of your chosen area of study with appropriate use of critical vocabulary. – use for image analysis
  • Investigate a wide range of work and sources
  • Develop a personal and critical enquiry.

Quotation  and Harvard System of Referencing

  • Use quotes to support or disprove your argument
  • Use quotes to show evidence of reading
  • Take notes when you’re reading…key words, concepts, passages etc.
  • Write down page number, author, year, title, publisher, place of publication so you can list source in a bibliography
  • Use Harvard System of Referencing…see Powerpoint: harvard system of referencing for further details on how to use it.

ESSAY STRUCTURE

See below for a possible essay structure. Further help can be found here essay structure or see link here The Royal Literay Fund

Essay title: Hypothesis

Opening quote: Choose a quote from either one of your photographers or critics. It has to be something that relates to your investigation

Introduction (250-500 words). 

Think about an opening that will draw your reader in e.g. you can use an opening quote that sets the scene. You should include in your introduction an outline of your intention of your study e.g. what and who are you going to investigate. How does this area/ work interest you? What are you trying to prove/challenge, argument/ counter-argument? Include 1 or 2 quotes for or against. What links are there with your previous studies? What have you explored so far in your Coursework or what are you going to photograph? How did or will your work develop. What camera skills, techniques or digital processes in Photoshop have or are you going to experiment with?

Paragraph 1 Structure (500 words) : Use subheading. This paragraph covers the first thing you said in your introduction that you would address. The first sentence introduces the main idea of the paragraph. Other sentences develop the subject of the paragraph.

Content: you could look at the followingexemplify your hypothesis and introduce your first photographer. Select key works, ideas or concepts and analyse in-depth using specific model of analysis (describe, interpret and evaluate) – refer to your hypothesis. Contextualise…what was going on in the world at the time; artistically, politically, socially, culturally. Other influences…artists, teachers, mentors etc. Personal situations or circumstances…describe key events in the artist’s life that may have influenced the work. Include examples of your own photographs, experiments or early responses and analyse, relate and link to the above. Set the scene for next paragraph.

Include relevant examples, illustrations, details, quotations, and references showing evidence of reading, knowledge and understanding of history, theory and context!

Paragraph 2 Structure (500 words) : Use subheading. In the first sentence or opening sentences, link the paragraph to the previous paragraph, then introduce the main idea of the new paragraph. Other sentences develop the paragraphs subject (use relevant examples, quotations, visuals to illustrate your analysis, thoughts etc)

Content: you could look at the following…Introduce key works, ideas or concepts from your second photographer and analyse in-depth – refer to your hypothesis…Use questions in Pg 1 or add…What information has been selected by the photographer and what do you find interesting in the photograph? What do we know about the photograph’s subject? Does the photograph have an emotional or physical impact? What did the photographer intend? How has the image been used? What are the links or connections to the photographer in Pg 1? Include examples of your own photographs and experiments as your work develop in response to the above and analyse, compare, contrast etc. Set the scene for next paragraph.

Include relevant examples, illustrations, details, quotations, and references showing evidence of reading, knowledge and understanding of history, theory and context!

Paragraph 3 Structure (500 words) : Use subheading. In the first sentence or opening sentences, link the paragraph to the previous paragraph, then introduce the main idea of the new paragraph. Other sentences develop the paragraphs subject (use relevant examples, quotations, visuals to illustrate your analysis, thoughts etc)

Content: you could look at the following…Introduce key works, ideas or concepts from your third photographer and analyse in-depth – refer to your hypothesis…Use questions in pg 1 and pg 2 or add…How does the photograph compare or contrast with others made by the same photographer, or to other images made in the same period or of the same genre by other artists. How does the photograph relate to visual representation in general, and in particularly to the history and theory of photography, arts and culture. What are the links or connections to the photographers in pg 1 and 2? What are the similarities, differences or links and connections? How does this work compare to yours? Include examples of your own photographs and experiments as your work develop in response to the above and analyse, compare, contrast etc. If more paragraphs are required, set the scene for the next paragraph.

Include relevant examples, illustrations, details, quotations, and references showing evidence of reading, knowledge and understanding of history, theory and context!

Conclusion (500 words) : Write a conclusion of your essay that also includes an evaluation of your final photographic responses and experiments.

List the key points from your investigation and analysis of the photographer(s) work – refer to your hypothesis. Can you prove or Disprove your theory – include final quote(s). Has anything been left unanswered?  Do not make it a tribute! Do not introduce new material! Summarise what you have learned. How have you been influenced? Show how you have selected your final outcomes including an evaluation and how your work changed and developed alongside your investigation.

Bibliography: List all the sources that you used and only those that you have cited in your text. Where there are two or more works by one author in the same year distinguish them as 1988a, 1988b etc. Arrange literature in alphabetical order by author, or where no author is named, by the name of the museum or other organisation which produced the text. Apart from listing literature you must also list all other sources in alphabetical order e.g. websites, exhibitions, TV/ Videos / DVD/ Music etc.

DEADLINE: Hand in draft version of your essay Fri 29th Jan.

DON’T FORGET TO MAKE PHOTOGRAPHS & EXPLORE YORU IDEAS!!

  1. Produce a photographic response to your investigation in Personal Study. You must plan and produce at least another 3 photo-shoots in the next 3 weeks (e.g. responding to photographers subject-matter, style, form, aesthetics, specific skills, techniques, methods)
  2. Continue to review your responses and shootsand experiment with your pictures appropriate to yoru intentions Lightroom/Photoshop e.g. cropping, change colour balance/ b/w, brightness/ contrast, blurring/ movement, blending/ montage techniques.
  3. Select your best experiments and picturesand include in your Personal Study for analysis and comparisons.

We will begin work on editing and designing a photobook next week. If you don’t have any content i.e. text and images you can’t make a photo book!