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Filters
Screenplay for comedy short
INT – DAY – LOUNGE
Two characters – 1 and 2 – are seen lying on a couch fast asleep, the rubbish from what seemed to be a party litter the room. Suddenly the doorbell buzzes very loudly and wakes both characters up. 1 however tries to fall back asleep and so 2 gets up and answers the door.
Unknown man
“Ah hello I’m Mr 3, 1’s Landlord, is he in?”
A hand from out of scene gives 2 a note. When opened it reads – ‘IM NOT HERE – in a rushed and messy handwriting. 2 stands close to the door so as to block view into the house, however not completely.
2
“Oh you know what, he JUST left for work”
right after saying this 1 rushes across frame
Mr 3
“was that-
2
“ahhh no that was just someone from the party last night”
Mr 3
“PARTY?! oh no there is no parties allowed and 1 knows this, i definitely need to speak to him now.”
2
“Oh no don’t worry we didn’t have the party here, we…. used the neighbours house ?”
Mr 3
“You broke into the Taylor’s house?! That’s highly Illegal-“
a loud bang and “Ow” from the side of the frame that 1 disappeared to interrupts Mr 3
Mr 3
“right let me see right now”
the camera follows Mr 3 walking into the house only to see 1 peeking out of a small cupboard, 2 quickly sits on the cupboard, shutting 1 in so he cannot be seen followed by another “OW” from 1.
2
“See? Nothing”
Mr 3 stutters a bit in confusion
2 leads Mr 3 out of the house and faces him away from the house with his arm around Mr 3’s shoulder at the same time we can see 1 running into frame form the right and then out of frame again into a different room.
2
“look, I’m REAALLY hungov- busy, i’m really busy so please come back another time, Ok? Bye”
Before Mr 3 can argue 2 has shut the door.
Ideas for comedy short
basic idea – landlord comes to tell tenant that the rent is overdue, tenant tries hard to avoid the landlord seeing him.
shot pacing very important in comedy, additionally its very important to have a significant visual comedic style for example i will be taking inspiration from Edgar Wright. specifically the way things enter and leave the frame in funny ways and matching scene transitions. This helps comedy from being purely sound based – dialogue and helps it to be seen in the performance of characters – physical comedy, and the way the audience sees the scene: as if we can see straight through the scheme that’s fooling a specific character but its funny to watch it confuse them.
For example: the landlord knocks on the door and the tenants friend who stayed the night since yesterdays party opens up with the tenant still asleep in the lounge. The landlord asks to see the tenant however the friend takes it upon himself to distract the landlord so the friend can escape, the camera can see the tenant run past the door from one side of the frame to the other in a comedic way – the landlord clearly sees him but before he can complain the friend distracts him again. The landlord demands to be let in so the camera pans inside to see the friend quickly hide the friend in a funny way, this carries on. It is funny because the camera – the audience’s point of view, sees right through their scheme but the landlord is getting very confused, this is much more funny than just a shot, reverse shot of dialogue.
inspiration for cinematography
I have been inspired by films like mystic river and Interstellar. They both have some amazing shots like the scene in mystic river where Jimmy Markum’s (Sean Penn) daughter is found dead. He breaks out in rage attempting to see the body, he is in disbelief and the high rotating camera angle expresses his mindset. This type of shot is often associated with psychotic behavior and after the death of his daughter, Jimmy’s attitudes change and is then depicted as being the victim of the story and his mentality deteriorates after this event, This shot in particular signifies the beginning of his downfall.
In Interstellar there is an extreme long shot which is used throughout the film showing the spacecraft drifting through space. In this particular shot the spacecraft is shown next to a planet which emphasizes how unimportant there voyage is compared to the size of the universe. It demoralizes the characters and there mission. Christopher Nolan plays around with the idea of time in Interstellar and i believe these extreme long shots show the importance of time and how insignificant the human race is compared to the ancient planets.
Comparative study question points
- How do the specific historical contexts of the Second World War and the Cold War inform the narrative conventions of Film noir and Neo noir ?
- How does Blade Runner and the Maltese Falcon present masculinity? and how do those portrayals differ from each other ?
- How did the portrayal of women of women in these two films draw from the social context of the time?
- How does Blade Runner achieve genre hybridity and how many elements of classic noir does the film contain when it is compared from the Maltese Falcon ?
- How do the male and female characters portray the gender norms of the time and how are they reinforced ?
Comparative study general plan
Focus – how elements of feminist film theory are represented through the horror genre
Question – How are elements of the feminist film theory represented in the horror genre?
Films – Alien (1979, by Ridley Scott) and Happy Death Day (2017, by Christopher Landon)
Areas to talk about:
- The final girl trope
- Second wave feminism
- Social and historical context
- Possibly geographical context? (binary oppositions of US and UK production?)
- Technical elements of scenes and shots
Comparative films
i will be comparing these films based on how the serial killer genre has changed between 1968 and 2007
similarities:
both based on true events
The Boston Strangler is the name given to the murderer or murderers of 13 women in the Boston, Massachusetts area during the early 1960s.
The Zodiac Killer is the pseudonym of an unidentified serial killer who operated in Northern California from at least the late 1960s to the early 1970s.
Guillermo del Toro “all the formal elements become quasi-hypnotic. It puts you in a trance-like state that makes everything operate at a deeper level”
DENNIS LIM reporter for the LA times
“It’s a paean to obsession, a dream match of subject and filmmaker”
Cultural context – Alien
Alien was released in 1979, a time period where second wave feminism was in full force after the introduction during the early-mid 1960’s. This influenced the types of characters being made and produced in films, because there was a greater need for stronger female characters. Script writer Dan O’Bannon focused on writing a diverse range of characters to really resonate with the audience. As a result, the characters included in Alien were older than the typical characters included in a horror film and there was also a gender mix. Since most of the characters get killed off fairly early on within the film, keeping Ripley as the sole survivor although she is a female, was a bold move to represent a strong female character. But this was needed drastically at the time to prove that the second wave feminism was moving in the right direction, so the character of Ripley represents the necessity of strong women for the movement of second wave feminism.
Second wave feminism developed the interpretation of a female character in horror films. The movement showed the implied inferiority of women to men, and the unfair systems implemented. In horror film, women were typically portrayed as ‘damsels in distress’ and usually saved by men. An example of this prior to the second wave feminism movement is the character Lila Crane from Psycho (1960, by Alfred Hitchcock) who relies on Sam Loomis to save her. But second wave feminism argued to change this, and during the late 1960’s there was a resurgence of new, strong and empowered female characters. ‘Alien’ was produced towards the end of the movement, which had resulted in the introduction of many new strong female characters. Over the period of the movement, there became a development of female characters from victims to survivors, which led to Clover defining the term ‘final girl’.
Although there are several examples of ‘final girls’ evident in horror during the early 1970’s, many of these lack actual development from survivors to heroines and although there was a resurgence of female empowerment; they typically just make it to the end without facing off with their antagonist. An example of this is Sally Hardesty from ‘The Texas Chainsaw Massacre’ (1974, by Tobe Hooper). Although she is cited as one of the earliest examples of a ‘final girl’ and displays some qualities: she does not avenge against Leather face or the family and is eventually rescued at the end of the film, by a man.
Ultimately, second wave feminism inspired a new wave of strong female characters. There was a slow but visible decline in overly-sexualized female characters, and a growth in female protagonist who began to survive towards the end of the film. However, there was still an emphasis on survival. This represented women still as victims, who barely clung on to their lives and were typically rescued by men (see Hardesty and Strode) instead of taking revenge on their pursuers. Arguably, Ripley is one of the earliest examples of a strong ‘final girl’, she outlives her (mainly male) crew by fighting to survive and finally defeats the alien alone with no assistance from anyone. The development of ‘final girls’ were slow, but stemmed from the second wave feminism movement, many showed strong qualities during the early 1970’s but Alien is one of the first horrors which actually shows a strong heroine who does not rely on anyone aside from herself to survive but also defeat the alien.
The particularly later half of the 1970’s was a major decade for film, most specifically horror and sci-fi. From horror we got: ‘Halloween’ (1978, by John Carpenter) and ‘Black Christmas’ (by Bob Clark, also 1974). All of these films utilized the final girl trope, and were a major success. They all showed a strong female character at the forefront of each plot, not only surviving but battling against the antagonist; usually male. These films were also influenced by second wave feminism, which showed the immediate impact that the movement had on filmmakers and the horror industry has a whole because it led to the creation of strong female protagonists rather than just helpless victims. Similarly, science fiction was enjoying a major run at arguably the top of the film industry perhaps due to the massive success of ‘Star Wars’ (1977, by George Lucas). The influence of such success in both genres from the hybrid would have a profound impact on Alien as there was a large target audience for Alien who would’ve been willing to see the film based on the other successful horror and sci-fi films released at the same time.
Final project Director screenplay draft
Bold Text is the action the criminal is doing while doing the monologue.
Fade to black
Criminal
Remember a time when you were so innocent, no one could see who you really were. I can tell you I never learnt or felt that one particular feeling, from day 1 my path was always to a life of crime. You can always try and be better but it never feels right. Black Screen for entire part of this speech.
EXT. PATH. DAY
Criminal
At age of 15 I was already out my 2nd visit to juvy for petty pickpocketing, Walking down a road in prison uniform and a bag. and that wasn’t the worst thing I did at that age,
EXT. CAR PARK . DAY
Criminal
I vandalized, stole cars, robbed, and even started working for a local car salesman to vandalise vehicles Scratching a logo into the car, also doing transferring jobs if you know what I mean. Putting a package into the bin being cautious. Did I feel guilty? No. Why would I, it was good pay, this made me feel alive. Counting the money in his hand.
INT. LIVING ROOM .DAY
Criminal
Yeah there is danger to this life. Yet if you learn early enough and you are good at it why stop, what am I doing wrong at the end of the day? Anyone caught in my cross fire deserves it. They deserve it by the way they speak of me, look at me or come at me. At the end of the day I get reputation as the more I do brings me more respect and power than having some sort of dead ass job. I am hated by the uncaring higher class yet they didn’t realise what I would become one day. One day they would be asking me for favours, or to corrupt systems, or certain assignments what could send me down for multiple life sentences. Shows beer bottles, money ash trays in dark room with their feet up on the table.
INT. CARPARK. NIGHT
Criminal
To them I Satan, just happened they were in my hell and being tortured and controlled by me, it was great I was a King with power, followers, money, but I could never change, I was going down a darker path I refused to turn back. When people talk about origin stories they are usually tragic or heroic mine is neither, I am what I have always been, a cold blooded son of a bitch. Is chasing someone with a gun
Running person
Tell Kurt Gilligan I didn’t co-operate with the Balts Group…please.( Very scared) then shoots it.
INT. ROOM. DAY
Criminal
If you want to hear everything you’re going to have to listen from the fucking beginning. (This part sounds like it’s a recording). A person in a suit looking at them self in the mirror.
Female Officer
We’ve got him!
Sound Design 2
Sound Designers for sci-fi, Predator sound designer, Charles. L Campbell (E.T). These sound designers are the inspiration for this scene as they are able to combine common earthly sounds with unusual, unheard of sounds to create a sci-fi experience.
Sound designer action, Mark Mangini (Mad Max), Dane Davis (The Matrix). These sound designers have inspired me to use common action film sounds but at a quick pace and at a slow pace as that allows to build a more entertaining scene overall compared to having a scene with normal sound effects.