collab project log

working title: an eye for an eye

meeting no.4

phase: pre-production

log line: you can steal our eyes but you cant steal our passion

inciting incident: wakes up blind

rising incident: loses artistic ability, frustration builds, feels lost without art

climax: breakdown scene throws paint around on canvas

falling action: pans out and reveals beautiful art

context: as rishi sunak possibly becomes PM, he plans on phasing out degrees like film which don’t have a set earning potential. This short film is commentary on how you can put restrictions on creativity but eventually art will always prevail. (socio-political)

meeting no. 5

Working Title: ???

Role (s) Undertaken: Screenwriter (Jack) Editor (Tom) Sound (Ruby) Director/Cinematographer (Kai)

Date/Secretary: 31/10/2022 (Ruby)

Time: 60 minutes

Phase: Pre-production

Meeting Number: 5

Present/Apologies: present: Editor (Tom) Sound (Ruby) jack (screenwriter) Director/Cinematographer (Kai)

Agenda:

Outcomes:

discussion

SMART Targets for next meeting date:

revival of hand in the sand?

new ideas

By next meeting 14/07/2022:

collaborative project

Meeting 31/10/2022

Location: St. Ouen’s Village (by the church, fields, sunset concert)

Script: Done, just needs a few changes

Actors: 1 actor confirmed

STUFF TO DO:

Ask for more actors/find friends who do drama to take part even as supporting characters.

Send script to people helping (after edits and changes to cut time)

Comp Checklist

Empire of the Sun (1987) & Grave of the Fireflies (1988)

Script written & draft checked?

Initial script re written based on one set of teacher feedback?

Source List Compiled? (At least 10 things – books &weblinks)

V/O recorded?

Still images sourced (if required e.g. film posters for intro)

Film clips uploaded ready for the edit

Timeline assembled on premiere (sound & vision)

Initial video draft checked

Initial video draft amended

Final video uploaded to M drive

Source list uploaded to M drive

COMPARATIVE ESSAY – Progress Check

Script written / Draft checkedDONE
Initial script re-written based on one set of teacher feedbackDONE
Source list compiledDONE
V/O recordedwill complete in half-term
Still images sourcedDONE
Film clips uploaded ready for editwill complete in half-term
Timeline assembled on premiere
Initial video draft checked
Initial video draft amended
Final video uploaded to M drive
Source list uploaded to M drive

comparative study checklist

script writtendone
script checkedget done 19/10/22
re written based off teacher feedbackhopefully 20/10/22
source list compileddone
voice over20/10/22
still images sourcedover half term
time line assembledhalf term
video draft checkedhalf term
video draft ammendedhalf term
final upload on m drivefirst day back
source list uploaded to m drivefirst day back

Comparative Study

Script written & draft checked?

Initial script re written based on one set of teacher feedback?

Source List Compiled? (At least 10 things – books &weblinks)

V/O recorded?

Still images sourced (if required e.g. film posters for intro)

Film clips uploaded ready for the edit

Timeline assembled on premiere (sound & vision)

Initial video draft checked

Initial video draft amended

Final video uploaded to M drive

Source list uploaded to M drive