SAMPLE QUESTION #1 (BEATRICE)

The costume for men from a privileged background
Highway man ‘look’



You are performing the role of Beatrice from her first appearance in Act One to her
exit at the end of Scene Three. Explain how you would create comedy from Beatrice’s disguise as Federigo. [or]

You are performing the role of Beatrice from her first appearance in Act One to her
exit at the end of Scene Three. Explain how would you want to present Beatrice to the audience?

You must make specific reference to the social, cultural and/or historical context of
The Servant of Two Masters in your answer.
[25 marks]


Look at the 2 versions of the question – What is the difference? {Open & Closed Questions}

This is a typical essay with an essay structure – What is that?

[Remember (What /Statement – How / Example – Why /Explain – Link to the question or Social/Historic/reference.]

Your answer needs to be about 5-6 paragraphs in length.

[What should go into the Introduction?] – Pair talk

Title, author, date, style (Commedia) genre (comic farce) = 1 line

Some context for the question: who she is, why is she coming to Venice, that this is the 1st time we/audience sees her. =1-2 lines

Any historical or social information relevant to the Question.

What your intention as a performer would be. =1 line

Write your own – 5 mins

Explore HOW you would generate comedy from Beatrice first appearance (DISCUSS IN PAIRS)

Write your own paragraph – 7 mins {focus: a costume malfunction or a physical/vocal mishap}

Compare your Intros and 1st paragraphs to the ones below.

SAMPLE ANSWER – ‘DRAMA & THEATRE    

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[Remember Structure: What /Statement – How / Example – Why /Explain – Link to the question or Social/Historic/reference.]                          

You are performing the role of Beatrice from her first appearance in Act One to her
exit at the end of Scene Three. Explain how would you want to present Beatrice to the audience?

You must make specific reference to the social, cultural and/or historical context of
The Servant of Two Masters in your answer.
[25 marks]

Introduction: {Link to the question}

‘A Servant to Two Masters’ (So2M), written by Goldoni in 1745, is a fast, action-driven, comic play that has many well-known characters from the Commedia tradition. Beatrice is inspired by the stock characters of the Lover and the Master, but in this play her role is complicated by the fact that she is dressed in men’s clothing (disguised as her dead brother Federigo). She is searching Venice for her lover Florindo. As a result for most of the play she presents as a typical male Master. Women in the 18th century were not meant to be adventurers, but remain subject to the wishes of their father’s and husband’s.  Therefore, seeing a woman dressed and behaving as a man would have been a source of amusement for the audience. It is this comic potential that I wish to draw out in the opening scenes.

Paragraph 2: What costume / 1st impressions would you make?

As Beatrice, I would wear a man’s costume loosely based on the stock character of The Captain (a Commedia character who doesn’t appear in Goldoni’s play.) I would have a hat with feather, a cloak, riding boots, a sword and an eye-patch.  I would talk in a ‘foreign accent – possibly French to indicate that Beatrice is from Turin and an outsider to Venice.  

In order to create comedy from Beatrice’s entrance and clearly show the difficulty she has in maintaining her deception, I would say to Pantaloon, “Your humble servant, sir,” as I bow, take off my hat and throw the cloak over my shoulder puffing out my chest with confidence.  Then, as I realise I am revealing my female cleavage, I would quickly turn away and cover myself with the cloak. In a fluster, I would have a voice break on the next words, “Federigo Rasponi” here my voice would revert to a higher feminine pitch.  I would stop, then cough and say the name again in a deeper more stereotypical male voice whilst adopting the macho stance of standing, hand on sword, with my legs shoulder width apart. 

Paragraph 3: choose a different moment and perhaps a different aspect of the performance – e.g: if paragraph 2 was about Beatrice’s costume and physical appearance then Paragraph 3 could focus on vocal delivery.)

Remember to include quotes – what Beatrice says AND also what is said to her that she must react to!

Later in the scene when Brighella recognises me as a woman I would want to portray her sincerity and distress as it looks my true identity is about to be revealed. I would move across to him and bring him downstage so that my aside, “Please don’t give me away” can be said quietly and in a feminine voice for the audience’s hearing only. This would reveal to them (if they haven’t already done so) that Federigo is a woman in disguise. There would be an urgency in my tone. At the same time I would lift up my eye-patch so that he can see that I am actually only pretending to have an injury.  I could also wink with this eye to indicate a secret ‘agreement’ between Brighella and Beatrice on the line, “love could drive e to far greater excesses.” 

Conclusion: The fact that the audience will quickly understand that I am a woman in men’s clothing, but the other characters (except Brighella) don’t, makes them ridiculous and allows the audience to laugh AT Pantaloon, the Dr and others, (which is part of the social satire that Goldoni was intending.) On the other hand it makes me (Beatrice) out to be a more sympathetic character acting out of more noble motives like true love and in the hostile environment of men (an under-dog style story). 

45 mins = Band 4 20/25  Mark scheme – “thorough and thoughtful response” 

I think this has the right balance between social and historic facts and knowledge and specific examples of HOW the part could be acted. It has a range of interpretations for Beatrice. It has enough terminology and the actions/vocal choices fit the character and her situation.  There is use of quotes and a reference to audience. To move into Top Band 5 this needs possibly another paragraph and more perceptive comments about audience perceptions and a bit more creative acting ideas.

SAMPLE OF CLEAR WRITING AT A LEVEL

Read the SAMPLE below carefully.

Highlight it:

Colour 1 = References to historic/ social play knowledge

Colour 2 = Specific examples of acting or direction

This writing below came from a Y12 student in their 1st attempt at writing about So2M. This is a great example of clear, concise (no waffle) writing with historical and social knowledge coming naturally from the analysis. There is an obvious knowledge of theatrical terms like stage directions, physicality and conventions like the aside. The only area for improvement would be to use a lot more quotes to hang ideas onto specific moment of the play.

The question they had was:

How would you direct the first two scenes of Servant of Two Masters?

For the very opening of the play in Act 1 scene 1 when Silvio and Clarice are about to be engaged, I would have the two Lovers center stage looking at each-other, they are holding hands and are as close to each-other as they can be: this is to emphasize the intimacy and the genuine love they have for each-other. This will also be underlined through their speech. Often they will clock the audience to show that they wish to express their love to the whole world. I would place them center stage so the audience can understand that the focus of the scene is on these two characters, however they are not down stage center, The reason for this will come later in the scene. As for how the two will act, I would direct them to use an overly-dramatized style of delivery. This would involve large hand and arm gestures that are balletic and return to the heart. Their speech would be breathy to indicate they are feeling strong passions and well articulated to indicate their high level of education, This will invoke some comedy in the audience as is the aim of Commedia dell’arte, but also shows that the love these two have is genuine. It will also work in contrast later on in Act 2 when they hate the sight of one another. Since they are not masked I would expect big facial expressions from them, one would react with glee when the other speaks for instance.[Quote needed]  The two will follow similar traits: Silvio would not (in this scene) act masculine, he too will be like Clarice in a floating joyful, gentle, innocent manner, this will show the audience that the two really work as a pair.

In terms of staging for other characters in Act 1 Scene 1 I will focus on proxemics and the other characters will be stationed according to their relationship with the two lovers. Pantaloon will be by the side of his daughter and Lombardi will be at the side of his son. This will help establish information as to the relationships with each character to the audience even before there is dialogue. Brighella would be downstage left on the Pantaloon side and Smeraldina will be down stage right on the Lombardi side. If you looked at the stage from a birds eye-view it would resemble a triangle with the two servants at the bottom moving up to the masters and the lovers at the top. Even though Brighella isn’t a servant in this play in normal Commedia he is and so I wanted to hearken back to that idea. He is a friend of Pantaloon however so that is why he is on the brides’ side to show his connection to the Pantaloon household. Smeraldina is a servant to Pantaloon as well however she is on Lombardi’s side in down stage right because that is the furthest point from Clarice, this shows discord between master and servant between Smeraldina and Clarice, the two still like each-other but in the context of this scene Smeraldina is envious of Clarice love. Downstage right is also a good position for Smeraldina to break the fourth wall which I intend her to do when she speaks much like an aside where only the audience can hear.  If I had an extended cast I would also have one extra member playing a Zanni like servant giving drinks to Pantaloon, Lombardi and Brighella but not Smeraldina to underline that she is not considered an important individual to serve. A Zanni character would also hearken back to original Commedia dell’arte.

Example: How would you direct the first two scenes of Servant of Two Masters?

For the very opening of the play in Act 1 scene 1 when Silvio and Clarice are about to be engaged, I would have the two Lovers center stage looking at each-other, they are holding hands and are as close to each-other as they can be: this is to emphasize the intimacy and the genuine love they have for each-other. This will also be underlined through their speech. Often they will clock the audience to show that they wish to express their love to the whole world. I would place them center stage so the audience can understand that the focus of the scene is on these two characters, however they are not down stage center, The reason for this will come later in the scene. As for how the two will act, I would direct them to use an overly-dramatized style of delivery. This would involve large hand and arm gestures that are balletic and return to the heart. Their speech would be breathy to indicate they are feeling strong passions and well articulated to indicate their high level of education. This will invoke some comedy in the audience as is the aim of Commedia dell’arte, but also shows that the love these two have is genuine. It will also work in contrast later on in Act 2 when they hate the sight of one another. Since they are not masked I would expect big facial expressions from them, one would react with glee when the other speaks for instance.[Quote needed]  The two will follow similar traits: Silvio would not (in this scene) act masculine, he too will be like Clarice in a floating joyful, gentle, innocent manner. This will show the audience that the two really work as a pair.

FIRST EXAM STYLE QUESTION – DIRECTOR

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As a Director, how would you direct the actors in Act 1 Scenes 1 & 2 (So2M) to reveal the essential characteristics of their character, key relationships at the start of the play and any sub-textual issues. Make reference to the audience and to your aims as director?

[what do you need the audience to understand]

You don’t have to reference all the characters but you should have…

PREPARATION: before you write out a full essay answer, it is useful to consider the following. Your answers should be short paragraphs.

  • Where would you place the characters at the start of the play and why?
  • When you your change this placement (BLOCKING) and why? [Needs quotes/lines for your Justification]
  • How would you direct PANTALOON to reveal an essential TRAIT of his character?
  • How would you use STATUS as a way to create comedy? [Think the INVERSION of status – arrival of Truffaldino]

Areas on the stage (where is the most PRIVATE part of the stage?)

YOU SHOULD MAKE SURE THAT YOUR ANSWER COVER

PARAGRAPH 1 – The lovers

PARAGRAPH 2 – Pantaloon / Dr Lombardi

USEFUL SENTENCE STARTERS

Eg: “My intention as a director at this point in the play would be to show/reveal/ focus on…”

“It is important for the audience to understand X at this point in the play so, as a director, I would ……”