28 INT. INVESTOR’S CENTER – (LATER THAT) DAY (DEC ’87) 28
As others Brokers bark into phones, Jordan sits, phone
cradled in his shoulder, making notes. A few beats, then:
JORDAN
(into phone)
Mr. Fleming, good morning, Jordan
Belfort with Investor’s Center in
New York City. You recently
responded to one of our ads…
A few of the other Brokers glance over, eavesdropping.
JORDAN (CONT’D)
The reason I’m calling is that
an extremely exciting investment
opportunity crossed my desk today.
Typically our firm recommends no
more than five stocks per year:
this is one of them…
A few more Brokers look over…
JORDAN (CONT’D)
Aerotyne International is a
cutting edge tech firm out of the
Midwest, awaiting imminent patent
approval on a new generation of
radar equipment…
LATER. Now all the Brokers listen in rapt attention.
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JORDAN (CONT’D)
— so if Aerotyne’s shares rise
to only a dollar — and our
research indicates they could go
much, much higher — your profit
on a mere three thousand dollar
investment would be upwards of
fifty thousand… That’s right,
you could pay off your mortgage.
Seconds tick by; an eternity, then he starts writing:
JORDAN (CONT’D)
Four thousand dollars, will
that be check or money order?…
Thank you, sir.
Jordan hangs up, scrawls out a “buy” ticket.
JORDAN (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Just like that I made two grand.
The other guys looked at me like
I’d just discovered fire.
Toby Welch and the other cave-Brokers stare at him.
TOBY WELCH
How’d you fuckin’ do that?
28 INT. INVESTOR’S CENTER – (LATER THAT) DAY (DEC ’87) 28
As others Brokers bark into phones, Jordan sits, phone
cradled in his shoulder, making notes. A few beats, then:
JORDAN
(into phone)
Mr. Fleming, good morning, Jordan
Belfort with Investor’s Center in
New York City. You recently
responded to one of our ads…
A few of the other Brokers glance over, eavesdropping.
JORDAN (CONT’D)
The reason I’m calling is that
an extremely exciting investment
opportunity crossed my desk today.
Typically our firm recommends no
more than five stocks per year:
this is one of them…
A few more Brokers look over…
JORDAN (CONT’D)
Aerotyne International is a
cutting edge tech firm out of the
Midwest, awaiting imminent patent
approval on a new generation of
radar equipment…
LATER. Now all the Brokers listen in rapt attention.
15.
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JORDAN (CONT’D)
— so if Aerotyne’s shares rise
to only a dollar — and our
research indicates they could go
much, much higher — your profit
on a mere three thousand dollar
investment would be upwards of
fifty thousand… That’s right,
you could pay off your mortgage.
Seconds tick by; an eternity, then he starts writing:
JORDAN (CONT’D)
Four thousand dollars, will
that be check or money order?…
Thank you, sir.
Jordan hangs up, scrawls out a “buy” ticket.
JORDAN (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Just like that I made two grand.
The other guys looked at me like
I’d just discovered fire.
Toby Welch and the other cave-Brokers stare at him.
TOBY WELCH
How’d you fuckin’ do that?
28 INT. INVESTOR’S CENTER – (LATER THAT) DAY (DEC ’87) 28
As others Brokers bark into phones, Jordan sits, phone
cradled in his shoulder, making notes. A few beats, then:
JORDAN
(into phone)
Mr. Fleming, good morning, Jordan
Belfort with Investor’s Center in
New York City. You recently
responded to one of our ads…
A few of the other Brokers glance over, eavesdropping.
JORDAN (CONT’D)
The reason I’m calling is that
an extremely exciting investment
opportunity crossed my desk today.
Typically our firm recommends no
more than five stocks per year:
this is one of them…
A few more Brokers look over…
JORDAN (CONT’D)
Aerotyne International is a
cutting edge tech firm out of the
Midwest, awaiting imminent patent
approval on a new generation of
radar equipment…
LATER. Now all the Brokers listen in rapt attention.
15.
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JORDAN (CONT’D)
— so if Aerotyne’s shares rise
to only a dollar — and our
research indicates they could go
much, much higher — your profit
on a mere three thousand dollar
investment would be upwards of
fifty thousand… That’s right,
you could pay off your mortgage.
Seconds tick by; an eternity, then he starts writing:
JORDAN (CONT’D)
Four thousand dollars, will
that be check or money order?…
Thank you, sir.
Jordan hangs up, scrawls out a “buy” ticket.
JORDAN (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Just like that I made two grand.
The other guys looked at me like
I’d just discovered fire.
Toby Welch and the other cave-Brokers stare at him.
TOBY WELCH
How’d you f*ckin’ do that?
Justification of Creative Work/Pre Production
Justification of creative work in one chosen film production role (8 marks ) INQUIRY The post on why you chose the screenplay you worked on.
In our screen play my group attempted to re create the phone scene from the “Wolf of Wall Street” when Jordan single handed gets an investment using sales techniques to create money for the company with our twist on it with less swearing at a low budget. We will purposefully cross the line to shake up the audience using cinematography just like the secondary characters who are shocked in the background after they make an investment. We will film inside a cramped office to replicate the amount of space available in their business with the shear scale of their enterprise. In the beginning of the short clip we aim to glorify the main character by watching his movements and seeing an extra move out of the way for him as he leaves the lift which shows power and dominance. As a group (me, Cianan and Bradley) decided that Brad would be the best to play Leonardo Di Caprio as he has acting experience and would be able to re create the required accent of an American. I then played the director creating ideas such as the lift shot and changing the angle. Cianan then acted as cinematographer using different angles in the confined spaces and using chairs as a steady cam. To keep this film family friendly we want to change some of the script to remove swear words and make some alterations to the script so we can keep the scene within a one minute timeline or anything suitable.